Message-ID: <46309asstr$1074571805@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-Message-ID: <008001c3ded8$ba777900$345b413e@km3> From: "Kjell Madsen" X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2800.1165 X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Mon, 19 Jan 2004 23:08:10 +0100 Subject: {ASSM} Paradise Island - Ingrid's Tale [0/4] (preface) Lines: 210 Date: Mon, 19 Jan 2004 23:10:05 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: newsman, hecate, hoisingr <1st attachment, "Ingrid, part 0.doc" begin> Paradise Island - Ingrid's Tale, part 0 of 4 By Kjell Madsen, 2004 Preface The intention with this preface is to help you decide if this story is something for you. The story itself is in parts 1-4. Caveats: This story contains sexual themes, words, and situations. If you are underage, don't read it. If you don't like this sort of stuff, don't read it. This is not a 'stroke-story' -- if that's what you are looking for, you are wasting your time. Story codes: Framework: mf, Ff, f-solo, SciFi Ingrid's narration: ff, mff, FF+, M+F+, Fdom, rom, slow, caution These are the general codes that I think best describes the story as a whole. I put in caution because there are elements in various chapters that, technically, might deserve harsher codes. However, these elements are not described in detail. See chapter breakdown below for additional codes for the prudish. On the other hand, hardened ASSM habitus might argue that the whole story should be labelled 'no-sex' -- there *is* sex in it but it is described without 11-inch penises, orgasmic shrieks with multiple exclamation marks, floods of sperm and vaginal fluids, and similar graphical details. Plea for feedback: I love feedback but seldom get any. Please, send an e-mail and tell me what you think to kjell (DOT) madsen (AT) home (DOT) se. The fine print: This story is copyrighted 2004 by Kjell Madsen, all rights reserved. Please ask for my permission first if you want to repost it or use it in any other way. Archiving by ASSTR is permitted and encouraged. Background: Five years ago, I posted a story (Paradise Island -- The Adventures of a Slave Girl) about a young, ambitious journalist (Linda Plummer) who went to a resort on a tropical island to investigate whether a job as 'hostess' really was something else. She fell in love with a native young man (Peo) and stayed on the island, even though she had to accept a (well paid) contract as 'slavegirl' together with ten other girls. The story follows her life for two years until she marries her lover at the end. (It was my first story and I think I'm a better author now. However, it has a certain naive charm, and I might post a revised version if there are sufficient demands for it.) The present story occurs in the same 'universe' as my earlier story and the main character (Ingrid) had a role in that one too. As a Swede, it amused me to put a Swedish girl as a minor character among the slavegirls, and to make her very different from the usual stereotype of 'Svenska Flicka' (i.e. tall, blond and blue-eyed). However, Ingrid had other ideas -- she became almost a major character, and she actually married the billionaire who owned the resort. The story-line didn't allow her as much space as she deserved, and the thought of making Ingrid the main character in her own tale has grown on my mind for some time. In fact, Ingrid nagged me to write her tale, almost from the completion of the previous story, and I finally gave in. (Yes, I know -- Ingrid is a completely fictional character but she, or the part of my subconscious that impersonates her, seems like a 'real' person to me.) I hope that you will find the story of her life appealing. The major part of the story is written in first person, with Ingrid herself as narrator. There is also a surrounding 'framework' in which Ingrid is telling her tale to her great granddaughter (Jenny). Because of its length, the story has been split into four parts and this separate preface (counted as part 0). This division in parts is arbitrary and has nothing to do with the story-line. A more logical division might be: the prologue, which introduces Ingrid (96) and Jenny (16), living in a space-habitat, and makes Ingrid agree to tell the tale about her life; chapters 1-3, which give a background to Ingrid's character; chapters 4-11, which tell the original story from Ingrid's point of view; chapters 12-16, which tell about Ingrid's life on Paradise Island after her wedding; chapter 17, which is an intermission that explains the worsening situation on Earth (I hope I'm not a soothsayer); chapters 18-21, which tells about the flight from Paradise Island and brings the tale to the 'present' in the framework story; chapter 22 and the epilogue, which complete the life of Ingrid and contain the seeds of a new story about the colonization of Venus. (I don't promise anything, but I might get around to that one in the future.) Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction and the characters are fictional (except that a few well-known persons appear peripherally as public figures). Any similarity to real people, living or dead, is entirely accidental. Places and events that serve as backgrounds to the story are modelled on their 'real' counterparts and I have strived to keep them as close to the original as possible. However, I have not hesitated to use my 'poetic license' to change them, as required by my story. In particular, the island Rarotonga has nothing to do with the island with the same name in the Cook's Islands group -- my fictional Rarotonga is a part of Kosrae in the Micronesian federation. Many of the science fiction elements are borrowed from the works of Robert A. Heinlein. No copyright infringement was intended. I see it rather as an act of homage to one of the grandmasters in the genre -- and considering his great impact on millions of readers, it's not unlikely that a future city on the moon may be called 'Luna City' and its newspaper (or equivalent) 'The Daily Lunatic', for example. English is not my native tongue and I have probably made several silly spelling and grammatical errors. Please, tell me if you find any errors that upset you. The author does not necessarily condone or endorse all the actions of his characters (and wholeheartedly disagrees with some of them). However, my characters tend to have a mind of their own and they often surprise me. Naturally, this story occurs in a world without sexually transmitted diseases and other ugly facts of 'the real world'. I tend to agree with Karin's opinion that Ingrid's rash adventure is sheer madness -- in 'real life' the outcome would be far more likely to be a tragic one. In other words, this is a fantasy! Don't try to realize it! Chapter breakdown: Here follows a list of the chapters with story codes, as Mrs. Grundy would set them. Codes within [brackets] imply that the corresponding event is important for the story but it is not described in any detail. Prologue (mf) Chapter 1 -- My Childhood (no-sex, exhib) Chapter 2 -- My first lovers (f-solo, mf, ff, Ff, mff, inc) Chapter 3 -- Modelling (Ff, exhib) Chapter 4 -- Slavegirl training (Ff , F-solo, Fdom, humil, span) Chapter 5 -- Ruth (f-solo, Fdom, humil) Chapter 6 -- Karin (and Bob) (FF, MF, viol, [child abuse])Chapter 7 -- Advanced training (M+F+, FF+) Chapter 8 -- Darling Bob (FF+, MF, M+F+, rom) Chapter 9 -- A Snake in Paradise (MF, rom [humil, M+F+, FF+]) Chapter 10 -- The end (and return) of slavery (M+F+, [tort, rape]) Chapter 11 -- My wedding (and ...) (MF, M+F+, rom) Chapter 12 -- Children and Friends (MF) Chapter 13 -- Slavegirls Revisited (MF+, [Fdom]) Chapter 14 -- Farewell Bob (no-sex) Chapter 15 -- Life must go on... (MFF, FF, [fm+]) Chapter 16 -- Me, a Grandmother? ([fm+]) Chapter 17 -- The Clouds Gather (no-sex) Chapter 18 -- Paradise Lost (no-sex) Chapter 19 -- Space? (no-sex) Chapter 20 -- Luna City (no-sex) Chapter 21 -- A new World (fF, [M+F+]) Chapter 22 -- Ingrid (no-sex) Epilogue (no-sex) A note on special characters: Swedish contains three extra vowels that don't fit into 7-bit ASCII. They are coded in a variety of ways, depending on the operating system. In this story they are used in a few words (mostly place names) that may appear strange if your computer uses a different encoding compared with mine. The troublesome characters are (with Unicode, Latin-1 character codes in hex): (A with a ring, 00C5), (a with a ring, 00E5) (A with two dots, 00C4), (a with two dots, 00E4) (O with two dots, 00D6), (o with two dots, 00F6) Here follows some hints on pronunciation for the brave souls who want to speak the names: is usually pronounced like o in 'long', but sometimes short like in 'clock'. is pronounced somewhat like ai in 'air' but it can also be short. is usually pronounced like u in 'church' <1st attachment end> ----- ASSM Moderation System Notice------ Notice: This post has been modified from its original format. 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