Message-ID: <45819asstr$1071306619@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: From: "Y. Lee Coyote" Reply-To: YLeeCoyote@mail.com X-Original-Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by sara.asstr-mirror.org id hBD0BrsF006446 X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Fri, 12 Dec 2003 19:10:56 -0500 Subject: {ASSM} BSFSF] St: A View to the Future -- 2 Date: Sat, 13 Dec 2003 04:10:19 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: hecate, dennyw BSFSF] St: A View to the Future -- 2 The following story is fiction. It contain a scene sexual talk. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This story is a post-festival story to the First Annual Bradley Stoke Flash Stroke Festival (BSFSF-2003) which requires a story not to exceed 18 lines of 70 characters including the title and blank lines. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote@mail.com Mat presented a challenge to write a BSFSF story matching the given outline. This is the second one based on the (compressed) outline: The narrator, narrator's older brother and older brother's girlfriend are on a family picnic. The narrator is caring for a toddler on the grass, and the others chatting at the table. The girlfriend is wearing a short skirt which the narrator learn is most revelling. A View for the Future -- 2 By Y. Lee Coyote Two year old Ted had just plopped down allowing me to look at my big bro, chatting with his girlfriend at the picnic table. Really close now they were staring at each other's mooneyes. Her short skirt was pushed up and I could see her engorged beaver between her wide- spread legs as she had 'forgotten' her panties! His cock was hard and actually poking out of his shorts; most understandable for his hand was sliding up her soft thigh. I was riveted by this action. His fingers danced through her curly hairs working their way to her love button. He reached it; she twitched at his touch. Her hand slipped under the table. Damn it! She going to stop him. She found his hard shaft; even slipping her hand inside his shorts. A drop of pre-cum glistened on the tip of his shaft. She was rapidly stroking him as he caressed her. They were kissing; French for sure. He even had a finger up her pussy. They played with each other until they both came; her pussy pulsing and his cock blasting directly at me. I put the camcorder down; this video is going to cost him! Or should I use it for his birthday present? He'll appreciate that. The End (C) Copyright A.I.L. December 12, 2003 Questions: What gender did you assign to the narrator? Why? Suppose it was the other gender -- does the impact of the story change? How? Y. Posted and e-mailed. Valid return address is (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/YLeeCoyote/www/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/ -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderators: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at Hosted by | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+