Message-ID: <41987asstr$1050991803@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com X-Original-Message-ID: <3e.2e7c4ba8.2bd5ccf0@aol.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2003 18:38:40 EDT Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} The Annex Reviews, 4/20/03 Date: Tue, 22 Apr 2003 02:10:03 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: dennyw, gill-bates The Annex Reviews, 4/20/03 by Lady Cyrrh (ladycyrrh@aol.com) Website: http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh The Stories: Creampied and Broken (Creampie Eater): M/F, BDSM, shave, pierce, oral A Drop of Inque (Hungry Guy): F/M femdom, ws, oral, anal, too, comic Doppleganger XI (Geek Writer): M/F, cons, transform Slave Raiders, Parts 1 - 8 (David): M/F, BDSM, slave, fantasy The Saga of Cammi Longclit, Chapter Two: Rebbat-stub (Shadowloup): M/F, F/F, anal, oral, historical, magic Creampied and Broken [A] Where found: Creampie Eater URL: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/creampie/wwweater Author: Creampie Eater Author address: CreampieEater@excite.com Type: M/F, BDSM, shave, pierce, oral Creampie is a writer whose stories span many genres, but have one subject in common: the ingestion of the yummy delights found between a fully aroused woman's legs. This story was a BDSM one, and the author had this to say of it: "Be aware that this story is NOT my normal style. OK, it is my style but a very different topic." That's as may be, but it sure was a sweet read. As the narrator tells it, he is having problems in his main D/s relationship in that his submissive partner, being independent in real life, prefers to be a "bottom that tops" within the relationship. Her limits are tested when the narrator, as her dom, requests that she chop off her long, flowing locks and donate them to charity. She balks at this, but later they reach a typical D/s agreement: she will be pierced, then whipped, then shaved clean as a whistle all over including a full-body waxing, the whole to be videotaped for posterity. Being a sub these days sure is a tough job, ain't it? This could have been just another story where a dom puts an uppity sub in her place, but it was surprisingly well written, dwelling on the trust issues involved and the personalities of the couple, as well as being very hot. Recommended, as is a visit to the author's website. A Drop of Inque [B+] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 3/18/03 Author: Hungry Guy Author address: hungryguy@literotica.org Type: F/M femdom, ws, oral, anal, too, comic The cartoon Batman on the WB was clearly the inspiration for this story. I don't usually review toonfic, but since I do watch Batman occasionally, and had in fact seen the same episode the author has -- and pondered the same sexual possibilities -- I thought I'd read it and see what the author did with it. The setting is presented as the near future and the tone matter of fact ("New York is also the home for all sorts of crazies. They range from self-appointed mercenary groups to would-be superheroes. A day doesn't go by that the news doesn't report the daring deeds of the Guardian Angels, Hells Angels, Superman, Spiderman, Batman, Dare Devil, Wonder Woman, Captain America, the Flash, the Green Hornet, the Green Lantern, the Incredible Hulk, the Six Million Dollar Man, the X-men, The Tomorrow People, the Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers, the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, and way too many others to mention.") The hero of the story has missed reading the day's headlines however, and is unaware that the exhausted woman in a black vinyl catsuit he aids is really the supervillainess Inque, a pliable being able to morph herself into liquid form. He nurses her back to health, and she "rewards" him by flowing around his body like a second skin. For the rest of the story she keeps him trapped inside her as she makes tracks for Anchorage, a superhero-less city where she can expect to find refuge. When he balks, she stimulates him sexually from the her interior to keep him enthralled. The story was a good evocation of what it would feel like for a man to be trapped inside a villainous, animated catsuit. There were touches of humor in places, like the protagonist somehow never having the guts to escape from the predicament she periodically puts him in: leaving him naked in a lady's room stall as she commits her crimes. As an adventure story, though, it didn't quite come together. Interesting, though. Doppleganger XI [A-] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 3/18/03 Author: Geek Writer Author address: geek_writer@yahoo.com Type: M/F, cons, transform This story was part of a longer series about the Doppelganger, a being with a supernatural power to change sex and form as well as control the minds (and libidos) of others. It's the type of theme common in some forms of mind control fiction: I call it Total Power, because the protagonist can, literally, do, fuck, or be anyone; the fun for the reader comes from what they choose to do with their abilities and the havoc/happiness they create. The protagonist of this story, once a human man, takes on female form in this story to test her (its?) attractiveness in a bar setting, because "There was something in me now that made me want to help people realize things about themselves. I was a bit self-centered before, but now that my experiences had expanded my thoughts, I found my morals had changed as well." She then seduces a nondescript fellow for the hell of it and gives him the most extreme night of sex in his life, complete with magic words ("Nice big fat juicy cock, Mmmm, I like em big. Come for me baby so I can get you hard again. I want you to last a long time in my ass. Fuck me in my tight asshole with this huge pole...") Like the preceding story, this one was pretty interesting, but short on the adventure, and the sex, for all its dirty talk, perfunctory. I'd think a doppelganger could be a little more creative with verbal teasing. The plot didn't let loose quite as outrageously as I thought it would, either, certainly not in the nutty way that "A Drop of Inque" did. Still, I enjoyed the read, and would read others in the series as well. Slave Raiders, Parts 1 - 8 [A-/B+] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 3/17/03, 3/18/03 Author: David Posted by: Lisa Author address: davidslisa1@yahoo.com Type: M/F, BDSM, slave, fantasy I've written elsewhere in these postings about the barbaric, BDSM-oriented world of Gor, a creation of science fiction author John Norman. Though written in the 1960s, the series of slave girl and he-man novels are still popular, and apparently back in print, online at least. They've also inspired private fantasy playgrounds for D/s players in real life, as I suspect the "David" and "Lisa" (the writer of this series, and its poster) are. Here they've been transposed to "Dalvid" a seasoned slave-raider, and "Li'sar" the sprightly nymph he captures. The raiding party is from the land of Valua where females are enslaved and whipped as a matter of course: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Valuan males punish females that they like far more vigorously than those they don't. As the saying goes, "unloved slaves are punished often, but well-loved slaves are punished even more." Li'sar was made to kneel across the block. "And I thought he might have liked me!" she thought to herself, as she braced for the very first lash. Durip whipped her hard. She couldn't recall ever having felt such great pain. She struggled to stay on the block, but she had told herself already that she didn't want the additional punishment she had seen Adele receive. Dalvid smiled down at her, as each lash was administered. How lucious her bottom was; how nice to see it punished! He loved having her in such a servile position before him. She somehow endured all twelve, though she was in agony by the end. She danced around in pain, clutching her bottom, crying, begging. After giving her time to recover, he ordered her to be put with the others. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (The author later tells us, "Valuans deal (what they feel is) honorably with slaves, always assuring that they are well-fed, sheltered, and not overworked, nor punished anywhere other than on the posterior - Valuans believing that female posteriors have extra fat on them especially for that purpose. (Some Valuans even believe that the females who require punishment the most are endowed with the chubbiest posteriors).") Unfortunately the scenario ends when the local militia comes chasing after the raiders demanding their womenfolk back; but Dalvid, having become infatuated with Li'sar (and she with him) carries her off, only to lose her to bandits, who fob her off to another group of slave raiders making for the cit, where she is to be sold. Dalvid, meanwhile, rushes about frantically trying to recover her. The story was a nicely done one in the Gor-esque vein, with a sweetly romantic tone in the two main characters' relationship. It was perhaps a bit boringly written, and tamer than the usual fare (the slave girls have their bottoms whipped, not asses or buttocks) but I did get involved enough to keep reading each additional chapter, and felt pleasantly entertained by it. The Saga of Cammi Longclit, Chapter Two: Rebbat-stub [A+] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 3/16/03 Author: Shadowloup Author address: shadowloup@aol.comAntispam Type: M/F, F/F, anal, oral, historical, magic Here's another barbarian story, this one set in an aproximation of Bronze Age England. It's second in a series of others, but stood very well on its own. Cammi Longclit is a sexually charged, none-too-bright female warrior with the oversized organ of her name; Jestina is a priestess and her companion in adventure. The two set off to rid a village beset by The Beast, a shadow creature which has been buggering every available arsehole in the area and causing much distress. The tone is parodic but not nasty as the two decide what to do about it, eventually settling on a course of action: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "We shall make Cammi half-shadow herself so she will be able to battle the beast," she said. So as the late afternoon dwindled, and after partaking of several hares roasted over a fire, Jestina and Cammi and a soldier made their way to Kilcunny's hut. There Cammi's body was painted and anointed with oils and herbs. Her left tit was painted blue, her right red. Her face was also decorated in swirls. Jestina then painted eyes on Cammi's rump cheeks and titties so the beast would not be certain which way the warrioress faced. "I will grease up your sphincter so if you are taken unawares you will not be overly discomforted," Jestina said. "That sounds like fun," Cammi replied. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The Beast is eventually brought low, in an abrupt and frankly squicky way that seems out of character with the first part. Still, I thought the story was a funny spoof of those old English tales, the kind that are inextricably entwined with certain places: the village of Sugnillinuc, indeed. ____________________________________________________ Comments to: ladycyrrh@aol.com Website---> http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d, look for subject {ASSD}| |Archive at Hosted by | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+