Message-ID: <38115asstr$1031019004@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com X-Original-Message-ID: <8f.21883ad4.2aa54345@aol.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Mon, 2 Sep 2002 18:42:13 EDT Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} The Annex Reviews, 9/2/02 Date: Mon, 2 Sep 2002 22:10:04 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, kelly The Annex Reviews, 9/2/02 by Lady Cyrrh (ladycyrrh@aol.com) Website: http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh The stories: The Hunt Girls (David Shaw): M/F, F/F, humil, exhib The Pony Princess (Leviticus): M/F, ponygirl/boy, fantasy Outback (Dingo Jay): M best, humor The Khyromicon: Prologue (Alex Schmallux ): t/b cons, anal, oral, fantasy The Fellatorim (Shumars): M/F oral The Legjob (Rick O): M/F femdom spank The Hunt Girls [A+] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 7/4/02 Author: David Shaw Author address: david@f-e-mail.com Author website: http://www.f-e-mail.com Type: M/F, F/F, humil, exhib Three young women employed by an English riding school receive the shock of their lives when their workplace is invaded by a group of masked activists from The League Against Blood Sports, who take objection to the school's involvement in that quintessential English upper-crust sport, fox hunting. They force the three to strip and perform humiliating acts on them with the saddles and tack, taking pictures (for later tabloid publication) all the while to send a 'message' to other proponents of the sport. If you like that premise you will like this story, which is a well-written, detailed, and frighteningly plausible account of their experience through one girl's eyes, which is uncomfortable and humiliating for her, but not too terribly brutal. ____________________________________________________________ [All] the guys were offered a chance to come up to the saddles and suck on any vacant nipple they could find. The camera girls were shooting that as well, all the time it was happening. I don't know how many snaps they took of us, no more than I can remember exactly how many mouths I had chewing and licking and biting me as I hung on desperately to the saddle pegs. I do know that by the time it was over I was cracking a huge wet and as ready for a fuck as any of the guys. Sore in the teats and hot in the saddle was my situation. Distracting as the attention was, I'd glanced over to the other two girls several times to see how they were coping. Sandra's reaction was a surprise. After she'd been double sucked a few times she was giggling like a drunken tart. As for Melissa, she sounded like a cow that badly needed milking as she bounced up and down on her saddle and the hand squeezed in between it and her. She looked over at me and gave a kind of 'what-the-hell-else-can-we-do' look. I'd never seen her eyes so bright -- or her face so flushed either. ____________________________________________________________ Yes, the victims do wind up enjoying it somewhat, even as the action moves on to sucking, fucking, and motorized sex toys. In sum, I found this an excellently written story that had a distinct British flavor; hot in the shame/forced-sex arena, though perhaps too literary and complicated to act as stroke on the first read (and it did require more than one read.) If you have a fetish about women in tall boots and horseback riding gear, you will probably like it too. The Pony Princess [A] Author: Leviticus Where found: Writings of Leviticus URL: http://195.15.95.67/writing-of-leviticus/ThePonyPrincess.htm Type: M/F, ponygirl, fantasy Leviticus writes literate bondage stories set for the most part in the modern world, but in sheltered, secret communities where BDSM practitioners can give full rein to their pleasures. In this story, however, he turns to myth, telling us about a faraway kingdom, a curse laid on the land, and the king's daughter, who has been turned into a ponygirl as part of that curse. Her task is to find the one man who can release her from her bondage, otherwise the inhabitants of whole kingdom will be turned into horses. She finally does find a candidate who goes about it in a unique way (though not so surprising to regular readers of ponygirl/boy literature.) The story was short and spare as a good fairy tale should be, with the storytelling conventions of it; I found no fault with the writing. (Though I do think the angry wizard, the progenitor of the curse, was somewhat petty.) It combined two favorite genres of mine, fantasy and ponygirl, into something unique, and for that I recommend it; the author clearly has a lot of love for his fetish community, and it shows. I found that sweet -- as sweet as the story was, in its final conclusion. Outback [A+] Where posted: ASSM When posted: 7/23/02 Author: Dingo Jay Author address: dingojay@earthlink.net Type: M best, humor Sometimes you have to take the things you read on ASSM with a grain of salt. Like this story, narrated by an Australian guy who talks about his, and his sister's, sexual relations with his three sheep herding dogs. In detail. Well, you can either choose to take it as fact and be squicked (or turned on, if you're into dogs), or take it as a barbed, extended joke aimed at The Crocodile Hunter and other TV hosts of his ilk, which I did. _______________________________________________________________ Luke, as I mentioned, is a wee bit submissive and not quite so keen on playing tonsil snooker as his dad is. He prefers to lie on his back and let me do most of his work for him. I sit by him and roll his lovely bollocks between my thumb and fingers. With my other hand, I stroke the hidden bit of his cock that's just under the skin between his sack and his arsehole. I feel it twitch and throb a bit under me fingertips as his knot grows inside his sheath and the pointy bit on the tip peeks from the opening. I crouch over him on me hands and knees and take him in my mouth, while my own cock bobs about over his face. He laps at it a bit, but quickly loses interest once I begin sucking and stroking him in earnest. He tries to thrust a bit at first, but in his bottom-side-up position he really can't, so he simply relaxes and enjoys the ride. Luke is just a bit better endowed than his dad is, and he is capable of doling out a stunning amount of cum for a smallish dog. In addition, his spunk is rather sweet and lacks the slightly bitter and metallic flavour that Bluey's has. ______________________________________________________________ What can I say? You either are amused or you aren't. This just might win best bestiality story of the year. The Khyromicon: Prologue [A-] Where found: ASSGM When posted: 8/17/02 Author: Alex Schmallux Author address: alexschmallux@hotmail.com Type: t/b cons, anal, oral, fantasy In this fantasy story Meryn, a young priest, prepares to go out into the world to seek five orphans who hold the fate of the world in balance. To prove himself fit, he must match himself physically and mentally in the rites of Bhaeris with the guidance of his ex-lover and tutor Brynn. The story being a pseudo-mystical fantasy many things were left unsaid, a convention of the genre, I guess. Nevertheless there was a good first time experience between the priest and his tutor, and some imaginative descriptions of the five humanoid children the priest must find (they correspond to the underground, desert, forest, sea, and normal - urban - environments) and I would guess that in later chapters they will be grown up enough to have sexual adventures of their own, with or without their mentor. An interesting start for something longer, but I do criticize the stodginess of the tone. Though it was literate and 'professional' it read too derivatively, despite the sex, of commercial adolescent fantasy -- the Dragonlance and Drizzt kind. I'd to see more craziness and personal fire from the writer, some more sloppy, unfettered imagination. Come on. I know you can do it. The Fellatorium [B/B-] Where found: ASSM When posted: 8/29/02 Author: Shumars Author address: shumars@verizon.net Type: M/F oral, fantasy A young bride-to-be undergoes a special rite in this brief tale, which could be described as magic realism erotica, or a daffy off-the-wall fantasy. It's a decidedly unglamorous ritual: the girl dresses in sweatpants, a t-shirt, and kneels on a shower room floor, which leads me to think the "my country" mentioned in the text is in a decaying Soviet- block nation somewhere. She prepares herself by gargling with oysters, egg whites, and salt water before orally servicing seven naked men: "#6 Ordered me to orally clean the mess the previous man had made. Then he masturbated and ordered me to suckle his testicles. His semen landed in my hair." Inexplicably, this humiliating treatment makes her eager to service her own husband. The story was interesting in a weird alternate-universe way -- shades of Daphne Xu's "Teen Blowjob Tournament" -- but was much less developed, without the dry sense of humor the former story had. It wasn't very sexy, either, unless you like reading about a young woman's clinical, uncomfortable sexual initiation; it might have been improved by telling us more about what the protagonist feels, instead of what happens to her. The Legjob [A] Where found: ASSM When posted: 8/29/02 Author: Rick Oh Author address: rick_oh@whiteice.com Author website: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/rick_oh/www/ Type: M/F femdom spank Rick O is a new writer (as far as I can tell) who specializes in bondage, enema, watersport, and D/s tales in clinical settings, the kinkiness and "hard" sexuality aspect of them ameliorated by the enjoyment all parties take in the activities, and a puckishly lighthearted feel (for example, in "Amber in the Milk Room" the vacuum-milked victim turns about out to be the milkmaid/nurse's husband, and a fully consenting participant.) This story revolves around the protagonist fucking the oily crevice between a bound brunette's leggy legs: _____________________________________________________________ I grasped the fleshy portion of the brunette's calves and pumped my boner between her legs. The lotion had imparted a smooth and lubricated quality to her legs. I knew I would be ejaculating soon, as I had been hand-jobbed to the point just short of orgasm twice that day, and three time the previous day. This also ensured that I would have a plentiful supply of semen. I felt the brunette's thighs and went back to feeling her legs as I pumped. A leg job was a new experience. ____________________________________________________________ A paddling with a hairbrush follows for one of the "nasty boys who squirt on a woman's legs." All in good fun, of course. A short tale, quick to read, but effective; if you want a friendly introduction to enema, pumping, and bondage fic, look no further. _____________________________________________________________ Comments to: ladycyrrh@aol.com Website---> http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d, look for subject {ASSD}| |Archive at Hosted by | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+