Message-ID: <37714asstr$1028639405@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: X-Original-Path: news.supernews.com!not-for-mail From: Peaches and Cream X-Original-Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Tue, 06 Aug 2002 07:35:45 -0400 Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Peaches and Cream Reviews # 6 Date: Tue, 6 Aug 2002 09:10:05 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: RuiJorge, kelly Hi! We're Peaches & Cream. We're just two ordinary Joes who like reading and romance. Recently, there was a Summer Solstice Romance Festival on ASSM, and it caught our attention. We started discussing the stories and our reviews were born. Our format is simple: one of us starts the review, the other chimes in, and then the starter finishes it off. Because this is all about romance, we'll be scoring with 0-5 kisses. We'll be posting a review a day until we finish the stories that were submitted, beginning with the Flash stories. There is a website devoted to the festival where you can find all the stories we will review. http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Rui_Favorites/www/RomFest Peaches & Cream Reviews # 6 The essence of romantic love is that wonderful beginning, after which sadness and impossibility may become the rule. --Anita Brookner (b. 1938), British novelist, art historian. *** Lovers Ever by Sven the Elder (M/F rom) http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36958 *** Peaches: What is it like when two lovers first become aware of one another? Temptation at its peak? Most Definitely! This story is such a journey. >Pearls of excitement formed on her glistening nether lips as she blew on the >tip of his pre-cum soaked penis... Eating the forbidden fruit as it were. The story delivers exactly what it sets out to do--excite, titillate, satiate. It nabs a biblical 4 kisses from me! *** Cream: These lovers tend and nurture each other like gardeners. That's nice. I see bursting vegetables and bustling bees, though nothing like that is mentioned explicitly; and explicit sex words abound; they tangle continuously, sinuously, and that's nice, too; and I appreciate the ending, I really do. But somehow there's not enough real magic here. Maybe the lovers are too workman-like. The tangling doesn't grip me the way it should. I think it might be that for all the ardor, I don't really see the devotion. I don't really see this as this pair's first coupling. They know too much of each other. We know too little of them. So I admire a lot in this story, but it doesn't quite satisfy me. Two plus kisses. *** Peaches: Well, I see we disagree on this story. C'est la vie. Yes, the couple know a lot about one another, they've been together sense the dawn of man, but until now, they hadn't known one another in the biblical sense. So you pose the question then, Cream, does knowing someone in every way, save one, give you an insight into how to make love with them? I think it does, if only a little. But I suppose you're right, the first coupling *ever* tends to lend itself towards uncertainty. But you also say, we know too little of them. We know everything about them, don't we? They're THE couple. But enough about them, I do sort of miss the snake. *** Peaches: 4 kisses Cream: 2+ kisses -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d, look for subject {ASSD}| |Archive at Hosted by | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+