Message-ID: <36205asstr$1019373002@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: X-Original-Path: not-for-mail From: Lowjack X-Original-Message-ID: User-Agent: Xnews/L5 NNTP-Posting-Date: Sat, 20 Apr 2002 16:15:30 PDT X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sat, 20 Apr 2002 23:15:30 GMT Subject: {ASSM} Looking for feedback Date: Sun, 21 Apr 2002 03:10:02 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, dennyw Greetings, I'm trying to write a story for my wife as a gift. I've never done it before so I took her fantasy of being forced to have sex with lots of men and women and turned it into the following story. I would love some feedback as to how to make the story more interesting for her. Thanks. I apologize if this is not the correct forum to make such a post. I'm new to all this. Here goes: My wife and I had been trying to get out of Los Angeles for a long time. It always seemed that the time was never right or there wasn't enough money. Landing the client who was in town would mean a big up front payment and the ability to get out of town. It was down to my company and a company in Orlando and I had no intentions of losing this fish. I had Dan staying in the nicest hotel in the area and his room had a full on ocean view. Being a surfer we had decided to spend the weekend north of LA so he could catch some waves between meetings. I had greased the entire hotel staff to insure his needs were taken care of. We spent the first three days meeting and dining at only the finest restaurants in town. He wanted to go a little more casual on the last night and I was more than happy to oblige. It had been all business and now it was time for a little pleasure. We ate at a great Mexican restaurant and then settled down in a booth at a rather cozy and empty bar. Jackie, my wife, had always been great with clients. When a client wanted to hear how great he was, she told him how great he was. When a client wanted an honest opinion, she wouldn't hold back her. Dan was the kind of guy who liked to hear everyone's opinion so he really liked having her around. As usual the night started off talking business but about three hours and four magaritas later, the conversation turned a little risque. We were the only people in the bar with the exception of the bartender but she was plenty to look at. She was about six foot one. Shoulder length curly, black hair. She had big, dark eyes and a fairly angular face which she softened with expertly applied make up. She had incredible legs which she displayed by wearing a tight mini skirt. She was a b cup at the most but she made up for her lack of breast size by displaying as much skin as she could. She was basically wearing a low cut vest. I guess its one of the benefits of being in LA was you could find women like that in such a dump. And she was flirting with us every time she'd drop off a drink. Three hours of watching this long legged beauty walk back and forth from our table had inspired Dan. She dropped off a round of drinks and headed back for the bar. "Jack, after all the presentations and tours, I think what's going to land you this job is the fact that you brought me here." His eyes never left her ass as she returned to the bar. "You said you can make thing happens. If you get her up to my hotel room tonight, the job is yours." He laughed but I didn't think he was joking. Neither did my wife. "If you're serious, I'll go talk to her," Jackie said. "You've got a spunky one here Jack. Maybe it's the booze or maybe it's that bartender's ass but you've got yourself deal." "You better not be lying." She got up and went over and sat at the bar. The bar tender fixed Jackie a drink and they talked for a while. I must admit the idea of my wife brokering my client's sex life excited me. Maybe it was the booze in me (or maybe my wife's ass) but I was going to hop on that woman when I got her back home. Dan and I made small talk but neither of us took our eyes off of our women. Jackie finished her drink and returned to the table. "Hand over the room key." Dan paused and then reached into his pocket and pulled it out. "What room are you in?" she asked. Dan told her the room number and she returned to the bar. The bartender took the card key and we heard Jackie tell her the room number. Jackie returned to the table with another round of drinks. She looked at Dan who was pretty sitting there with his jaw on the ground. "This is your last drink. She doesn't want you to pass out on her. She says she needs a pretty active guy." Dan and I were speechless. "She also wants you to head back to the hotel in a few minutes and shower up. She'll come by after closing. She says this place gets busy in about an hour and she doesn't want you distracting her because she really curious about the size of your cock," Jackie was so cute when she said cock because she used finger quotation marks. "Apparently she likes the oral sex." Dan and I remained speechless. Dan finished his drink. Just as he set it down on the table the bartender came over. "Don't be surprised if I call you a few times before I come over." She blew him a kiss and returned to the bar. All this foreplay had heated me up quite a bit. I was ready to get home and get my evening started with Jackie. Jackie looked up at Dan and said that she wanted to have one more drink but that he better get on his way less Ally change her mind. Dan, realizing what was at stake, said farewell and walked back to the hotel. He had a smile from ear to ear. So did Jackie. Ally returned with another round of drinks. I asked Jackie what she said to set the two of them up. "I had to do a little negotiating. I asked her if she was interested in Dan at all. She said that I was more her type but he was cute. So she said that in exchange for an evening with me she'd spend an evening with him." The night had just taken quite a turn. "She also said she's not the selfish type and she'll need to share me with few other people." I was turned on and confused all at the same time. I was feeling a little concerned about the "sharing" portion. "Who is she going to be "sharing" you with?" I asked. "She said some other guys and maybe a girl or two." That didn't really make me happy. "Think about it. By doing this we're sealing the deal that'll get us out of LA. And you've always been interested in watching me with other people and I'm open to it." I was getting hard and worried at the same time. The more blood that ran to my penis, the less worried I got. As we finished our drinks, Ally returned from the back room of the bar. She was carrying something and it wasn't until she was sitting down at the table until I noticed it was some clothes line. "I don't want you to run off." She had Jackie cross her wrists in front of her. Ally tied her wrists together and then walked back to the bar. She pulled the rope and Jackie followed behind her like an animal on a leash. Ally lead her behind the bar and tied her to pole at the end of the bar. "Why don't you join me for a drink?" she asked me. So I headed over to the bar and sat down. Ally poured me a beer and then turned to Jackie. "You look a little uncomfortable." She kneeled down in front of Jackie and unbuckled her belt and jeans. She pulled off her sandals and then slid her pants off. It was completely surreal. There I was sipping a beer watching a six foot one model pull my wife's pants off. So there my wife stood - tied to a pole in her stars and moons panties and a white tank top. I almost jumped through the roof when the door swung open and two guys walked. "Hey John. Hey Eric." Ally said to the two guys. "Its your lucky night." Jackie and I shared an excited and worried glance. You could see her nipples come to life through the tank top. Ally picked up the key card to Dan's room and asked what his last name was. I told her and she dialed the hotel. When he picked up the phone she coyly asked, "What's the first thing we'll do when I get to the room, big boy. . . Oh, I like that." And she hung up the phone. "John it looks like you're getting a blow job. Come around the bar my lucky friend." I felt a huge pang of fear but right before I could ask Jackie if she was sure, Ally said, "If she doesn't blow him, I don't blow Dan." With that Jackie lowered herself to her knees and unzipped John's pant. "I like to lick it a little before I put it in my mouth" Ally informed her. Jackie took the penis into her tied hands and started to lick. She looked up at me but Ally got in the way, "This isn't about him." She motioned toward me. "It's about getting out of LA. Now get to work." With that, Ally grabbed herself a beer and came around the bar and sat next to me. Jackie licked John's cock to life. What had started out small, had now grown. Jackie was able to get the whole thing into her mouth. John had better control than I would have had. He was about 25 five, six foot four and every bit the beach resident. His hair was cut short. He had no distinguishing features to his face. I guess you would say he was a generically handsome guy. He wore a designer t-shirt and I'm sure the board shorts that were around his ankles were designer as well. "She's good at that." Ally told me as the three of us watched Jackie devoured John's cock. "Oh . . . by the way. Jack this is Eric - he's a regular. Eric this is Jack. And that's his wife blowing John." As far as Jackie and John were concerned we weren't even there. After a few minutes of silence from the audience, (Jackie and John weren't being all that quiet. Jackie was making slurping noises and John was moaning a little) Eric asked, "Am I going to be able to get in on this action.?" Eric was cut from the same surfer mold as John. He was a little shorter but appeared to be in a little better shape. He had short brown hair and big dark eyes. "Its not his decision. Its mine," said Ally. "And if John doesn't come soon, I may need you to get down there and inspire our friend Jackie to perform a little better." Jackie continued to pump John with her hand and looked over at Ally, "Would you like him to come now?" "Oooh. I like this kind of service," Ally responded. "And would you be a gem and swallow for me?" Jackie nodded yes and returned to John's cock. To the outside observer, it didn't appear as if Jackie were doing anything different but John's moans grew louder. After about ten seconds of this special service, he grabbed the back of Jackie's head and his body started to tense. In the middle of watching a man come in my wife's mouth, Ally looked over at me and said, "You're a lucky man." "I agree," I answered. "But not quite as lucky as our friend Eric here." John was pulling his shorts up when Ally motioned for him to hand her the phone. She called Dan's hotel again. "After I get done swallowing your cock, what would happen next? . . . Oooh ooooh! That sounds good," and she hung up the phone. "Jackie, why don't you get yourself up on this bar and lay yourself down so Eric can get a taste of those tits." It was a struggle for her to climb over the beer cooler up onto the bar with her hands tied, but Jack made it up. Eric was sitting two chairs to my right so I was even with her thighs. Ally sat between us and John sat to Eric's right near Jackie's head. Jackie laid there on the bar with her hands over her head. Just like a buffet. Eric reached across her and pulled her tank top up and lowered his head down to her nipples. "Feel free to enjoy yourself Jackie," Ally told her and then turned to me. "So how are you feeling about all this?" "Its weird," I told her. "Kind of exciting but strange at the same time." Ally wasn't watching Eric and Jackie, she placed her hand on my thigh and ran it up my pant leg until she reached my hard on. "I see that strange isn't keeping you from getting hard." It was hard to talk to her. I could, by looking over her shoulder, see someone licking my wife's nipples. Jackie seemed to be enjoying herself. Eric was still going slowly. He was slowly dragging his tongue from the side of the boob that was nearest him . . . across the nipple . . . to the sternum . .. . to the other nipple and back. Jackie would arch her back when his tongue made contact with her nipple. As Jackie's arching became more urgent, Eric's tongue began to concentrate more on her nipples. After a few moments of this, he climbed up on the bar and laid on Jackie while he continued to lick and massage her breasts. Ally informed John, "You know you could help if you want." "Nah, I'll let Eric have his fun." And Eric was having fun. He started humping her as his licking and grabbing intensified. Jackie started bucking and Eric continued humping. Jackie came but Eric continued to hump. Ally put her hand on Eric's calf and told him, "Why don't you let her get up and I'll let you really have some fun." Eric got off of her and Ally told Jackie to return to her spot behind the bar. Jackie got down and Ally led her through the door that was behind the bar. She came back out and she waived Eric over. "I think you'll see what I want you to do." Eric looked over at his friend and smiled and walked into the room. Ally came over and gave me a new beer. "You may need this to deal with this, my friend." She then reached under the bar and pulled out a Polaroid camera. "I'll ease you into it." Ally returned to the doorway and took a picture and brought it back to me. She laid it on the bar and we watched it develop. I could hear Jackie moaning as the picture became visible. Ally yelled out, "Don't come until I get back. I want to get a picture." Jackie's moaning grew louder. When the picture came through, I saw that Ally had bent Jackie over a stack of cases of beer and tied her to a wall support. Jackie's face was laying on a case of beer. Her moaning was growing louder. The picture showed her upper half completely resting on the beer cases with her face pointed towards the camera. Her eyes were closed and Eric was fucking her from behind. I was getting so hard and then I heard Jackie say, "Ally you better get over here because I'm going to come and I don't think he's . . . " She couldn't finish the sentence. "I gotta see this." Ally returned to the doorway and snapped off a few pictures as the moans turned to screams. Once things grew quiet, Ally told Eric not to untie her. Eric walked out of the room and returned to the bar. He was a little embarrassed and didn't look at me. Ally returned to the phone and dialed Dan again. "How does your wife feel about anal sex?" she asked me. Fear kind of shot through me. Then I heard Jackie say from the other room, "Anything to get us out of LA." "See? She's getting it now," Ally told me. Dan must have picked up the phone. "You know if someone licks my tits real good, it makes me want to get on all fours and get some dick in my ass," and she waited for a response. She purred in as he responded. "Well my goal is to please." She hung up the phone and pointed to John,, "you're on stud." He came around the bar and Ally grabbed him by the hand and lead him in. She looked back at me and said, "I'll make sure he does it right." They disappeared into the back room. A moment later Ally returned to the door way staring in with the camera at her side. She looked over my shoulder and said, "I'll be right with you." I had been so focussed on what was in front of me, I hadn't noticed that another group of people had come in. I heard Jackie slowly starting to moan. As her moans grew louder I was getting nervous that the people seated at the table would be able to hear but I'm sure the juke box was muffling her moans to them. I started to hear her say something but it was hard to understand because she was obviously experiencing so much pleasure. Eventually I understood what she moaning. My wife, who had never shown a disposition to anal sex was moaning, "My ass. Oh that feels so good." At that point Ally took another picture, dropped it in front of me and went over to get the new customers drink order. I stared down at the photo waiting for an image to materialize; the whole time listening to Jackie enjoying being serviced from behind. When Ally returned she looked at Eric. "I'm afraid she's getting too loud. Why don't you go put something in her mouth. Eric shot to his feet. As he came around the bar, Ally stopped and told him, "I want you to fuck her pretty little mouth." I looked back down to see the picture coming through. Jackie wasn't getting a dick in her, she was getting a tongue. It looked like he was fingering her too. She just laid there on top of the beer cases with his face burried between her cheeks. Ally returned from dropping off the drinks and told me I should come and watch. I slowly got up and made my way to door. I saw Jackie still getting her ass tongued by John and Eric was doing as Ally had told him and was fucking her mouth. He was pinning her head to the top of the beer cases with his left hand and he was pinching her right nipple as slammed his cock down her throat. As he pulled away I could see her eyes and she seemed to be enjoying herself. Every now and then her body would shiver. The new customers were keeping Ally busy with shots. When she returned, she said, "The game has just gotten very interesting. Why don't we roll her over on her back so you boys can come on her." Eric removed his cock from her mouth and John removed his tongue from her ass. She rolled over onto her back and looked at me, "Damn this is nice. I do believe I'm fond of cocks and tongues." Eric not really caring was she had to say, pushed her head back into position and started fucking her mouth. She gave me this great, "I'd love to talk but gotta suck cock now" look and closed her eyes. Ally said, "John, maybe you should fuck her." Eric dropped his pants and began to slide to cock into her. She scooted down on the boxes. She looked like she really wanted to be fucked. Before long Eric pulled out his cock and came all over her face. John was still pumping away at her pussy. Jackie looked over at Ally with come dripping off her chin and asked, "Can he come on me too." She pointed at me with her nose. "Good question." Ally responded. "I believe you understand who's in charge and what she likes." Ally grabbed me by the hand and walked me over close to me wife. Ally went to her knees and pulled my pants off revealing a very hard cock. "I haven't had one of these in my mouth for a long time. Maybe I should practice for your client." Whether Ally had sucked a cock in a while didn't matter because she was good at it. Jackie looked up at me as she was getting fucked. The whole scene was too intense for me and I began to shoot my loud. Ally directed its fire onto Jackie's already come cover face. I guess the site of that triggered John who came around and finished on her face as well. Ally looked at Eric and John and said, "You guys look spent. Head back to the bar. Drinks are on Jack here for the rest of the night." They left the room as Ally began to untie Jackie. What a wild evening. I can't believe the things my wife had done and had enjoyed. I was already getting hard at the idea of getting her home and fucking her myself. But Ally only untied her from the pole. She lead my nude, come covered wife out of the room into the bar. Ally, sensing I was surprised that her game was continuing, said, "Oh we're far from over honey." I believe I saw Jackie smile. I think she was really enjoying herself. When I got out to the bar area, there were another two groups of people sitting at tables. Ally tied Jackie to the end of the bar and went over to the cash register and picked up a sharpie marker. She returned to Jackie and began to write on her chest. I returned to my seat at the bar and when Ally walked away I saw the words, "For Rent" written over her breasts. Ally positioned her so that she was facing the table area of bar. At first the customers stared a little and talked a little and then stared a little more. The three tables all had men and women. Had there been a table with only men, I'm sure they would have been at the bar in seconds. I drank my beer and talked with my wife. She was telling how excited she was. About the sex and the prospect of leaving LA. In the middle of our conversation, I noticed Jackie looking over at Ally. I turned my head to see Ally talking to a girl from one of the tables. I leaned in on the conversation and heard her ask Ally, "My boyfriend's no good at me oral sex. He thinks I'm over here for him. I hear women are better at licking woman than men. So I want to know is how much for the girl to lick my pussy?" Ally glanced over at Jackie and then looked back at the customer, "Its $1 for an hour." The girl kind of bounced and reached into her pocket and pulled out a buck. She ran over to Jackie and untied her and lead her into the back room. The guys at the table where the girl had come from had to pick their jaws up off the floor. Ally went into the back room. She came out a minute later and got orders from the customers. As she walked by me she slid me a picture of Jackie going down on the girl who was laying on the floor. Each time Ally would take a drink order or serve drinks, she would go into the back room and slide me a picture. Every now and then she'd go into the back room with a couple of drinks. The pictures progressed from Jackie strictly licking pussy to Jackie moving up a little higher and licking her nipples to a odd shot of the girl sitting on Jackie's face with Jackie penetrating her with her fingers. Every now and then between songs you could hear the other girl literally screaming. After forty five minutes the woman emerged with Jackie in tow. "This girl is great with her tongue. How much to have her blow the three guys I'm with." "Normally that'd be three dollars but I'll give you a discount if she can work out here." "Deal," she said and handed Ally a dollar. Then Ally told Jackie, "She's the boss. If she's not happy, I'm not happy. If I'm not happy, Dan's not happy." Jackie nodded in understanding. The girl lead Jackie over to her table where three completely shell shocked guys sat speechless. She pulled out a chair and motioned for Jackie to go under the table. I could not see what she was doing but it was pretty easy to see who she was doing. Ally grabbed herself a beer and sat down next to me. "Real trooper you got there." It looked like the first guy came pretty quick. It didn't take long to see who she went to next. "I'm getting pretty excited about fucking Dan I have to tell you." The second guy didn't take long at all. The girl motioned for Ally to come over to the table. Ally went over and the girl gave her another dollar. She came back and plopped down next to me. Then she yelled across the bar, "Hey Jackie, Samantha has paid for some more of your tongue. When you get down with the guys, take care of her." With that the second guy came. It took her less than a minute to finish the last guy. I could see the girls skirt getting pushed up and then her head tilted back. She didn't last much longer than the guys. She scooted away and Jackie got up. Ally went over and took her by the leash and led her to empty table. She bent Jackie over the table and fastened her leash to a leg of the table. She returned to the bar and picked up the marker and wrote something on a piece of paper. She returned to Jackie and set a "For Rent" sign on her ass. There was some smaller lettering on it so I wondered over. The fine print read, "Inquire with bartender for extra charge to come on this ass." I think people thought I was going to do her and I could feel the stares as I returned to the bar. I grabbed my beer and swung around in my seat to assess the situation. The bar had become even more filled. You could tell people at every table were talking about Jackie but none seemed interested in stepping up. I continued to look around the room and I saw the next man who was going to fuck my wife. He hadn't gotten up yet but he sat, with someone who appeared to be his wife, staring at my wife's ass. I couldn't hear what she was saying but I could tell she was encouraging him to go. He eventually gave in and got up. He was a little over six foot and appeared to be in good shape but it was hard to tell with his baggy clothes. He had hair that barely reached his shoulders and he looked like he could use a shave. His wife followed. When they got to my wife the woman took the sign off her ass and asked Ally, "How much to fuck her and come on her ass?" "It's a dollar to fuck her," Ally yelled back across the room. "And twenty dollars to come on her." She looked over at me and said "Somebody's going to have to clean her up between guys and I don't work cheap." The wife took some cash from her man and came over to the bar and paid Ally. "Wait for me honey." She said as she plopped the money down on the bar and returned. She got back to her husband and undid his pants and dropped to her knees. "I'll lube you up for the girl." And she proceeded to put the largest cock my wife would see that evening all the way down her throat. A couple of pumps and she popped back up to her feet and she told him, "Fuck away my love." She sat down at the table in a chair where she could talk to my wife. "You're going to love this," she told Jackie. "He can go forever." I could see Jackie's face grimace a little bit as he entered her. It then fogged over in a haze of pleasure. He started with long, slow thrusts that he would punctuate by pulling her onto to him. He'd slide out slowly and repeat. He was taking his time. Every time he would get to the end of a stroke, Jackie's moan would become a little louder. As time passed, all conversations stopped and people sat back and enjoyed the show. He continued to slowly fuck my wife and his woman was enjoying talking to Jackie. Jackie would even return conversation but when it came to that hip-pulling part of his stroke, her eyes would open wide and she'd grunt - then close her eyes and resume the conversation. Every now and then one or both of them would look back at the bar and smile at me. His pace started to quicken just a little and Jackie stopped talking. She was too busy getting fucked. He leaned over and grabbed her by the hair with both his hands. I was mesmorized by the fucking my wife was getting. I didn't notice any one else in the bar. She had been getting fucked for about 10 minutes when Ally came over and broke my trance. "I've got to turn down the juke box so we can hear this." I hadn't realized how vocal Jackie had become. Ally turned off the juke box and everybody went silent. Everybody except for Jackie. "Come on we got to get a better seat." Ally grabbed me by the hand and lead me over to the table. She pulled two chairs up and we sat front row at my wife's fucking. The others followed suit. Pretty soon she was surrounded by everybody in the bar. The women seemed stunned by this guys control. The guys seemed stunned by watching this hot chick getting her brains fucked out. She had graduated from silence between grunts to pleads, requests and comments. She alternated saying things like, "Please fuck me faster!" to "Oh yeah slide it in!" to just plain "Oh yeah!" He quickened his pace again and pulled back on her hair which only brought out her comments faster. I don't know if she had noticed or not, but the guys wife had started rubbing her chest. I think she was getting close to coming as well. When his wife had had enough she stood up and walked behind her husband. She put one hand down the front of her jeans and wrapped the other around his chest. She pulled herself tight into his body. All the while, Jackie continued to get pounded and was letting us know how good it felt. His pace quickened again. He was going in for the kill. He pulled back on her hair with one hand and used the other to pin her to the table. He started to just slam into her. I could see his wife start to tremble. As she did, she lowered the hand she hand wrapped around his chest and grabbed his cock. He pulled out and she vigorously pumped his cock while rubbing herself against him. He exploded onto to Jackie's ass but it didn't stop her moaning. She lifted her legs off the ground in an attempt to bring him back into her but he backed away. "More cock. I need more cock." The room at first was struck silent. But Ally eventually came to after the fourth or fifth, "I need more cock." And wiped off her ass with a clothe and said, "Who's next? And from here on out, Jackie rides are on the house." I was so excited by the fucking my wife had just received I was going to get up and do her right there but Ally held my arm. "You don't count." A guy almost knocked Ally over on his way to Jackie's ass. He dropped his shorts and drove his already hard cock right into her. Jackie let go with a loud grunt and told the guy to "fuck me hard." He grabbed her by the hips and barely got the words "She's so fucking wet" out before he pulled out and came on her ass. Jackie continued to demand more cock. Her body was quaking on the table. Ally barely had time to wipe her ass off before another guy had dropped his pants and pulled out his cock. This guy lasted a little longer but it wasn't long before he ass was covered again. Jackie was demanding more cock and there were plenty of guys to provide it. They had now lined up. There were six guys waiting in line to gang bang my wife and one by one they came up and did. At one point one guy wanted to come so badly he asked Ally if he could fuck her mouth but Ally told him no because she enjoyed listening to Jackie scream. And was she screaming. Somewhere in the middle of the eighth or ninth guy, her body went tense and she went silent. After over an hour of getting fucked, she collapsed silently on the table. The only sound you could hear in the room was her heavy breathing. Ally got up and wiped her ass off for the last time and untied her. She lead her back to her place at the end of the bar. Jackie was very unsteady on her legs so Ally didn't mind that she sat. Ally walked over to the phone and called Dan, "Lets say you're fucking me and you're about to come. What position are we in? . . . Oooh that sounds good. I'll be over real soon." I couldn't believe it wasn't over. "So who wants to fuck this girl for the last time of the evening?" She looked around the bar. Eric and John said they were good. She looked at the table where Jackie had given the under table blow jobs and laughed. I turned around to see that girl getting bent over a table and getting fucked by one guy and blowing another. The other tables just watched the new show. A couple of the girls had their hands in their boy friend's lap but no one spoke up. I pulled a dollar out of my pocket and proclaimed, "I'll try." Ally took the dollar and said, "You can finish her at home. Come by tomorrow for breakfast. I'll bring Dan." -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d, look for subject {ASSD}| |Archive at Hosted by | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+