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Subject: {ASSM} Looking for feedback
Date: Sun, 21 Apr 2002 03:10:02 -0400
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Greetings,

I'm trying to write a story for my wife as a gift.  I've never done it 
before so I took her fantasy of being forced to have sex with lots of 
men and women and turned it into the following story.  I would love some 
feedback as to how to make the story more interesting for her.  
 
Thanks.

I apologize if this is not the correct forum to make such a post.  I'm 
new to all this.

Here goes:

My wife and I had been trying to get out of Los Angeles for a long time.  
It always seemed that the time was never right or there wasn't enough 
money.  Landing the client who was in town would mean a big up front 
payment and the ability to get out of town.  It was down to my company 
and a company in Orlando and I had no intentions of losing this fish.  I 
had Dan staying in the nicest hotel in the area and his room had a full 
on ocean view.  Being a surfer we had decided to spend the weekend north 
of LA so he could catch some waves between meetings.  

I had greased the entire hotel staff to insure his needs were taken care 
of.  We spent the first three days meeting and dining at only the finest 
restaurants in town.  He wanted to go a little more casual on the last 
night and I was more than happy to oblige.  It had been all business and 
now it was time for a little pleasure.  We ate at a great Mexican 
restaurant and then settled down in a booth at a rather cozy and empty 
bar.  Jackie, my wife, had always been great with clients.  When a 
client wanted to hear how great he was, she told him how great he was.  
When a client wanted an honest opinion, she wouldn't hold back her.  Dan 
was the kind of guy who liked to hear everyone's opinion so he really 
liked having her around.  As usual the night started off talking 
business but about three hours and four magaritas later, the 
conversation turned a little risque.  We were the only people in the bar 
with the exception of the bartender but she was plenty to look at.  She 
was about six foot one.  Shoulder length curly, black hair.  She had 
big, dark eyes and a fairly angular face which she softened with 
expertly applied make up.  She had incredible legs which she displayed 
by wearing a tight mini skirt.   She was a b cup at the most but she 
made up for her lack of breast size by displaying as much skin as she 
could.  She was basically wearing a low cut vest.  I guess its one of 
the benefits of being in LA was you could find women like that in such a 
dump.  And she was flirting with us every time she'd drop off a drink.

Three hours of watching this long legged beauty walk back and forth from 
our table had inspired Dan.  She dropped off a round of drinks and 
headed back for the bar.   "Jack, after all the presentations and tours, 
I think what's going to land you this job is the fact that you brought 
me here."  His eyes never left her ass as she returned to the bar.  "You 
said you can make thing happens.  If you get her up to my hotel room 
tonight, the job is yours."  He laughed but I didn't think he was 
joking.  Neither did my wife.

"If you're serious, I'll go talk to her," Jackie said.

"You've got a spunky one here Jack.  Maybe it's the booze or maybe it's 
that bartender's ass but you've got yourself deal."

"You better not be lying." She got up and went over and sat at the bar.  
The bar tender fixed Jackie a drink and they talked for a while.  I must 
admit the idea of my wife brokering my client's sex life excited me.  
Maybe it was the booze in me (or maybe my wife's ass) but I was going to 
hop on that woman when I got her back home.  Dan and I made small talk 
but neither of us took our eyes off of our women.  Jackie finished her 
drink and returned to the table.  "Hand over the room key."  Dan paused 
and then reached into his pocket and pulled it out.  "What room are you 
in?" she asked.  Dan told her the room number and she returned to the 
bar.  The bartender took the card key and we heard Jackie tell her the 
room number.  Jackie returned to the table with another round of drinks.  
She looked at Dan who was pretty sitting there with his jaw on the 
ground.  "This is your last drink.  She doesn't want you to pass out on 
her.  She says she needs a pretty active guy."  Dan and I were 
speechless.  "She also wants you to head back to the hotel in a few 
minutes and shower up.  She'll come by after closing.  She says this 
place gets busy in about an hour and she doesn't want you distracting 
her because she really curious about the size of your cock," Jackie was 
so cute when she said cock because she used finger quotation marks.  
"Apparently she likes the oral sex."  Dan and I remained speechless.   

Dan finished his drink.  Just as he set it down on the table the 
bartender came over.  "Don't be surprised if I call you a few times 
before I come over."  She blew him a kiss and returned to the bar.  All 
this foreplay had heated me up quite a bit.  I was ready to get home and 
get my evening started with Jackie.  Jackie looked up at Dan and said 
that she wanted to have one more drink but that he better get on his way 
less Ally change her mind.  Dan, realizing what was at stake, said 
farewell and walked back to the hotel.  He had a smile from ear to ear.  
So did Jackie.  

Ally returned with another round of drinks.  I asked Jackie what she 
said to set the two of them up.  "I had to do a little negotiating.  I 
asked her if she was interested in Dan at all.  She said that I was more 
her type but he was cute.  So she said that in exchange for an evening 
with me she'd spend an evening with him."  The night had just taken 
quite a turn.  "She also said she's not the selfish type and she'll need 
to share me with few other people."  I was turned on and confused all at 
the same time.   I was feeling a little concerned about the "sharing" 
portion.  

"Who is she going to be "sharing" you with?" I asked.

"She said some other guys and maybe a girl or two."  That didn't really 
make me happy.  "Think about it.  By doing this we're sealing the deal 
that'll get us out of LA.  And you've always been interested in watching 
me with other people and I'm open to it."  I was getting hard and 
worried at the same time.  The more blood that ran to my penis, the less 
worried I got.

As we finished our drinks, Ally returned from the back room of the bar.  
She was carrying something and it wasn't until she was sitting down at 
the table until I noticed it was some clothes line.  "I don't want you 
to run off."  She had Jackie cross her wrists in front of her.  Ally 
tied her wrists together and then walked back to the bar.  She pulled 
the rope and Jackie followed behind her like an animal on a leash.  Ally 
lead her behind the bar and tied her to pole at the end of the bar.  
"Why don't you join me for a drink?" she asked me.  So I headed over to 
the bar and sat down.  Ally poured me a beer and then turned to Jackie.  
"You look a little uncomfortable."  She kneeled down in front of Jackie 
and unbuckled her belt and jeans.  She pulled off her sandals and then 
slid her pants off.  It was completely surreal.  There I was sipping a 
beer watching a six foot one model pull my wife's pants off.  

So there my wife stood - tied to a pole in her stars and moons panties 
and a white tank top.  I almost jumped through the roof when the door 
swung open and two guys walked.  "Hey John.  Hey Eric."  Ally said to 
the two guys.  "Its your lucky night."  Jackie and I shared an excited 
and worried glance.  You could see her nipples come to life through the 
tank top.  Ally picked up the key card to Dan's room and asked what his 
last name was.  I told her and she dialed the hotel.  When he picked up 
the phone she coyly asked, "What's the first thing we'll do when I get 
to the room, big boy. . . Oh, I like that." And she hung up the phone.  
"John it looks like you're getting a blow job.  Come around the bar my 
lucky friend."  I felt a huge pang of fear but right before I could ask 
Jackie if she was sure, Ally said, "If she doesn't blow him, I don't 
blow Dan."  With that Jackie lowered herself to her knees and unzipped 
John's pant.  "I like to lick it a little before I put it in my mouth" 
Ally informed her.  Jackie took the penis into her tied hands and 
started to lick.  She looked up at me but Ally got in the way, "This 
isn't about him."  She motioned toward me.  "It's about getting out of 
LA.  Now get to work."  With that, Ally grabbed herself a beer and came 
around the bar and sat next to me.  Jackie licked John's cock to life.  
What had started out small, had now grown.  Jackie was able to get the 
whole thing into her mouth.  John had better control than I would have 
had.  He was about 25 five, six foot four and every bit the beach 
resident.  His hair was cut short.  He had no distinguishing features to 
his face.  I guess you would say he was a generically handsome guy.  He 
wore a designer t-shirt and I'm sure the board shorts that were around 
his ankles were designer as well.  "She's good at that."  Ally told me 
as the three of us watched Jackie devoured John's cock.  "Oh . . . by 
the way.  Jack this is Eric - he's a regular.  Eric this is Jack.  And 
that's his wife blowing John."  As far as Jackie and John were concerned 
we weren't even there.   

After a few minutes of silence from the audience, (Jackie and John 
weren't being all that quiet.  Jackie was making slurping noises and 
John was moaning a little) Eric asked, "Am I going to be able to get in 
on this action.?"  Eric was cut from the same surfer mold as John.  He 
was a little shorter but appeared to be in a little better shape.  He 
had short brown hair and big dark eyes.  

"Its not his decision.  Its mine," said Ally.  "And if John doesn't come 
soon, I may need you to get down there and inspire our friend Jackie to 
perform a little better."

Jackie continued to pump John with her hand and looked over at Ally, 
"Would you like him to come now?"

"Oooh.  I like this kind of service," Ally responded.  "And would you be 
a gem and swallow for me?"

Jackie nodded yes and returned to John's cock.  To the outside observer, 
it didn't appear as if Jackie were doing anything different but John's 
moans grew louder.  After about ten seconds of this special service, he 
grabbed the back of Jackie's head and his body started to tense.   In 
the middle of watching a man come in my wife's mouth, Ally looked over 
at me and said, "You're a lucky man."  

"I agree," I answered.

"But not quite as lucky as our friend Eric here."  John was pulling his 
shorts up when Ally motioned for him to hand her the phone.  She called 
Dan's hotel again.  "After I get done swallowing your cock, what would 
happen next? .  .  .  Oooh ooooh!  That sounds good," and she hung up 
the phone.  "Jackie, why don't you get yourself up on this bar and lay 
yourself down so Eric can get a taste of those tits."  

It was a struggle for her to climb over the beer cooler up onto the bar 
with her hands tied, but Jack made it up.  Eric was sitting two chairs 
to my right so I was even with her thighs.  Ally sat between us and John 
sat to Eric's right near Jackie's head.  Jackie laid there on the bar 
with her hands over her head.  Just like a buffet. Eric reached across 
her and pulled her tank top up and lowered his head down to her nipples.  
"Feel free to enjoy yourself Jackie," Ally told her and then turned to 
me.  "So how are you feeling about all this?"

"Its weird," I told her.  "Kind of exciting but strange at the same 
time."

Ally wasn't watching Eric and Jackie, she placed her hand on my thigh 
and ran it up my pant leg until she reached my hard on.  "I see that 
strange isn't keeping you from getting hard."  It was hard to talk to 
her.  I could, by looking over her shoulder, see someone licking my 
wife's nipples.  Jackie seemed to be enjoying herself.  Eric was still 
going slowly.  He was slowly dragging his tongue from the side of the 
boob that was nearest him . . . across the nipple . . . to the sternum . 
.. . to the other nipple and back.  Jackie would arch her back when his 
tongue made contact with her nipple.  As Jackie's arching became more 
urgent, Eric's tongue began to concentrate more on her nipples.  After a 
few moments of this, he climbed up on the bar and laid on Jackie while 
he continued to lick and massage her breasts.  Ally informed John, "You  
know you could help if you want."

"Nah, I'll let Eric have his fun."

And Eric was having fun.  He started humping her as his licking and 
grabbing intensified.  Jackie started bucking and Eric continued 
humping.  Jackie came but Eric continued to hump.  Ally put her hand on 
Eric's calf and told him, "Why don't you let her get up and I'll let you 
really have some fun."  Eric got off of her and Ally told Jackie to 
return to her spot behind the bar.  Jackie got down and Ally led her 
through the door that was behind the bar.  She came back out and she 
waived Eric over.  "I think you'll see what I want you to do."  Eric 
looked over at his friend and smiled and walked into the room.  Ally 
came over and gave me a new beer.  "You may need this to deal with this, 
my friend."  She then reached under the bar and pulled out a Polaroid 
camera.  "I'll ease you into it."  Ally returned to the doorway and took 
a picture and brought it back to me.  She laid it on the bar and we 
watched it develop.  I could hear Jackie moaning as the picture became 
visible.  Ally yelled out, "Don't come until I get back.  I want to get 
a picture."  Jackie's moaning grew louder.  When the picture came 
through, I saw that Ally had bent Jackie over a stack of cases of beer 
and tied her to a wall support.  Jackie's face was laying on a case of 
beer.  Her moaning was growing louder.  The picture showed her upper 
half completely resting on the beer cases with her face pointed towards 
the camera.  Her eyes were closed and Eric was fucking her from behind.  
I was getting so hard and then I heard Jackie say, "Ally you better get 
over here because I'm going to come and I don't think he's . . . "  She 
couldn't finish the sentence.

"I gotta see this."  Ally returned to the doorway and snapped off a few 
pictures as the moans turned to screams.  Once things grew quiet, Ally 
told Eric not to untie her.  Eric walked out of the room and returned to 
the bar.  He was a little embarrassed and didn't look at me.  Ally 
returned to the phone and dialed Dan again.  "How does your wife feel 
about anal sex?" she asked me.  

Fear kind of shot through me.  Then I heard Jackie say from the other 
room, "Anything to get us out of LA."  

"See?  She's getting it now," Ally told me.  Dan must have picked up the 
phone.  "You know if someone licks my tits real good, it makes me want 
to get on all fours and get some dick in my ass," and she waited for a 
response.  She purred in as he responded.  "Well my goal is to please."  
She hung up the phone and pointed to John,, "you're on stud."  He came 
around the bar and Ally grabbed him by the hand and lead him in.  She 
looked back at me and said, "I'll make sure he does it right."  They 
disappeared into the back room.  A moment later Ally returned to the 
door way staring in with the camera at her side.  She looked over my 
shoulder and said, "I'll be right with you."  I had been so focussed on 
what was in front of me, I hadn't noticed that another group of people 
had come in.  I heard Jackie slowly starting to moan.  As her moans grew 
louder I was getting nervous that the people seated at the table would 
be able to hear but I'm sure the juke box was muffling her moans to 
them.  I started to hear her say something but it was hard to understand 
because she was obviously experiencing so much pleasure.  Eventually I 
understood what she moaning.  My wife, who had never shown a disposition 
to anal sex was moaning, "My ass.  Oh that feels so good."  At that 
point Ally took another picture, dropped it in front of me and went over 
to get the new customers drink order.  I stared down at the photo 
waiting for an image to materialize;  the whole time listening to Jackie 
enjoying being serviced from behind.  When Ally returned she looked at 
Eric.  "I'm afraid she's getting too loud.  Why don't you go put 
something in her mouth.  Eric shot to his feet.  As he came around the 
bar, Ally stopped and told him, "I want you to fuck her pretty little 
mouth."   I looked back down to see the picture coming through.  Jackie 
wasn't getting a dick in her, she was getting a tongue.  It looked like 
he was fingering her too.  She just laid there on top of the beer cases 
with his face burried between her cheeks.  Ally returned from dropping 
off the drinks and told me I should come and watch.   I slowly got up 
and made my way to door.  

I saw Jackie still getting her ass tongued by John and Eric was doing as 
Ally had told him and was fucking her mouth.  He was pinning her head to 
the top of the beer cases with his left hand and he was pinching her 
right nipple as slammed his cock down her throat.  As he pulled away I 
could see her eyes and she seemed to be enjoying herself.   Every now 
and then her body would shiver.  The new customers were keeping Ally 
busy with shots.  When she returned, she said, "The game has just gotten 
very interesting.  Why don't we roll her over on her back so you boys 
can come on her."  Eric removed his cock from her mouth and John removed 
his tongue from her ass.  She rolled over onto her back and looked at 
me, "Damn this is nice.  I do believe I'm fond of cocks and tongues."  
Eric not really caring was she had to say, pushed her head back into 
position and started fucking her mouth.  She gave me this great, "I'd 
love to talk but gotta suck cock now" look and closed her eyes.  Ally 
said, "John, maybe you should fuck her."  Eric dropped his pants and 
began to slide to cock into her.  She scooted down on the boxes.  She 
looked like she really wanted to be fucked.  Before long Eric pulled out 
his cock and came all over her face.  John was still pumping away at her 
pussy.  Jackie looked over at Ally with come dripping off her chin and 
asked, "Can he come on me too."  She pointed at me with her nose.  

"Good question."  Ally responded.  "I believe you understand who's in 
charge and what she likes."  Ally grabbed me by the hand and walked me 
over close to me wife.  Ally went to her knees and pulled my pants off 
revealing a very hard cock.  "I haven't had one of these in my mouth for 
a long time.  Maybe I should practice for your client."  Whether Ally 
had sucked a cock in a while didn't matter because she was good at it.  
Jackie looked up at me as she was getting fucked.  The whole scene was 
too intense for me and I began to shoot my loud.  Ally directed its fire 
onto Jackie's already come cover face.  I guess the site of that 
triggered John who came around and finished on her face as well.  Ally 
looked at Eric and John and said, "You guys look spent.  Head back to 
the bar.  Drinks are on Jack here for the rest of the night."  They left 
the room as Ally began to untie Jackie.  What a wild evening.  I can't 
believe the things my wife had done and had enjoyed.  I was already 
getting hard at the idea of getting her home and fucking her myself.  

But Ally only untied her from the pole.  She lead my nude, come covered 
wife out of the room into the bar.  Ally, sensing I was surprised that 
her game was continuing, said, "Oh we're far from over honey."  I 
believe I saw Jackie smile.  I think she was really enjoying herself.  

When I got out to the bar area, there were another two groups of people 
sitting at tables.  Ally tied Jackie to the end of the bar and went over 
to the cash register and picked up a sharpie marker.  She returned to 
Jackie and began to write on her chest.  I returned to my seat at the 
bar and when Ally walked away I saw the words, "For Rent" written over 
her breasts.  Ally positioned her so that she was facing the table area 
of bar.  

At first the customers stared a little and talked a little  and then 
stared a little more.  The three tables all had men and women.  Had 
there been a table with only men, I'm sure they would have been at the 
bar in seconds.  I drank my beer and talked with my wife.  She was 
telling how excited she was.  About the sex and the prospect of leaving 
LA.  In the middle of our conversation, I noticed Jackie looking over at 
Ally.  I turned my head to see Ally talking to a girl from one of the 
tables.  I leaned in on the conversation and heard her ask Ally, "My 
boyfriend's no good at me oral sex.  He thinks I'm over here for him.  I 
hear women are better at licking woman than men.  So I want to know is 
how much for the girl to lick my pussy?"

Ally glanced over at Jackie and then looked back at the customer, "Its 
$1 for an hour."  The girl kind of bounced and reached into her pocket 
and pulled out a buck.  She ran over to Jackie and untied her and lead 
her into the back room.  The guys at the table where the girl had come 
from had to pick their jaws up off the floor.  

Ally went into the back room.  She came out a minute later and got 
orders from the customers.  As she walked by me she slid me a picture of 
Jackie going down on the girl who was laying on the floor.  Each time 
Ally would take a drink order or serve drinks, she would go into the 
back room and slide me a picture.  Every now and then she'd go into the 
back room with a couple of drinks.  The pictures progressed from Jackie 
strictly licking pussy to Jackie moving up a little higher and licking 
her nipples to a odd shot of the girl sitting on Jackie's face with 
Jackie penetrating her with her fingers.  Every now and then between 
songs you could hear the other girl literally screaming.  After forty 
five minutes the woman emerged with Jackie in tow.  "This girl is great 
with her tongue.  How much to have her blow the three guys I'm with."  

"Normally that'd be three dollars but I'll give you a discount if she 
can work out here."

"Deal," she said and handed Ally a dollar.  

Then Ally told Jackie, "She's the boss.  If she's not happy, I'm not 
happy.  If I'm not happy, Dan's not happy."  Jackie nodded in 
understanding.

The girl lead Jackie over to her table where three completely shell 
shocked guys sat speechless.  She pulled out a chair and motioned for 
Jackie to go under the table.  I could not see what she was doing but it 
was pretty easy to see who she was doing.  Ally grabbed herself a beer 
and sat down next to me.  "Real trooper you got there."  It looked like 
the first guy came pretty quick.  It didn't take long to see who she 
went to next.  "I'm getting pretty excited about fucking Dan I have to 
tell you."  The second guy didn't take long at all.  The girl motioned 
for Ally to come over to the table.  Ally went over and the girl gave 
her another dollar.  She came back and plopped down next to me.  Then 
she yelled across the bar, "Hey Jackie, Samantha has paid for some more 
of your tongue.  When you get down with the guys, take care of her."  
With that the second guy came.  It took her less than a minute to finish 
the last guy.  I could see the girls skirt getting pushed up and then 
her head tilted back.  She didn't last much longer than the guys.  She 
scooted away and Jackie got up.  Ally went over and took her by the 
leash and led her to empty table.  

She bent Jackie over the table and fastened her leash to a leg of the 
table.  She returned to the bar and picked up the marker and wrote 
something on a piece of paper.  She returned to Jackie and set a "For 
Rent" sign on her ass.  There was some smaller lettering on it so I 
wondered over.  The fine print read, "Inquire with bartender for extra 
charge to come on this ass."  I think people thought I was going to do 
her and I could feel the stares as I returned to the bar.  I grabbed my 
beer and swung around in my seat to assess the situation.  The bar had 
become even more filled.  You could tell people at every table were 
talking about Jackie but none seemed interested in stepping up.  I 
continued to look around the room and I saw the next man who was going 
to fuck my wife.  He hadn't gotten up yet but he sat, with someone who 
appeared to be his wife, staring at my wife's ass.  I couldn't hear what 
she was saying but I could tell she was encouraging him to go.  He 
eventually gave in and got up.  He was a little over six foot and 
appeared to be in good shape but it was hard to tell with his baggy 
clothes.  He had hair that barely reached his shoulders and he looked 
like he could use a shave.  His wife followed.   When they got to my 
wife the woman took the sign off her ass and asked Ally, "How much to 
fuck her and come on her ass?"

"It's a dollar to fuck her," Ally yelled back across the room.  "And 
twenty dollars to come on her."  She looked over at me and said 
"Somebody's going to have to clean her up between guys and I don't work 
cheap."  The wife took some cash from her man and came over to the bar 
and paid Ally.

"Wait for me honey."  She said as she plopped the money down on the bar 
and returned.  She got back to her husband and undid his pants and 
dropped to her knees.  "I'll lube you up for the girl."  And she 
proceeded to put the largest cock my wife would see that evening all the 
way down her throat.  A couple of pumps and she popped back up to her 
feet and she told him, "Fuck away my love."  She sat down at the table 
in a chair where she could talk to my wife.  "You're going to love 
this," she told Jackie.  "He can go forever."  I could see Jackie's face 
grimace a little bit as he entered her.  It then fogged over in a haze 
of pleasure.  He started with long, slow thrusts that he would punctuate 
by pulling her onto to him.  He'd slide out slowly and repeat.  He was 
taking his time.  Every time he would get to the end of a stroke, 
Jackie's moan would become a little louder.  As time passed, all 
conversations stopped and people sat back and enjoyed the show.  He 
continued to slowly fuck my wife and his woman was enjoying talking to 
Jackie.  Jackie would even return conversation but when it came to that 
hip-pulling part of his stroke, her eyes would open wide and she'd grunt 
- then close her eyes and resume the conversation.  Every now and then 
one or both of them would look back at the bar and smile at me.  His 
pace started to quicken just a little and Jackie stopped talking.  She 
was too busy getting fucked.  He leaned over and grabbed her by the hair 
with both his hands.  I was mesmorized by the fucking my wife was 
getting.  I didn't notice any one else in the bar.  She had been getting 
fucked for about 10 minutes when Ally came over and broke my trance.

"I've got to turn down the juke box so we can hear this."  I hadn't 
realized how vocal Jackie had become.  Ally turned off the juke box and 
everybody went silent.  Everybody except for Jackie.  "Come on we got to 
get a better seat."  Ally grabbed me by the hand and lead me over to the 
table.  She pulled two chairs up and we sat front row at my wife's 
fucking.  The others followed suit.  Pretty soon she was surrounded by 
everybody in the bar.  The women seemed stunned by this guys control.  
The guys seemed stunned by watching this hot chick getting her brains 
fucked out.  She had graduated from silence between grunts to pleads, 
requests and comments.  She alternated saying things like, "Please fuck 
me faster!" to "Oh yeah slide it in!" to just plain "Oh yeah!"  He 
quickened his pace again and pulled back on her hair which only brought 
out her comments faster.  I don't know if she had noticed or not, but 
the guys wife had started rubbing her chest.  I think she was getting 
close to coming as well.  When his wife had had enough she stood up and 
walked behind her husband.  She put one hand down the front of her jeans 
and wrapped the other around his chest.  She pulled herself tight into 
his body.  All the while, Jackie continued to get pounded and was 
letting us know how good it felt.  His pace quickened again.  He was 
going in for the kill.  He pulled back on her hair with one hand and 
used the other to pin her to the table.  He started to just slam into 
her.  I could see his wife start to tremble.  As she did, she lowered 
the hand she hand wrapped around his chest and grabbed his cock.  He 
pulled out and she vigorously pumped his cock while rubbing herself 
against him.  He exploded onto to Jackie's ass but it didn't stop her 
moaning.  She lifted her legs off the ground in an attempt to bring him 
back into her but he backed away.  "More cock.  I need more cock."  The 
room at first was struck silent.  But Ally eventually came to after the 
fourth or fifth, "I need more cock." And wiped off her ass with a clothe 
and said, "Who's next?  And from here on out, Jackie rides are on the 
house."  I was so excited by the fucking my wife had just received I was 
going to get up and do her right there but Ally held my arm.  "You don't 
count."  A guy almost knocked Ally over on his way to Jackie's ass.  He 
dropped his shorts and drove his already hard cock right into her.  
Jackie let go with a loud grunt and told the guy to "fuck me hard."  He 
grabbed her by the hips and barely got the words "She's so fucking wet" 
out before he pulled out and came on her ass.  Jackie continued to 
demand more cock.  Her body was quaking on the table.  Ally barely had 
time to wipe her ass off before another guy had dropped his pants and 
pulled out his cock.  This guy lasted a little longer but it wasn't long 
before he ass was covered again.  Jackie was demanding more cock and 
there were plenty of guys to provide it.  They had now lined up.  There 
were six guys waiting in line to gang bang my wife and one by one they 
came up and did.  At one point one guy wanted to come so badly he asked 
Ally if he could fuck her mouth but Ally told him no because she enjoyed 
listening to Jackie scream.  And was she screaming.  Somewhere in the 
middle of the eighth or ninth guy, her body went tense and she went 
silent.  After over an hour of getting fucked, she collapsed silently on 
the table.  The only sound you could hear in the room was her heavy 
breathing.

Ally got up and wiped her ass off for the last time and untied her.  She 
lead her back to her place at the end of the bar.  Jackie was very 
unsteady on her legs so Ally didn't mind that she sat.  Ally walked over 
to the phone and called Dan, "Lets say you're fucking me and you're 
about to come.  What position are we in?  .  .   .  Oooh that sounds 
good.  I'll be over real soon."  I couldn't believe it wasn't over.

"So who wants to fuck this girl for the last time of the evening?"  She 
looked around the bar.  Eric and John said they were good.  She looked 
at the table where Jackie had given the under table blow jobs and 
laughed.  I turned around to see that girl getting bent over a table and 
getting fucked by one guy and blowing another.  The other tables just 
watched the new show.  A couple of the girls had their hands in their 
boy friend's lap but no one spoke up.  I pulled a dollar out of my 
pocket and proclaimed, "I'll try."  Ally took the dollar and said, "You 
can finish her at home.  Come by tomorrow for breakfast.  I'll bring 
Dan."

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