Message-ID: <35420asstr$1014628211@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: From: Taintedlime@aol.com X-Original-Message-ID: <29.232798b4.29ab166b@aol.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sun, 24 Feb 2002 23:24:11 EST Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Tainted Lime Reviews #22 Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2002 04:10:11 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: dennyw, gill-bates Tainted Lime Reviews Issue #22 February 24, 2002 Reviews are archived at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/TaintedLime/www/. --- Stories reviewed in this issue: two quickies, by Edward Rider (* *) The ABC Plan, by Clint Kalmkren (* * * *) The Model, by BreastWriter (* * *) Tryst, by Anon Sacto (* * * *) Sweet Release, by GM TH (* * *) --- {ASSM} two quickies by Ed Rider (MF FF) By Edward Rider http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/35331 This posting contains two very short stories. "Lesbian Fun and Games" is about two ex-college-roommates who get together for a card game with two other girls. They are playing "for penalty," which means the losers have to provide the oral sex. "A Stiff Problem" is about Jim, who wakes up from a year-long coma to find his penis has grown to enormous proportions. The doctors decide he needs to have many orgasms in order to shrink down to a more accommodating size. The doctor and nurses all work diligently to bring Jim's penis back to its previous dimensions. The plots are ridiculous, and the sex is over too quickly to be arousing. Both stories need to be longer - probably a lot longer - for them to be effective. Rating: * * --- {ASSM} The ABC Plan {1/1} {Clint Kalmkren} {MF oral anal} By Clint Kalmkren http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/35380 Professor Sharpe teaches freshman calculus, and there is always one student who just doesn't get it. This term, it's Angela. After flunking the first two midterms, she comes to Sharpe with a deal. Sharpe, however, has a counteroffer: the ABC Plan. Angela gets her A if he can fuck her Ass, receive a Blowjob, and fuck her Cunt. Angela is desperate to pass, so she agrees. Every Wednesday for three weeks, Sharpe arrives at Angela's apartment. They don't go in alphabetical order, leaving the `A' for last. The professor keeps strict control over the Wednesday events, telling Angela everything she must do. He is selfish, but his selfishness includes Angela enjoying herself too. For the most part, he is not cruel or demeaning. This long story is very well written for ASSM. My main complaint involves the plot: this is just a variation of the Tricky Husband Syndrome I mentioned in a previous review. Here, the Tricky Professor has a scheme, and the scheme is carried out exactly as planned. Nothing goes wrong. Everything turns out great in the end. This story would have been twice as good if something had happened along the way to surprise me. So the plot is a slightly boring. Fortunately, the sex in this story is fantastic. As a heterosexual stroke story, this is one of the best. Rating: * * * * --- {ASSM} The Model By BreastWriter http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/35381 Brooke is a model who is famous for her breasts. She has appeared in numerous lingerie and swimsuit ads and is the masturbatory fantasy of thousands of men. She has a favorite photographer, John, who she begins to use exclusively. A romance builds, but Brooke doesn't allow them to have sex. Finally, during a shoot with a particularly revealing bra, John notices a bulge in the side of Brooke's breast. He confronts her, and she admits that she has breast cancer. Unfortunately, the writing in this story is not good. The grammar is often bad, there are many misspellings and typos, and there were a couple points where the action shifts far too abruptly. In spite of the major flaws, the scene where Brooke confesses she has cancer is absolutely riveting. It's both emotional and gruesome. I recommend reading this story for that one scene. While it's not at all arousing, you can't help but come away affected by it. Rating: * * * --- {ASSM} Tryst (MF) [Anoninsac] By Anon Sacto http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/35382 After a working lunch with Cammie, the narrator of this story begins to obsess about her. He sees her face everywhere, and when it gets to be too much, he calls her. They arrange to meet in a hotel room. I liked this story a lot. The narrator is drawn well in just a few words, and the glimpses into Cammie are also intriguing. My complaints are minor and few. The only significant one is the puzzle left unsolved: why did this woman decide to meet this man in a hotel room? The story reads like the start of a series with the author withholding information to help spice up future installments. But we have great sex, well-written prose, and enough characterization to make me want to know more - it all adds up to an excellent story. Rating: * * * * --- {ASSM} Sweet Release (MF, cons, oral) By GM TH http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/35385 This is simply a glimpse into the love-making between a man and a woman. It is a very well-written scene, but that is all it is. But it is romantic without being too saccharine, and very sexy indeed. 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