Message-ID: <34891asstr$1011744602@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: From: Taintedlime@aol.com X-Original-Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Tue, 22 Jan 2002 16:30:04 EST Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Tainted Lime Reviews #9 Date: Tue, 22 Jan 2002 19:10:02 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, newsman Tainted Lime Reviews Issue #9 January 22, 2002 Reviews are archived at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/TaintedLime/www/. --- Stories reviewed in this issue: Sally's Strap-on School, by Rick O (* * *) Library Work, by Green Man (* * * *) Isobel, by Katherine T. (* * * * *) Jeepers Creepers, by Kari Gold (* * * *) Satin Sheets, by Candy Kane (* * * *) --- {ASSM} New Story: Sally's Strap-on School (F+M+) By Rick O http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/34812 Sally is the instructor for a strap-on dildo class. In this lesson, seven women show up at a vacant warehouse while Sally goes through the fine points of strapping on a rubber cock and giving a man the reaming he deserves. This is a short, almost surreal story. I only noticed a couple grammar problems, and the story flowed nicely. With a story this short, I would have liked to see more flair in the writing. And there is one more serious flaw: the women in the class are faceless, and the men are nothing more than their anuses. But it's as arousing as anything you find this short, and it's still an interesting little ditty. Rating: * * * --- {ASSM} "Library Work" (voy, f-solo, multiple-o) By Green Man http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/34842 A graduate student doing research thought he would have the library stacks all to himself during fall break. So imagine his disappointment when a freshman girl walks in and sets up to read in a nearby study carrel. His disappointment turns into something else when the girl's reading material turns out to be a lot more interesting than most books you find in a college library. She soon has her skirt up around her hips, and our narrator spends the next hour or so watching this girl get herself off over and over again. The author misspells "aisle" several times, but the story is otherwise well written. And I would be very interested in reviewing whatever it was the girl was reading! Rating: * * * * --- {ASSM} Isobel (FF, lesbian) (Katherine T.) By Katherine T. http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/34846 Isobel is an older lesbian who works in a real estate office with Charley. Charley is the other lesbian in the office, a butch dyke who happens to be a powerful femme magnet. Isobel is having a bad day, and Charley is having lunch with an ex-centerfold, Lauren. But Charley has a sweet spot in her heart, and, noticing Isobel's blue funk, invites her to tag along. At the restaurant, Charley gets called away on business, leaving Lauren and Isobel to get to know one another. And they get to know one another very well indeed. This is an excellent story. Isobel is well drawn, and Lauren is a lot of fun. The sex is very nice, and I enjoyed very much the way the story ended. Even if you're not into lesbian stories, you will still enjoy this story. Rating: * * * * * --- {ASSM} MSM #4 - Jeepers Creepers (fffffMMMM, slumber party, mystery, tease) By Kari Gold http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/34874 The story is coded fffffMMMM, but it's a very tame story for ASSM. There are characters talking about sex and some relatively innocent experimentation, but very little sex actually occurs. Although the boys in this story are older than the girls, they are still teenagers, and almost nothing happens between them anyway. This story is one of those cute little mysteries you used to read in junior high school that end with the challenge: "How did the detective know the man with the knife in his neck wasn't really dead?" And the wonderfully clever little answer waiting for you in the back of the book. In this mystery, Kari Gold, Teenage Detective, and her seventh grade friends are having a slumber party and makeover session at Amy's house. When the requisite Truth or Dare game begins, the dares force the girls to kiss one another and expose their breasts and things like that. They spot some boys peeping through the windows and videotaping the goings-on, and the chase begins. Kari follows the boys back to the practice barn of the Nematoads, a local death metal band. And there we have the big confrontation. The Nematoads deny everything, but when the police arrive, Kari catches them in a fatal lie. See if you can figure it out! Technically, this story is very well-written - I only noticed a couple very minor typos in more than ten thousand words. And having recently hosted a birthday party for a bunch of thirteen- year-old girls, I can say with some authority that the girls in this story are described very realistically. But the story stretched on far too long for my tastes. This is a mystery with no hint of mystery for half the story. Even though I enjoyed reading it, the Truth or Dare scene should have been a lot shorter. But the girls are great, and it's a fun story. You'll be glad you read it. Rating: * * * * --- {ASSM} SATIN SHEETS by Candy Kane [FF] By Candy Kane http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/34882 Leslie is a workaholic lawyer whose biggest client is the Gay & Lesbian Coalition. Leslie's secretary, Cindy, and a legal clerk, Pam, decide Leslie needs a little fun for her birthday, and they arrange for Leslie to spend the night at Satin Sheets, an exclusive lesbian nightclub. They also buy her Vanessa for the night. Unfortunately, Cindy and Pam were mistaken about Leslie's sexual orientation. But Leslie is a good sport, so she decides to go through with it anyway. In a lot of ways, this is a ridiculous story. This is one of those throw-away porn plots, pure and simple. But as throw-away porn plots go, this one is very well implemented. Technically, there are a few minor grammatical errors. But the language used to describe the sex is very good, and it is occasionally inspired. Several times I told myself, "Wow, that was great!" This story may have the best sex scene I've reviewed so far. If only it had a more realistic plot to go along with it! Rating: * * * * -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Archive: Hosted by Alt.Sex.Stories Text Repository | |, an entity supported entirely by donations. | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+