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Birthday Present (Version Two) by Laura Lynn Davis f/f romance
Copyright 2002.

I rewrote this in response to some valid criticsm.

	When I turned sixteen my father took me into New York to buy my first good 
piece of jewelry to celebrate my transition from girl to woman.  It was a 
subtle attempt to get me to abandon my tomboy ways.  I was blonde and 
beautiful, and my daddy was rich, so I was treated with deference.

	We didn't go to any of the glitzy places that you read about - Tiffany's or 
the like - instead we went to a small shop on the sixth floor of a 
nondescript building on 47th Street.  At this shop we sat in comfortable 
chairs in a small room while the jewelry was displayed on the fingers, 
wrists, and throats of several very beautiful young women.  I enjoyed the 
show but I didn't see anything I liked and after an hour I was getting 
restless.

	THe owner of the shop noticed and said, "I have something special to show 
you.  Something rare and very expensive.  I'll be back in a moment."  He got 
up and left.  My father followed him out.  The owner came back a couple of 
minutes later and told me that my father had gone outside to have a 
cigarette.  I'd been trying to get him to quit but I hadn't succeeded yet.

	A moment later the door opened again and an exquisitely beautiful young 
woman came in.  She had black hair that fell around her shoulders in a 
lustrous wave.  Her eyes were so dark as to appear black and her complexion 
was pale and perfect.  She appeared to be about my own age, maybe a year 
older.

	She was barefoot, wearing a long white robe, a plain terry cloth robe, that 
covered her from neck to ankles.  She wasn't wearing any jewelry that I 
could see.  I glanced at Mr. Norman and he smiled.  "My niece, Sabine.  
She's just your age.  I'll leave you two alone for a moment."

	He got up and left.  After the door closed Sabine smiled and slipped her 
robe off.  I caught my breath in surprise and shock.  Sabine was nude and 
her body was stunningly beautiful.  She was wearing a diamond pendant on a 
long gold chain.  The diamond hung between her firm, bare breasts.  It was 
twenty carats of pure sparkling fire.

	I got up and walked over to get a closer look at the diamond.  And, I'll 
admit, at Sabine.  She smiled as I leaned close to examine the diamond.  
"Exquisite!"

	She grinned, an impish grin that I found delightful.  "Yes, it is 
beautiful, isn't it?"

	I returned her smile.  "I wasn't talking about the diamond, but it's nice, 
too."

	I was rewarded with a blush that swept down her body all the way to her 
feet.  "Thank you."

	"Does your uncle have you do this often?"

	She shook her head.  "No, this is the first time ever."  She licked her 
lips.  "I have to admit that I was a little scared but now I'm glad I 
agreed."

	"How old are you?"

	"Sixteen.  You?"

	"Sixteen.  Today."

	She stepped forward and put her hand on the back of my neck while she 
kissed me, a light kiss, just a touch of her lips against mine.  "Happy 
birthday, Kristen."

	I was surprised that she knew my name and shocked by how much I'd enjoyed 
the kiss.  She stepped back.  "Would you like to try it on?"

	I nodded.  "Yes, of course."

	She reached back to undo the clasp, flashing that impish grin again.  "Of 
course you have to be nude the first time.  Otherwise a horrid curse will be 
triggered."

	I glanced at the door.  "What if your uncle comes back?  Or my father?"

	She shrugged, causing her firm, full breasts to bounce prettily.  "Don't 
worry, nobody is going to come in.  I locked the door behind me."

	A moment later I was nude and she was fastening the clasp behind my neck.  
I was taller than her  by a couple of inches so the diamond hung a little 
higher on my chest.  "We can get a longer chain."  Her voice was soft and I 
felt her warm breath on my ear and neck.  "You're very beautiful yourself."

	I smiled and shook my head.  "No, I'm not.  But you're kind to say so."  I 
glanced at my reflection in the full length mirror that hung just to the 
right of the door.  I looked good but I was nowhere near as beautiful as 
Sabine.

	She was standing right behind me and I felt her nipples brush against my 
back as she put her hands on my hips and leaned close.  "Yes, you are.  
Don't argue with me."  Then she kissed the back of my neck.  At the same 
time she ran her hands up my sides and slid them around to cup my breasts.  
I leaned back against her and whispered, "Oh my God!"

	She fondled my breasts while her lips were busy with my neck and ears.  I 
wanted to stop her, knew I should stop her, but it felt too damn good and I 
closed my eyes and let her do as she wished.  A moment later I was leaning 
against the wall, legs spread, while her tongue traced a path from my navel 
to my vulva.  I wasn't a virgin but this was my first experience with 
another girl and it was far, far better than anything I'd ever done with a 
boy!

	Her tongue sent spasms of pleasure shooting through my body as she explored 
my cunt with it.  I ran my hands through her hair over and over, whimpering 
in pleasure, until she triggered a fantastic orgasm by shoving a finger up 
my ass!  I arched my back, pushing my cunt against her mouth, and screamed 
with pleasure as I came and came and came!  It was the first orgasm I'd ever 
had that I hadn't induced by masturbating.

	I slid down the wall and sat with my legs splayed out.  Sabine turned and 
sat between my legs, leaning against me.  "I hope your nipples don't poke 
holes in my back!"

	I squeezed her breasts and giggled.  We sat there for a while and then she 
turned and kissed me again.  "I want your tongue between my legs!"

	I shivered and shook my head.  "I don't know... I've never done it with 
another girl."

	She smiled and whispered, "Relax, Kristen.  I won't hurt you."  She eased 
me down onto my back and straddled my head, on her knees, facing in the 
opposite direction.  She lowered herself and I felt her warm breath low on 
my belly.  She pushed her tongue into my cunt and I whimpered with pleasure 
as she flicked my clit with the tip of her tongue.

	After a few moments she lowered herself onto my face.  For the first time I 
savored the strong scent of an aroused female.  I turned my head and kissed 
her soft, inner tight.  Left thigh, right thigh, enjoying the soft silky 
feel of her skin against my lips.  Her long, silky pubic hair tickled me as 
she lowered herself the last couple of inches until my mouth was pressed 
against her mound.

	I opened my mouth and ran my tongue along her slit.  Her pussy juice had a 
strong taste and it took me a moment to decide I liked it.  It was tangy and 
and slightly salty.  I took another lick, a less tentative lick.  Yes, I 
definitely liked it!  I heard her moan.  "Yes, oh yes.  Eat me!  Eat me!"

	I opened my mouth and tried to suck her whole pussy in.  At the same time, 
I pushed my tongue into her and licked her inner labia, parting them and 
plunging my tongue as deep as possible into her warm, wet vagina.  Her hips 
twitched when I foung her clit with my tongue.  I liked the way she 
whimpered and moaned.  Her tongue was deep in my pussy, making it hard for 
me to concentrate on what I was doing.  I stopped trying and just licked her 
as hard and as fast as I could.  After a few minutes she ground her pussy 
against my mouth and screamed, "Yes!  Oh, god, yes!"

	I came a moment later, bucking and lifting my hips, pushing my cunt against 
her mouth.  It was so fuckin' incredible!  She collapsed on me, turning her 
head sideways, her lips touching my left thigh.  After a moment she kissed 
my thigh and said, "God!  That was sooooo good!"

		Finally, reluctantly, we sat up and hugged each other for a moment.  She 
cupped my breasts and squeezed them gently.  "You have such pretty tits!  I 
love them!"

	I blushed.  "They're too small.  Nowhere near as nice as yours."

	She scowled at me in mock anger.  "No, they're not too small!  They're just 
right!  I bet you go braless a lot, don't you?"

	I nodded and she shrugged.  "Well I can't.  At least not often.  Mine are 
just too big!"  She was a good, full 34c and I was barely into a b-cup.  But 
I had to admit she was right.  Being small did have *some* advantages.

	Finally, reluctantly, I got dressed and Sabine put her robe on.  Before she 
unlocked the door I touched her arm and asked, "What about that curse you 
mentioned?"

	She chuckled.  "I made that up to get you to take your clothes off."

	I stared at her in surprise for a moment and then I giggled.  I kissed her, 
slipping my hand into her robe to rub her belly for a moment.  She moaned 
and pushed her tongue into my mouth.  I wanted her again but there was no 
time.  She pushed me away, smiling, and unlocked the door.  We were sitting 
in adjoining chairs, holding hands, when my father and her uncle came in.  
My father smiled.  "Well?"

	I grinned up at him.  "I love her .... I mean it.  I want it.  Can we 
afford it?"  Sabine squeezed my hand and giggled.

	My father nodded.  "Yes, we can afford it."  He paused.  "And we can afford 
Sabine, too."

	I glanced from my father to her uncle in surprise.  "Yes, I want to get 
Sabine out of the city.  She's going to go and live with you and finish 
school up there away from all the crap.  After she graduates .... well, 
we'll see."

	An hour later, after a tearful goodbye, we were on the road home to 
Connecticut.  Sabine and I sat in the back seat, holding hands, wondering if 
our fathers knew what had taken place while they were out of the room.  My 
guess was that they didn't have a clue.  She was wearing a short skirt that 
showed off her long, sleek legs.  I put my hand on her bare thigh and 
squeezed gently.  She glanced at me and smiled, a smile full of promise.

	When we got home I kissed my father and thanked him for a wonderful 
birthday present.  Then I took Sabine upstairs and showed her the room that 
was going to be hers.    It was just down the hall from mine with a shared 
bathroom between them.  As we walked down the hall I said, "Of course you 
know that the room is cursed...."

	She glanced at me and giggled.  "Let me guess.  You have to be naked the 
first time you walk through the door?"

	We laughed.  My father was outside, getting Sabine's bags out of the trunk. 
  She slipped her clothes off in the hall and walked into her new room.  
When daddy came up with the bags she was in the bathroom.  I remembered just 
in time to open the door and toss her clothes in after her.

	Daddy gave me a funny look as he set her bags down.  I smiled my best 
innocent smile and said, "She's a little car sick."

	He nodded.  "We'll go out to dinner tonight.  Say in an hour?"

	I nodded.  "Fine, daddy.  Thanks again for my present."  I hugged him and 
he left.

	I listened as he walked back down the stairs.  The bathroom door opened and 
Sabine pounced on me.  We laughed and giggled as she unbuttoned and unzipped 
me.  When we were both naked we toured my room.  Both rooms had doors that 
opened into the bathroom.  Doors that were never closed after that.

	That night, when we got home after dinner, we soaked in the tub together 
and then took turns shaving each other.  After a lot of testing we agreed 
that licking a bare pussy was much more pleasant.  Our testing has gone on 
for almost a year now.

The End


Copyright 2002.

	When I turned sixteen my father took me into New York to buy my first good 
piece of jewelry to celebrate my transition from girl to woman.  It was a 
subtle attempt to get me to abandon my tomboy ways.  I was blonde and 
beautiful, and my daddy was rich, so I was treated with deference.

	We didn't go to any of the glitzy places that you read about - Tiffany's or 
the like - instead we went to a small shop on the sixth floor of a 
nondescript building on 47th Street.  At this shop we sat in comfortable 
chairs in a small room while the jewelry was displayed on the fingers, 
wrists, and throats of several very beautiful young women.  I enjoyed the 
show but I didn't see anything I liked and after an hour I was getting 
restless.

	THe owner of the shop noticed and said, "I have something special to show 
you.  Something rare and very expensive.  I'll be back in a moment."  He got 
up and left.  My father followed him out.  The owner came back a couple of 
minutes later and told me that my father had gone outside to have a 
cigarette.  I'd been trying to get him to quit but I hadn't succeeded yet.

	A moment later the door opened again and an exquisitely beautiful young 
woman came in.  She had black hair that fell around her shoulders in a 
lustrous wave.  Her eyes were so dark as to appear black and her complexion 
was pale and perfect.  She appeared to be about my own age, maybe a year 
older.

	She was barefoot, wearing a long white robe, a plain terry cloth robe, that 
covered her from neck to ankles.  She wasn't wearing any jewelry that I 
could see.  I glanced at Mr. Norman and he smiled.  "My niece, Sabine.  
She's just your age.  I'll leave you two alone for a moment."

	He got up and left.  After the door closed Sabine smiled and slipped her 
robe off.  I caught my breath in surprise and shock.  Sabine was nude and 
her body was stunningly beautiful.  She was wearing a diamond pendant on a 
long gold chain.  The diamond hung between her firm, bare breasts.  It was 
twenty carats of pure sparkling fire.

	I got up and walked over to get a closer look at the diamond.  And, I'll 
admit, at Sabine.  She smiled as I leaned close to examine the diamond.  
"Exquisite!"

	She grinned, an impish grin that I found delightful.  "Yes, it is 
beautiful, isn't it?"

	I returned her smile.  "I wasn't talking about the diamond, but it's nice, 
too."

	I was rewarded with a blush that swept down her body all the way to her 
feet.  "Thank you."

	"Does your uncle have you do this often?"

	She shook her head.  "No, this is the first time ever."  She licked her 
lips.  "I have to admit that I was a little scared but now I'm glad I 
agreed."

	"How old are you?"

	"Sixteen.  You?"

	"Sixteen.  Today."

	She stepped forward and put her hand on the back of my neck while she 
kissed me, a light kiss, just a touch of her lips against mine.  "Happy 
birthday, Kristen."

	I was surprised that she knew my name and shocked by how much I'd enjoyed 
the kiss.  She stepped back.  "Would you like to try it on?"

	I nodded.  "Yes, of course."

	She reached back to undo the clasp, flashing that impish grin again.  "Of 
course you have to be nude the first time.  Otherwise a horrid curse will be 
triggered."

	I glanced at the door.  "What if your uncle comes back?  Or my father?"

	She shrugged, causing her firm, full breasts to bounce prettily.  "Don't 
worry, nobody is going to come in.  I locked the door behind me."

	A moment later I was nude and she was fastening the clasp behind my neck.  
I was taller than her  by a couple of inches so the diamond hung a little 
higher on my chest.  "We can get a longer chain."  Her voice was soft and I 
felt her warm breath on my ear and neck.  "You're very beautiful yourself."

	I smiled and shook my head.  "No, I'm not.  But you're kind to say so."  I 
glanced at my reflection in the full length mirror that hung just to the 
right of the door.  I looked good but I was nowhere near as beautiful as 
Sabine.

	She was standing right behind me and I felt her nipples brush against my 
back as she put her hands on my hips and leaned close.  "Yes, you are.  
Don't argue with me."  Then she kissed the back of my neck.  At the same 
time she ran her hands up my sides and slid them around to cup my breasts.  
I leaned back against her and whispered, "Oh my God!"

	She fondled my breasts while her lips were busy with my neck and ears.  I 
wanted to stop her, knew I should stop her, but it felt too damn good and I 
closed my eyes and let her do as she wished.  A moment later I was leaning 
against the wall, legs spread, while her tongue traced a path from my navel 
to my vulva.  I wasn't a virgin but this was my first experience with 
another girl and it was far, far better than anything I'd ever done with a 
boy!

	Her tongue sent spasms of pleasure shooting through my body as she explored 
my cunt with it.  I ran my hands through her hair over and over, whimpering 
in pleasure, until she triggered a fantastic orgasm by shoving a finger up 
my ass!  I arched my back, pushing my cunt against her mouth, and screamed 
with pleasure as I came and came and came!  It was the first orgasm I'd ever 
had that I hadn't induced by masturbating.

	I slid down the wall and sat with my legs splayed out.  Sabine turned and 
sat between my legs, leaning against me.  "I hope your nipples don't poke 
holes in my back!"

	I squeezed her breasts and giggled.  We sat there for a while and then she 
turned and kissed me again.  "I want your tongue between my legs!"

	I shivered and shook my head.  "I don't know... I've never done it with 
another girl."

	She smiled and whispered, "Relax, Kristen.  I won't hurt you."  She eased 
me down onto my back and straddled my head, on her knees, facing in the 
opposite direction.  She lowered herself and I felt her warm breath low on 
my belly.  She pushed her tongue into my cunt and I whimpered with pleasure 
as she flicked my clit with the tip of her tongue.

	After a few moments she lowered herself onto my face.  For the first time I 
savored the strong scent of an aroused female.  I turned my head and kissed 
her soft, inner tight.  Left thigh, right thigh, enjoying the soft silky 
feel of her skin against my lips.  Her long, silky pubic hair tickled me as 
she lowered herself the last couple of inches until my mouth was pressed 
against her mound.

	I opened my mouth and ran my tongue along her slit.  Her pussy juice had a 
strong taste and it took me a moment to decide I liked it.  It was tangy and 
and slightly salty.  I took another lick, a less tentative lick.  Yes, I 
definitely liked it!  I heard her moan.  "Yes, oh yes.  Eat me!  Eat me!"

	I opened my mouth and tried to suck her whole pussy in.  At the same time, 
I pushed my tongue into her and licked her inner labia, parting them and 
plunging my tongue as deep as possible into her warm, wet vagina.  Her hips 
twitched when I foung her clit with my tongue.  I liked the way she 
whimpered and moaned.  Her tongue was deep in my pussy, making it hard for 
me to concentrate on what I was doing.  I stopped trying and just licked her 
as hard and as fast as I could.  After a few minutes she ground her pussy 
against my mouth and screamed, "Yes!  Oh, god, yes!"

	I came a moment later, bucking and lifting my hips, pushing my cunt against 
her mouth.  It was so fuckin' incredible!  She collapsed on me, turning her 
head sideways, her lips touching my left thigh.  After a moment she kissed 
my thigh and said, "God!  That was sooooo good!"

		Finally, reluctantly, we sat up and hugged each other for a moment.  She 
cupped my breasts and squeezed them gently.  "You have such pretty tits!  I 
love them!"

	I blushed.  "They're too small.  Nowhere near as nice as yours."

	She scowled at me in mock anger.  "No, they're not too small!  They're just 
right!  I bet you go braless a lot, don't you?"

	I nodded and she shrugged.  "Well I can't.  At least not often.  Mine are 
just too big!"  She was a good, full 34c and I was barely into a b-cup.  But 
I had to admit she was right.  Being small did have *some* advantages.

	Finally, reluctantly, I got dressed and Sabine put her robe on.  Before she 
unlocked the door I touched her arm and asked, "What about that curse you 
mentioned?"

	She chuckled.  "I made that up to get you to take your clothes off."

	I stared at her in surprise for a moment and then I giggled.  I kissed her, 
slipping my hand into her robe to rub her belly for a moment.  She moaned 
and pushed her tongue into my mouth.  I wanted her again but there was no 
time.  She pushed me away, smiling, and unlocked the door.  We were sitting 
in adjoining chairs, holding hands, when my father and her uncle came in.  
My father smiled.  "Well?"

	I grinned up at him.  "I love her .... I mean it.  I want it.  Can we 
afford it?"  Sabine squeezed my hand and giggled.

	My father nodded.  "Yes, we can afford it."  He paused.  "And we can afford 
Sabine, too."

	I glanced from my father to her uncle in surprise.  "Yes, I want to get 
Sabine out of the city.  She's going to go and live with you and finish 
school up there away from all the crap.  After she graduates .... well, 
we'll see."

	An hour later, after a tearful goodbye, we were on the road home to 
Connecticut.  Sabine and I sat in the back seat, holding hands, wondering if 
our fathers knew what had taken place while they were out of the room.  My 
guess was that they didn't have a clue.  She was wearing a short skirt that 
showed off her long, sleek legs.  I put my hand on her bare thigh and 
squeezed gently.  She glanced at me and smiled, a smile full of promise.

	When we got home I kissed my father and thanked him for a wonderful 
birthday present.  Then I took Sabine upstairs and showed her the room that 
was going to be hers.    It was just down the hall from mine with a shared 
bathroom between them.  As we walked down the hall I said, "Of course you 
know that the room is cursed...."

	She glanced at me and giggled.  "Let me guess.  You have to be naked the 
first time you walk through the door?"

	We laughed.  My father was outside, getting Sabine's bags out of the trunk. 
  She slipped her clothes off in the hall and walked into her new room.  
When daddy came up with the bags she was in the bathroom.  I remembered just 
in time to open the door and toss her clothes in after her.

	Daddy gave me a funny look as he set her bags down.  I smiled my best 
innocent smile and said, "She's a little car sick."

	He nodded.  "We'll go out to dinner tonight.  Say in an hour?"

	I nodded.  "Fine, daddy.  Thanks again for my present."  I hugged him and 
he left.

	I listened as he walked back down the stairs.  The bathroom door opened and 
Sabine pounced on me.  We laughed and giggled as she unbuttoned and unzipped 
me.  When we were both naked we toured my room.  Both rooms had doors that 
opened into the bathroom.  Doors that were never closed after that.

	That night, when we got home after dinner, we soaked in the tub together 
and then took turns shaving each other.  After a lot of testing we agreed 
that licking a bare pussy was much more pleasant.  Our testing has gone on 
for almost a year now.

The End


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