Message-ID: <24064asstr$957931803@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Posted-and-Mailed: yes From: erota@Idunno.com (Erota) User-Agent: Xnews/03.04.11 X-Original-Message-ID: Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} {ASSD} Quickie reviews of recent stories Date: Wed, 10 May 2000 00:10:03 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation X-Story-Submission: X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, newsman Reviews of some stories posted on Alt Sex Stories Moderated recently. Send any comments to Alt.sex.stories.d until I get round to getting an anonymous mailbox.This is still mine and not for anyone to steal, repost or profit from without my permission. 3 May 00 Formidable by Pendragon {MF romantic} A beautiful tale of a husband and wife loving and nurturing each other. Brought a tear to my eye but didn't strain the trousers. On the 4 PM Express by wm winds A woman sits on a train and fantasises about the man opposite. Lots of stockinged thighs rubbing and pussies moistening but we reach our destination before anything happens. A pleasant trip none the less. A Real Girl parts 1 & 2 by Vicky Tern This one really is a bit weird. Beth caught her husband, Heath, in her red silk one afternoon so now she has conviced him to dress up as a woman three evenings a week and let Bill fuck him while Beth goes out on the town with Christine - Bill's wife. Heath is starting to enjoy it so much that Beth has nearly persuaded him to have the operation and become Heather for good, despite his protests that he is a transvestite not a transexual. Meanwhile Bill has developed a taste for men... The story is told as Beth and Heath(er) get dressed up. The sex is reported and recalled but the main part of the story is not the sex but the way Beth manipulates and leads Heath(er) to do her will. The Private Party part 3 3 May 00 The West's are at a swop party and the action is starting to get hot as part 3 opens. She gets it on with the massive black football player while he gets hot and heavy withe the football player's wife. Then it's all change and on to the next partner. The sex is graphically described. The women are beautiful and willing. The men are large and loving. Mostly couple sex, oral and vaginal, with a woman getting it both ends for a finale. It got me stroking. Banged in Bahrain by Dr Spin An Ace Dyson adventure. Ace shags a red hot redhead in the disabled toilet at Bahrain airport. This woman is furious. She's stuck in this airport with no bar, her husband is fast asleep and her flight is hours late. when Ace propositions her she doesn't know whether to kick him, fuck him or slap him so she does all three. Great. My only quibble is that Bahrain Airport has in fact got a very good bar where I've had an excellent G+T (that's a gin and tonic - get your mind out of the gutter). Lara Croft, the Pixilated Pixie and I What happens if you score the maximum points at Tomb Raider? According to this author what happens is that Lara does a quick change into a cheerleader outfit then zaps you into the game with her, but just as your about to have your wicked way the monsters are back and you're crawling through caves following her mini skirt covered ass. Soon she has all the monsters dead and you get down to some hot sex and satisfy her in every hole. Quite nice descriptions of sex with Lara, including one scene with her tied spreadeagled while you take advantage to lick her off before you untie her. One Bad Apple I don't no how to describe this one without spoiling the story all I'm saying is it had me laughing out loud at my computer. Enjoy. The Story of Jenny Part 8 - Hard Cindy and the Birthday party Spanking, spanking and more spanking. Afternoon Delight by Lotuseater The bosses wife and his secretary get it on. BACK IN THE SADDLE AGAIN Wilfred and Sheila move from the East to Texas and learn how real cowboys treat their women. The women are tied down, fucked, gang banged and humiliated and they love every minute. The sex is fairly graphic but the real attention is given to the scene's where the women are humiliated. Sheila begging Wilf's boss to fuck her; Wilf and his boss bargaining over trading Sheila for another 'heifer'; Sheila being branded so everyone will know who she belongs to. Not my scene but if this's what you like then you'll like this. May 8 Thingies by Virtual Scott Tracy doesn't like medical examinations but her Mom says she has to go. As she strips nurse Kara notices the blue goo oozing out of her... Wierd shit. Seasonal Kisses By Desdmona An author who puts as much into describing the feel of a kiss as the others put into their kinks. An author who savours the sensual feel of the perfect word on her tongue No sex just four kisses but I liked it. Taking Care of Mom BY: Phil Phantom Little Angie has a new job with Chester and when she comes home with her bottom striped her Mom recognises a likeminded soul. Mom and Chester team up to.. I'm sorry that's all I read. Not my sort of thing. First Story... "Melanie" Melanie talks dirty and lets the author glimpse her pussy. I quite like the style and look forward to more from this author - with some sex next time? The Ape Girl By Author Unknown Blair is gorgeous and sexy but the preppies she meets at the formal dinner don't do it for her so she daydreams about her first time - under the tropical rainforest with a native boy when she was twelve - then her best friend comes by with a hairy hunk - just the way Blair likes 'em - and they have a threesome. Next we find her on a liner where she gets fucked by a hairy stoker. She arrives in Africa and they capture a gorilla for their study of it's social habits however after living with the gorilla for a week, in ever growing intimacy, he escapes, grabs Blair and carries her off into the jungle. Next follows a wild bacchanal as Blair fucks every male in the pack and some of the females, front and back and two at a time. Whew. The sex is hot. The woman is randy. The males are masterful but gentle (mostly) and, of course, hairy. The author takes more time describing the males than the females which makes me suspect the author is a woman but the story is none the worse for that. May 9 Remembering Lorraine parts 1, 2 & 3 by Mr Spraycan Roger remembers when he was a lad, staying with Peggy, his next door neighbour, and her three daughters. He spies on Peggy spanking Lorraine but then they catch him wanking. "You're turn tonorrow Roger". First Peggy spanks him then the four girls beat him round the house till he's black and blue. Learning from Allison parts 1 & 2 16 year old John and his first time with 21 year old Allison. Nice romantic and sexy. The Challenge. by Fiery Ermine After too much wine straight Susan bets lesbian Leslie can't make her orgasm; of course she loses and has to pay the forfeit - make Leslie come in front of all their girlfriends Lots of nicely described licking and finger fucking and squirting as Susan finds she isn't as straight as she thought. Shower Surprise by Fiery Ermine After the events in 'The Challenge' (above) Susan wants to forget what happened but her friend Christine watched the whole thing and can't forget. Christine sneaks in and joins Susan in the shower. Susan wants to be 'normal' but it just feels too good! -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: | | FAQ: Moderator: | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Archive: Hosted by Alt.Sex.Stories Text Repository | |, an entity supported entirely by donations. | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+