Message-ID: <20228eli$9902250456@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com Subject: The Annex Reviews, 2/24/99 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-transfer-encoding: 7bit Content-type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <4eb9c0d.36d4c889@aol.com> X-Is-Review: yes Another batch of stories for you all! I'd say more but I'm sick. The stories: The Staff of Radames, by HotScribe (M/F, mast, fantasy) The Treasure Box, by HotScribe (M/F/F, fantasy) Eddie Does Hot Debby, by Hot Debby (M/F cons, inter) CD's Magical Skin Love Cream, by J. B. Mast (M, M/M mast, SF) Return to the Valley, Part 1, by Leviticus (BDSM, slaves) La Charmeuse, by Bronwen SM (Art) Charmed, by Vickie Tern (Femdom, TG, art) The Staff of Radames, Book 2 of The Erotic Adventures of Solomon Magus [A+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/14/99 Author: HotScribe Address: woodheam@cadvision.com The Treasure Box, Book 3 of The Erotic Adventures of Solomon Magus [A+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/14/99 Author: HotScribe Address: woodheam@cadvision.com These two stories are Books 2 and 3 of "The Erotic Adventures of Solomon Magus," a series about a wizard in a fantasy world of spells, sinister bazaars, and warrior woman that is slightly reminiscent of Fritz Leiber's Nehwon. The adventures themselves will be fairly standard to regular readers of the ASS newsgroups (a dildo in 2 and a 3-way in 3) but they are given a humorous, magical spin by the fantasy setting. In spite of being called "books" both pieces were pretty short and the writing, as usual for this author, has a succinct, tight excellence that is not without a sense of humor. In this excerpt, Magus receives a gift from a paramour: "What shall I do with a box, Jamila?" I inquired with a chuckle. "My box you may fill any time," she answered with a sly look. "But, nay! it is the contents of the box which I want you to see." That said, she unlocked the lid and flipped it open. The object within was, to be sure, an intricately and delicately carved representation of some man's erect member, complete with veins and sac and bulbous head. Its total length from tip to base was about the size of my foot. I looked at Jamila. "And what, pray tell, is this?" An amused smile crossed her face. "I would have thought you to be familiar with such an item, since, of course, you possess one..." Quality sexual fantasy in a fantasy world, right up there with anything of Elf's. Eddie Does Hot Debby [B] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/14/99 Author: Hot Debby Address: hot_debby@hotmail.com Hey, did anyone remember the story "Debby Becomes a Slut" that appeared around the beginning of the year? Well I didn't either, but this story was apparently written in response to that, a form of exchange patterned more after cybersex than any sort of literary exchange: "You are thrashing on the bed now and calling me sugary-sweet then nasty-naughty names as your lush white body CUMS again and again! I LOVE eating my Hot Debby (or should I say my Hot Little Debbie Snack?)" (The narrator is a black man.) The piece actually came within 2 centimeters of being a parody, but the gushy enthusiasm (that is, if a real man in lust with Little Debby was actually writing this) redeemed things somewhat. The piece was readable for this reason alone, as it really wasn't much of a story, and probably wouldn't interest anyone who wanted to settle down with a good story. CD's Magical Love Skin Cream [B+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/14/99 Author: B.B. Mast Address: Mastwords1@aol.com A compulsive masturbator--presented as an everyday, normal guy, 'cept for this little prob--becomes strangely attracted to his own sperm. Soon he's using it in place of mayonnaise in his tuna fish sandwiches, but discovers an even better use--as moisturizer. He mixes it with several other secret ingredients and soon women are falling all over him. The formula is so successful he recruits some of his buddies to provide more raw product, and by the end of the story his moisturizer business is taking off and he's soliciting more sperm from others. It's hard to take a story like this seriously as porn; it's more of a long, extended joke in which the author tries to see how tall he can spin his tale. Interesting, but not really arousing. Return to the Valley, Part 1 [B+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/1/99 Author: Leviticus Address: leviticus@fm-net.com This story is part one of a multi-part series, and it concerns the adventures of a female keeper in a human kennel that specializes in taking care of subs while their doms go on vacation. The tone is realistic, natural and genial rather than violent and degrading, with the day-to-day operation of the kennel worked out in good detail. However, while the author's ideas are interesting, his or her way of structuring a story is not--things get talky and bogged down in unnecessary detail. If the author could get things moving more swiftly and eagerly, this looks like the start of a pretty good tale. The only element that pokes holes in the logic of the whole setup is why any sub would rather sit in a kennel in a renovated warehouse than visit Mexico or Europe with their dom. As far as punishment goes there are gluttons and then there are gluttons, but this is really going above and beyond the call of subhood. La Charmeuse [A] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/3/99 Author: Bronwen SM Address: bronwen@anon.nymserver.com Charmed [A+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 2/8/99 Author: Vickie Tern Address: vickietern@aol.com These two stories were written in response to writer Matt Twassel, who put out a request for stories based on a particular picture (http://www2.iinet.com/art/19th/english/misc/gleyre1.jpg) of the classical nude-lady-showing-her-naughty-bits type. Both writers, characteristically, ran with it in a direction of their own choosing. Bronwen SM gives a short, humorous piece with an English flavor depicting the model's eventual frustration with the cold air of the studio blowing across her naked bum. However, the real surprise here was the Vickie Tern story, which not only captures the essence of the painting but conveys a good grasp of art theory as well. Tern is better known for TG/femdom tales set in the modern world, but this excursion proves she's adept at historicals as well, and even manages to catch the cadences of Victorian-era prose. A notorious seducer of women visits an artist friend and is in turn seduced (visually that is) by the model the painter has hired, in particular her buttocks: Unawares, I fell to my knees! "Oh, God!" I cried out. "Heavenly God!" There in the sun's divine radiance shone those perfect globes, her buttocks, plump, gorgeous, tender, ravishing, glowing with a brilliant inner lumininescence! I felt an overwhelming urge to abase myself before them, worship them, shower them with kisses! "God!" I cried out again. I was amazed now to find I was indeed on my knees. But I couldn't stand up again! She looked over her shoulder at me. "You'd love to kiss my ass right now, wouldn't you?" she said. Incredible! She knew? "Yes!" I cried out. Tears sprang out of my eyes and diffused the effulgent reflected light pouring from her naked derriere. Rich tones of color I wanted to eat! Then story then turn into a femdom fable that veers into magical realism territory. Highly recommended, even if you don't like transgender or femdom tales. Comments to: ladycyrrh@aol.com Website---> http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----