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Another batch of stories for you all!
I'd say more but I'm sick.
The stories:
The Staff of Radames, by HotScribe (M/F, mast, fantasy)
The Treasure Box, by HotScribe (M/F/F, fantasy)
Eddie Does Hot Debby, by Hot Debby (M/F cons, inter)
CD's Magical Skin Love Cream, by J. B. Mast (M, M/M mast, SF)
Return to the Valley, Part 1, by Leviticus (BDSM, slaves)
La Charmeuse, by Bronwen SM (Art)
Charmed, by Vickie Tern (Femdom, TG, art)
The Staff of Radames, Book 2 of The Erotic Adventures of Solomon
Magus [A+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/14/99
Author: HotScribe
Address: woodheam@cadvision.com
The Treasure Box, Book 3 of The Erotic Adventures of Solomon
Magus [A+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/14/99
Author: HotScribe
Address: woodheam@cadvision.com
These two stories are Books 2 and 3 of "The Erotic Adventures of
Solomon Magus," a series about a wizard in a fantasy world of
spells, sinister bazaars, and warrior woman that is slightly
reminiscent of Fritz Leiber's Nehwon. The adventures themselves
will be fairly standard to regular readers of the ASS newsgroups
(a dildo in 2 and a 3-way in 3) but they are given a humorous,
magical spin by the fantasy setting. In spite of being called
"books" both pieces were pretty short and the writing, as usual
for this author, has a succinct, tight excellence that is not
without a sense of humor. In this excerpt, Magus receives a gift
from a paramour:
"What shall I do with a box, Jamila?" I inquired with a
chuckle.
"My box you may fill any time," she answered with a sly look.
"But, nay! it is the contents of the box which I
want you to see." That said, she unlocked the lid and flipped it
open.
The object within was, to be sure, an intricately and
delicately carved representation of some man's erect
member, complete with veins and sac and bulbous head. Its total
length from tip to base was about the size of my foot.
I looked at Jamila. "And what, pray tell, is this?"
An amused smile crossed her face. "I would have thought
you
to be familiar with such an item, since, of
course, you possess one..."
Quality sexual fantasy in a fantasy world, right up there with
anything of Elf's.
Eddie Does Hot Debby [B]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/14/99
Author: Hot Debby
Address: hot_debby@hotmail.com
Hey, did anyone remember the story "Debby Becomes a Slut" that
appeared around the beginning of the year? Well I didn't either,
but this story was apparently written in response to that, a form
of exchange patterned more after cybersex than any sort of
literary exchange: "You are thrashing on the bed now and
calling me sugary-sweet then nasty-naughty names as your lush
white body CUMS again and again! I LOVE eating my Hot Debby
(or should I say my Hot Little Debbie Snack?)" (The narrator is a
black man.)
The piece actually came within 2 centimeters of being a parody,
but the gushy enthusiasm (that is, if a real man in lust with Little
Debby was actually writing this) redeemed things somewhat. The
piece was readable for this reason alone, as it really wasn't much
of a story, and probably wouldn't interest anyone who wanted to
settle down with a good story.
CD's Magical Love Skin Cream [B+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/14/99
Author: B.B. Mast
Address: Mastwords1@aol.com
A compulsive masturbator--presented as an everyday, normal
guy, 'cept for this little prob--becomes strangely attracted to his
own sperm. Soon he's using it in place of mayonnaise in his tuna
fish sandwiches, but discovers an even better use--as moisturizer.
He mixes it with several other secret ingredients and soon women
are falling all over him. The formula is so successful he recruits
some of his buddies to provide more raw product, and by the end
of the story his moisturizer business is taking off and he's
soliciting more sperm from others.
It's hard to take a story like this seriously as porn; it's more of a
long, extended joke in which the author tries to see how tall he
can spin his tale. Interesting, but not really arousing.
Return to the Valley, Part 1 [B+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/1/99
Author: Leviticus
Address: leviticus@fm-net.com
This story is part one of a multi-part series, and it concerns the
adventures of a female keeper in a human kennel that specializes
in taking care of subs while their doms go on vacation. The tone
is realistic, natural and genial rather than violent and degrading,
with the day-to-day operation of the kennel worked out in good
detail. However, while the author's ideas are interesting, his or
her way of structuring a story is not--things get talky and
bogged down in unnecessary detail. If the author could get things
moving more swiftly and eagerly, this looks like the start of a
pretty good tale. The only element that pokes holes in the logic of
the whole setup is why any sub would rather sit in a kennel in a
renovated warehouse than visit Mexico or Europe with their dom.
As far as punishment goes there are gluttons and then there are
gluttons, but this is really going above and beyond the call of
subhood.
La Charmeuse [A]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/3/99
Author: Bronwen SM
Address: bronwen@anon.nymserver.com
Charmed [A+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSM
When posted: 2/8/99
Author: Vickie Tern
Address: vickietern@aol.com
These two stories were written in response to writer Matt Twassel,
who put out a request for stories based on a particular picture
(http://www2.iinet.com/art/19th/english/misc/gleyre1.jpg) of
the classical nude-lady-showing-her-naughty-bits type. Both
writers, characteristically, ran with it in a direction of their own
choosing. Bronwen SM gives a short, humorous piece with an
English flavor depicting the model's eventual frustration with
the cold air of the studio blowing across her naked bum.
However, the real surprise here was the Vickie Tern story, which
not only captures the essence of the painting but conveys a good
grasp of art theory as well. Tern is better known for TG/femdom
tales set in the modern world, but this excursion proves she's
adept at historicals as well, and even manages to catch the
cadences of Victorian-era prose. A notorious seducer of women
visits an artist friend and is in turn seduced (visually that is) by
the model the painter has hired, in particular her buttocks:
Unawares, I fell to my knees! "Oh, God!" I cried out. "Heavenly
God!"
There in the sun's divine radiance shone those perfect
globes, her buttocks, plump, gorgeous, tender, ravishing,
glowing with a brilliant inner lumininescence! I felt an
overwhelming urge to abase myself before them, worship them,
shower them with kisses!
"God!" I cried out again. I was amazed now to find I was
indeed on my knees. But I couldn't stand up again!
She looked over her shoulder at me. "You'd love to kiss my
ass right now, wouldn't you?" she said.
Incredible! She knew?
"Yes!" I cried out. Tears sprang out of my eyes and
diffused the effulgent reflected light pouring from her
naked derriere. Rich tones of color I wanted to eat!
Then story then turn into a femdom fable that veers into magical
realism territory.
Highly recommended, even if you don't like transgender or
femdom tales.
Comments to: ladycyrrh@aol.com
Website---> http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh
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