Message-ID: <19102eli$9901220428@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: snuffering@aol.com (Snuffering) Subject: Mick's reward (Incest?, NC, Snuff) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <19990115040246.00912.00000380@ng20.aol.com> The usual disclamers. People too young, immature, mentally disturbed or uptight should not read this story. It is a work of fiction in which names have been changed to protect the author. Any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism or creative input is welcomed. Flamers need not waste my time or theirs Now on with the story Mick's Payment One of my first captures- was not my choice. I wanted a buddy of mine, Mick, to help me set up a girl I desired. The girl lived around the corner from him and his garage would allow quick seclusion once we had her. Plus a second person would make the target more manageable. In exchange for his help, I'd planned to give Mick a shot before I finished with her. But Mick's desires were a little more ambitious. I liked teenagers, while Mick preferred them a little older. So while he had no qualms about helping (or about my choice), he wanted a favor in return- my help to get a young woman to suit his tastes. I hesitated- but decided it was only fair that I risk for him what I was asking him to risk for me. I decided that my cousin, Ellen, might meet his requirements. She was 23, auburn hair, hazel eyes and had a fine figure. She was living with her parents in a single house. At the time I was doing a little work for my aunt which gave me access to her keys. I simply made a duplicate set and waited for them to take a vacation. It took a couple of months but finally my aunt and uncle went away for the weekend. I got Mick to drive us up the house. My original plan had been to hide in the house while Ellen was out, but Mick pointed out the risk if she came back with company. Instead we waited until about midnight then staked out the house. We waited for Ellen to arrive home and proceed inside. Luckily she was alone. Then once we saw her lights go out, we approached the house. I went up to the first floor and quietly unlocked the front door- then tossed the keys to Mick so he could open the door from the garage. We now had both exits to the house covered. I opened the front door as slowly as possible and crept into the darkened living room. My first objective was to take the phone off the hook after disconnecting the receiver. No calls were coming in to wake her and she wasn't making any out for help. I had about 30 seconds to get to the top of the steps before Mick would open the downstairs door to Ellen's room. This was only my 3rd attempt at a rape and my first in someone else's house. I was sure one of us would trip over something and Ellen would hear us. But the hall downstairs was reasonable empty and I had been in this house enough that I avoided walking into anything. I even managed to negotiate the steps down to Ellen's room in relative silence. Ellen lay on her side facing the back wall. I held my breath and tried to monitor hers. Once I was sure she was still reasonably sound asleep, I crept to the other door and let Mick in. We slipped our masks on and approached the bed. Mick pulled off a strip of wide electrical tape and I slipped out the set of handcuffs from my jacket pocket. As I grabbed her arms and pulled them behind her, he secured the tape over her mouth. She awoke struggling, but before she was fully awake enough to really resist her hands were pinned and her mouth covered. From this point it was Mick's show. I had no qualms about incest- I had started my sex life by raping my sister. But I let Mick have her with the understanding that he would let me have my girl to myself. Mick wanted me there, though, as insurance. He figured a second person would intimidate Ellen and even if it didn't I could help catch her if she escaped. He made an unsuccessful attempt at masking his voice. Pretty much, he sounded like Mick with a bad cold. "Let's just put our cards on the table, cunt. My buddy and me are here to have a good time. Now you can have a good time too or you can have the worst night of your life. I personally like live partners, but my buddy could fuck your dying corpse and still get off on it. So if you are a good girl we'll have fun together, otherwise we'll have fun with you." Mick reached over and stroked Ellen's cheek. I could see her trying not to shiver at the touch. His hand traveled down, cupping Ellen's left breast as she pulled away. Slowly he moved his hand down farther pulling back the blankets until she lay in just her bed clothes- a glossy lavender night gown with matching bra and panties. Mick stepped back to admire her as he pulled a small carpet knife from his back pocket. "You know- I used to just love Christmas. All the pretty gifts to open. Then hours of fun playing after they were opened" With that he began slowly slicing up the side of Ellen's gown. He took his time, being careful to slice only the fabric of the gown. While he worked I stood at the foot of the bed giving my cousin the once over. Even in the dim light I could see the curves of her breasts as they filled out the gown and later as they strained against the bra beneath. I watched as the gown gave way to her tanned thighs and an ass that filled out the purple panties quite well. I started to wish I hadn't promised her to Mick- but then again without his help I'd never have tried this. When Mick had the gown off he applied the knife to her bra and then to her panties. I envied Mick all the more as he revealed Ellen in all her glory. She was lying very still while he removed her clothes- most probably in hopes Mick wouldn't cut her but accident. But as he finished she rolled suddenly, swinging her legs toward Mick and trying to sit up on the bed. She caught Mick in the chest and he stumbled back. I was startled momentarily by the move and lost another few seconds watching the way her flesh moved as she acted. She had gotten halfway to the door before I caught up to her. We landed on the floor hard- with her taking the brunt of the fall. She squirmed beneath me and I could feel her asscheeks against my chest. It was rather distracting and for a second I nearly forgot that this girl was Mick's toy- not mine. The fact was brought home as Mick grabbed a handful of Ellen silky hair and drug the girl back to the bed. He pushed her face down over the side. He laced his arms through her bound ones and pulled back. "If you like it rough, BITCH, then so be it. I'm going to fuck you so brutally that you'll have my cum in your throat, even if you don't suck me off." He pulled back so that his dick just barely inside her and then rammed forward. Ellen screamed beneath her gag. He continued to pull in and out violently and increasingly quickly. With each thrust I heard Ellen screams. Her eyes were squeezed tight. Blood ran from both her lip and nose. After what seemed like a half hour- was probably only about a minute Mick came. As he pulled out he released Ellen's arms and flipped her over so she faced him. He kissed her face and worked down to her neck and then to her chest. He licked her round her breasts then began to suck each until her nipples stood erect on both breasts. Then suddenly I heard Ellen shriek behind the tape. I looked to see a trickle of blood running from her left breast, where Mick had bitten her. Mick turned partially toward me- "Damn she is tasty. I hope she's still worth fucking by the time you get her, man. She's liable to be all worn out by then." I just chuckled- not trusting that Ellen wouldn't recognize my voice as soon as I did more. Mick went back to work on her right breast. Her shrieks grew more frantic and insistent. When Mick next pulled back his head Ellen's once lovely chest was covered with bite marks and streaked with blood. Ellen herself was whimpering and quaking. Something about the whimpering must have set Mick off as he struck her across the face until she stopped. He then roughly grabbed a handful of hair and pulled her head back. "Now, whore, you are going to suck me off. I know it must occur that you could hurt me doing this. But if you do- my friend over there will make your last minutes unbearable. Everything so far will seem like the most pleasant fuck you ever had in comparison- understand." Mick kept a firm hold on Ellen's hair, pulling the tape off with his other hand. When she kept her lips firmly closed, he punched her in the stomach. He rammed his dick into her mouth when she opened her mouth with the outrush of breath. She tried to pull away or push him out to no avail. After a few minutes he pulled out and violently turned her back around. He forced her face into the mattress as he rammed his dick against her ass. He yelled for me to gag the bitch and quick. I was uncomfortable with getting that close to Mick- I know I wouldn't want some guy hanging over me at this type of moment. Still Ellen first scream made me overcome my reluctance. I quickly reattached the tape and retreated from the room. I could hear muffled screams for the next few minutes. I returned to find Mick with his dick in Ellen's mouth again- but this time she was obviously not breathing. Mick smiled at me "I was too much for this bitch. I literally fucked her to death. What a fucking rush. Let's do this again next week- but this time with two girls, so you can join in on the fun." I was silent as we loaded Ellen's body into the car. We dumped her in a park a few counties over. I decided that I really didn't Mick's help that much. He was not someone I wanted around while I played with prey. -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----