Message-ID: <18667eli$9901212116@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: "Martina Lee" Subject: Porno Queen (Part 2 of 6/17 from Oh, Susana) FM, video, FM, mast. Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-Id: <199812281743.JAA12849@f274.hotmail.com> This is the sixth chapter of my book of short stories, collectively entitled "Oh, Susana". I am posting all 17 chapters, including reposts of the four chapters submitted previously. Please feel free to comment. WARNING: This is adult entertainment only, dealing with sex and sexual subjects in explicit language and detail. If you are under age for that kind of thing, leave now. This story, and others in the Oh, Susana series, may be reposted on ASSM, and redirected to ASS, but may not be put to commercial use by anyone but myself. I am willing to discuss them on ASSD or you can email me at Oh, Susana! The erotic adventures of a South Seas sexpot by Martina Lee 6. Porno Queen (Part 2) (NOTE: This won't make much sense unless you've already read Part 1. Susana, her husband and her lover are watching the videotape they have just made in the bedroom. -- Martina) The Kiss. The Bed. Peter's shirt falling to the floor. Susana on the bed, impatient, inviting. "Love me." Peter bending to work his feet out of his trousers, then scrambling between her legs and bending to kiss her again. The gap between their bodies, in closeup, Susana's fingers drawing down the front of his pants and fondling his cock. Tugging, stroking. His cock — a dark, drooping, rubbery hose, morphing under her ministrations into a stiff and shining mahogany shaft, a fat blunt-tipped arrow neatly bisecting the obtuse angle formed by belly and thigh. Neil slipped his left hand under Susana's arm and cupped her breast. Without taking her eyes off the screen, she tiptoed her own left hand across his thigh and explored the mound in his laplap. It gained in stature, straining against the bright cotton fabric. On the screen, Susana, naked now, and Peter on his back, his cock twitching as she works his pants down his legs. Then half-kneeling on the bed, leaning over him to milk his prick, glancing briefly at the camera, then bending lower and covering him with her mouth. A low shot, in close-up, her lips sliding smoothly down the glistening shaft, down, down, then up, up until they clear its swollen tip. Then down, down again to her fingers girdling its base. Up. Down. Up. Down. Up. She stares brazenly at the audience, laves the tip with her tongue, and her eyes sparkle as she plunges again, moving her hand away and diving, diving until her lips are nested firmly in wiry pubic hair. Peter choked on his beer and Susana swung her attention from the TV to look at him. His face was flushed, his eyes were riveted on the screen, and his state of mind was clearly evident from the bulge in his bathtowel. Susana turned her head and licked Neil's throat. He shifted carefully in his seat, unhitching the laplap from around his waist as he settled into a semi-reclining position, and she folded back the overlapping layers of cloth to get at his cock. It sprang into her hand, hot and hard. He squeezed her breast, rolled the erect nipple in the gap between thumb and forefinger, and she wriggled contentedly, sliding her head down his chest to rest on the warm, softly curving swell of his upper abdomen. She blew gently on the veined upper surface of his cock, pressed it backwards and trapped the knob lightly between her lips. Her voice from the TV, urgent, demanding: "Fuck me now. Fuck me nicely." The business with the bolster, cutting to a gynaecologically clinical closeup of her cunt, her fingers parting the purplish petals of her labia to reveal the glistening blood-red bud of her clitoris, the swollen urethra, the yawning yearning void of her vagina. Peter between her upraised legs, sliding his slug slowly into her slit and then, spurred on by her entreaties ("Fuck me. I need to be fucked"), settling into a spring-loaded rhythm of rapid thrust and recoil. Another closeup — her head, raised off the pillow, lips parted and panting, eyes bright and focused intently on the action, revealed as the scene switches to the shadowy notch between her parted thighs. Peter's prick, pounding her pussy. Neil's cock stirred in Susana's mouth and he squeezed her nipple. She rolled her head against his belly, her lips sliding further down the shaft, then rolled back to her original position and nibbled gently at the knob. Her voice from the TV, breathless, teasing: "Love . . . to . . . be . . . FUCKED . . . Love . . . your . . . great . . . big . . . stiff . . . cock . . . in . . . my . . . pussy!" She flicked another glance at Peter, and caught him coaxing his erection into a more comfortable attitude beneath his towel. She chuckled softly, treated Neil to another tour of her mouth, and returned her attention to the screen. Susana on her hands and knees, Peter on his knees behind her, his big hands grasping her hips, his cock cycling steadily in and out of her cunt. "Film her face. She laughs at me when I come. I want her to see what SHE looks like." Susana's face, front on, from bed level. Filling the screen. She grins mischievously at the audience. Eyes crossed, tongue protruding. Then her head is jerked back and her eyes widen in shock. Her mouth gapes, and her breathing breaks up into explosive bursts. "Yes," she sobs. "Fuck me harder. HARDER." A longer shot, Peter looming over her like a mad charioteer, his fingers tangled in her hair, his face contorted with exertion. Susana moaning, one hand on the bed, the other tucked beneath her belly. "Fuck. Cock. Yes. Cunt. Shit. Yes, shit. Yes. Yess. Fuck me. Harder. HARDER. Shit. Fuck. ShitshitshitcuntFUUUUCK!" Zoom. Her face, again in closeup, is barely recognisable in the throes of orgasm. Susana couldn't watch. She closed her eyes, blotting out the ugliness, recalling the ecstasy, trying to shut out the animal sounds that surely couldn't have sprung from HER throat. Bastards, she thought. I hate them both. Then she giggled, tongued the tip of Neil's cock, and took it on a round trip to her tonsils and back. It proved such a popular excursion that she mentally sold him another ticket and went round again. And again. Then, ignoring his muttered pleading, she levered herself upright, swung her legs to the floor, and reached for her wine. She drained the glass, offered it to Neil and told him: "More." He heaved himself to his feet, pulling his laplap around him, took the glass and disappeared into the kitchen. Peter's voice from the TV: "Suck it, trollop. Suck it off." Susana hitched her bottom forward to the edge of the cushion, lay back and spread her legs, toyed with her pussy as she watched herself worshiping at Peter's feet and then taking his cock in her mouth. In his chair, Peter was still engrossed in the screen. Neil's voice: " . . . hands. They get in the way of the shot. Just use your mouth." Her mouth, lips pulled back to reveal her teeth, diving dangerously on to Peter's dick then dutifully following orders (Neil's voice: "Out, all the way out, so I can see the tip. That's right. Lick your lips. Now in again. More. More. Out. In") and settling into a steady cadence of long, slow strokes. Peter's face in closeup, staring, panting: "Oh shit, yess. Fantastic. Suck me off." Neil returned from the kitchen bearing drinks, handed a can of beer to Peter, placed another by the end of the couch, and offered Susana her glass. She lifted her hand from her crotch, took the wine, drank half of it, then handed it back. As Neil bent to place the glass on the coffee table she reached for his laplap and pulled it off, noting with disapproval that his erection had subsided. She motioned him back on to the couch beside her, and he sat on the edge and lay back. Susana took his left hand and laid it between her legs, then slipped her right arm under his left arm and closed her fingers around his sleeping dick. It squirmed happily at her touch and began to wake up. Neil slipped an affectionate finger into her slit and tickled the rim of her vagina. Onscreen, Peter is coming. He clutches his face, his body trembles. Susana stops in midstroke, pulls back from his cock, gripped tightly in her left hand. A suspicion of semen bubbles out of the corner of her mouth. She pumps his prick, flinches as it spits in her face, opens her mouth and leans closer, pumping again. Extreme closeup: Susana's pale pink tongue beckoning from between her gaping lips, the gleaming brown bulbous tip of Peter's cock, the momentary flash of steaming semen leaping the gap like a liquid spark. Disgusting, thought Susana, and licked her lips, as on the screen Peter's cock coughed up more sperm into her eager mouth. Neil's dick staggered erect in her hand and she gave it a friendly squeeze. He responded by plunging two fingers into her cunt. She frigged him gently and he matched her rhythm, his fingers shuttling in and out making soft slurping-plerping noises. Truly disgusting. She smirked to herself and frigged a little faster. Peter tore his attention from the screen and looked fishily in their direction. Susana fluttered her tongue at him and spread her legs wider to improve his view of Neil's hand in her pussy. He took a pull at his beer, fingered his crotch, and watched impassively for a minute or so before turning back to the TV. Round Two. Susana's head a veritable blur of motion, her lips pulling and tearing at Peter's magically resurrected prick. Peter's face, a sweat-streaked study in agonised concentration, nameless emotions chasing each other across his features like clouds in a hurricane. (Susana, on the couch, sniggered and eased her grip on Neil's straining dick, tried a new tactic of sliding her circling fingers slackly up and down its entire length. He showed his appreciation by sliding a third finger into her cunt, then the fourth, and driving them in as far as they would go. Plerp. Plop. Plop. Plerp-slurp-plop. Disgusting. She placed her left hand on top of his, prodded his thumb into the pack, and screwed the whole lot deeper into her pussy. PLERP-plop-plerrrp.) Long shot: Peter, arched backwards like a bow, all aquiver, his chin pointing at the ceiling, his hands on his buttocks, his pelvis pushed forward while Susana, on her knees, works on his cock like a frenzied woodpecker. In out in out in out. Faster. Faster. Deeper. Deeper. Deeper. Close-up: Susana's head, suddenly still, lips clawing at the base of Peter's prick. Peter screams — "FUUUUUCK!" — and her head jerks back about five centimetres, then drives forward again. Back. Forward. Forward. She snorts, gags, and semen spurts past her lips into Peter's pubic hair. Back. Forward. Back. Back. Forward. Back. She lifts her head from his cock, turns her face to his. Her lips, chin and cheeks are wet, speckled with sperm. Susana tugged at Neil's tool, called slyly to Peter, echoing the sound-track: "Like that, my lord?" Mouth agape, he turned to look at her, and grinned. His gaze flicked across Neil's lap, briefly noting the activity there, then focused on her crotch and Neil's bunched fingers and thumb driving slowly in and out of her cunt. His eyes widened. "You like THAT, my lady?" he mimicked. Susana jounced her hips, drawled: "You betcha, bub." She spread her legs even wider, grabbed Neil's hand and forced it in deeper than ever. Peter in near-collapse on the edge of the bed, shivering, drenched in sweat, blinking and wincing as Susana, smiling beatifically, prods his worn-out wick as if testing for signs of life. Finding none, she turns to the camera, wide-eyed and innocent. "Did I do good?" Neil's voice: "You've got goo on your face." Closeup as she gathers the larger gobs with her fingers and pops them into her mouth. She licks her lips, smirks smugly at the audience, and asks again: "Did I do good?" The screen goes blank. After a few moments, Peter got to his feet and switched off the TV, then pressed the stop button on the camcorder. He glanced at the Porno Queen, at her fingers resting lightly on the back of Neil's hand as it rummaged rudely in her frothing pot, at the languid pumping of her right hand wrapped loosely round Neil's reddening prick. "I need to pee," he said, and walked into the bedroom. Susana poked her tongue at his vanishing back, then plucked Neil's hand from her cunt, let go of his cock and stood up. She cleared the things off the coffee table, turned and sat on the edge, facing Neil, lay back and spread her legs. Then she raised a hand, pointed peremptorily at her pussy, and gave the order: "Eat me." Neil sat up and slid to his knees, wedging himself between couch and crotch, and bent to the task. Susana sighed as he soothed and softly sucked her swollen labia, his cunning tongue flicking out at intervals to massage her clitoris or slither around the stretched and stinging verge of her vagina. Peter appeared in the doorway and she beckoned to him. "Kiss me," she said. As he bent to oblige, she tugged the towel free of his waist and let it fall. He was naked beneath it. "Now," she said. "Sit down. Watch." Peter settled back into his chair and sipped his beer, his eyes on Neil's head bobbing gently in her crotch. More out of devilry than desire, although there was that too, Susana began to moan and roll her hips. She turned her head to watch Peter surreptitiously from beneath lowered lashes, noted that his cock was once again showing signs of interest, and moaned louder, more urgently. Neil intensified his efforts, licking and sucking. Susana's hands roamed her breasts and belly, stroking, pinching, caressing. Peter's dick rose cobra-like from between his legs as if to get a better view. His hand scuttled across the top of his thigh, nudged at the shaft and withdrew in guilty confusion. Susana raised her concealing lashes and lowered the boom. "Do it," she said. "Pull your prick." Peter circled his cock with thumb and forefinger, and pumped. It drew itself up to its full height and puffed out its hood. Neil's tongue found an especially sensitive spot and Susana shuddered. Her chest heaved, her legs shook and she plucked passionately at her nipples, gasping and grunting. She grabbed Neil's head, mashed his nose into her damp and trembling pubic mound, then pushed him away. "Fuck me," she panted. "Fuck me now." Neil got to his feet and stood looking down at her, his cock sniffing the air. Susana raised her legs and rested the backs of her ankles on his shoulders. He moved over her, folding her double, her legs supporting his chest and his dick slipping unerringly into her cunt. He dug deep, shifted his weight slightly and dug deeper, drew back and rammed into her again, finally settling into waltz time, his hips slapping into her upturned buttocks twice between every withdrawal. IN-in-out, IN-in-out — Susana gasped again, turned her head to check on Peter. He had slid lower in his chair, his eyes were narrowed, watchful, and the hand tugging at his tool slipped into exact synchronisation with Neil's three-step thrusting — PULL-pull-slide, PULL-pull-slide. Susana reached up a hand and touched Neil's cheek. He huffed with exertion and stepped up the tempo, whirling her away on a mad Gay Gordons — ONE-two-three, ONE-two-three, ONE-two-three — hair flying, eyes flashing, ROUND-and-and ROUND-and-and ROUND-and-and . . . she scrabbled at the table-top, soared into the timeless void of orgasm, abandoning the shameless shuddering shouting shell of her body, to run giggling through the galaxy gathering stars and discovering the Meaning of Life Itself. Hours, days, years later she returned, fitted herself back into her flesh and forced herself to concentrate. Neil, dear sweet Neil, was still looming over her, sweat dripping off his face on to her breast, his dear sweet dick still pounding relentlessly at her palpitating pussy. Susana smiled fondly at him and found her tongue. There was so much to tell him! "Fuck me," she moaned. "Oh, shit, yes, fuck me more." Neil transferred more of his weight to her legs and shifted his dick into overdrive. Susana rolled her head from side to side, caught sight of Peter, his eyes glassy, staring, his hand beating rapidly, mechanically, at his king cobra cock. "Come," said Susana. "Come now." She opened her mouth and licked her lips at him, teasing, cajoling. "Come now. Come." Clear fluid spilled from the tip of his cock and he smeared it around the shaft, beat faster. Neil nickered, lost his rhythm, shoved, groaned, and slumped heavily against Susana's legs, his cock twitching deep inside her cunt. Peter pumped furiously, closed his eyes, shook his head, arched his back and came, spattering himself with sperm from chest to knees. Susana chuckled quietly and waggled her tail. Sperm trickled around the cock in her cunt, leaked over the lip of her vagina, tickled its way south — and she climaxed again. -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----