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This is the third chapter of my book of short stories, collectively
entitled "Oh, Susana". I am posting all 17 chapters, including reposts
of the four chapters submitted previously. Please feel free to comment.
WARNING: This is adult entertainment only, dealing with sex and sexual
subjects in explicit language and detail. If you are under age for that
kind of thing, leave now. This story, and others in the Oh, Susana
series, may be reposted on ASSM, and redirected to ASS, but may not be
put to commercial use by anyone but myself. I am willing to discuss them
on ASSD or you can email me at
Oh, Susana!
The erotic adventures of a South Seas sexpot
by Martina Lee
3. Caught in the Act (Part 2)
Neil climbed on to the bed, his cock swaying at attention, his eyes
burning into hers. "Hold your legs," he said. Susana hooked her hands
under her thighs and pulled them towards her chest. Her feet came up off
the bed and swung apart. Neil shuffled closer. "Higher," he said.
"Wider." She hesitated for a moment, then reached between her knees,
grasped the soles of her feet and pulled until they, and her gaping
cunt, were pointed straight at the ceiling. He loomed over her, and with
some difficulty depressed his weapon to the horizontal and jammed the
tip obliquely into her pussy. Then he placed both hands on the backs of
her thighs, transferred most of his weight to them and forced them
further apart, and plunged.
She gasped in pain as his cock slammed into her cervix. Then his full
weight descended on her upturned thighs as he heaved himself up for the
next thrust, and she gasped again. He had never before intentionally
hurt her, but now he was positively brutal. Bent almost double, her legs
spread to the limit and her knees pushed back almost into her armpits,
she felt she was being ripped apart like a barbecued chicken. Every
thrust, every withdrawal, was pure agony. "Don't," she sobbed as he
crashed and pressed, crashed and pressed, his angry cock spearing deep
into her vitals and his cruel hands pushing, pushing, forcing her legs
further apart at every stroke. "Don't. Please. It hurts. Don't hurt.
Stop. Don't hurt me. Please. Don't." He ignored her pleading. His face
hung over hers, his features a contorted mixture of fury and lust.
"Bitch," he grunted, driving home each word with another womb-crushing
shove. "Fucking, lying, cheating, sneaking BITCH."
Gradually, the pain crossed the threshold from torment to rapture. She
was still pleading with him, but the words were getting mixed up: "Don't
. . . Stop . . . hurt . . . Please . . . Don't . . . Stop . . . Hurt . .
. me . . . Fuck . . . me . . . Hurt me . . . Fuck me . . . fuck me . . .
split me . . . fuck me . . . oh god . . . hurt me, fuck me, fuck me,
harder, fuck me, split me, don't stop, hurtmehurtme . . . please me,
hurt me . . . harder . . . harderharderharderfuckmeeeeee . . ." She
grabbed his head, wrenched it down to hers and kissed him, sucking at
his lips and tongue and whimpering into his open mouth as she climaxed.
When her convulsions subsided, Neil levered himself off her body and
flopped face-up on the bed beside her. Cautiously, wincing as her joints
and muscles returned to their natural alignments, Susana lowered her
legs and rolled on to her side to look at him. Tears of pain and remorse
trickled down her cheeks as she studied his face. His eyes were closed,
his lips bruised and bleeding from the violence of her kisses, and his
breath was coming in shuddering gasps. Susana raised up on her elbow,
leaned over him and softly kissed his eyelids. "I'm sorry," she said.
"I'm so sorry." Without opening his eyes, he reached up a hand and
touched her cheek.
"Finish me off," he said quietly, and there was no more menace in his
voice, only resignation. Susana was confused for a moment, then looked
down his body and saw his cock, still erect and angling obliquely up
over his belly, reddened from its recent abuse and marbled with whitish
strings and patches of whipped sperm. She slid down the bed and licked
him clean. Then she knelt between his calves, leaned forward and took
him into her mouth.
Later, Neil would tell her it was the most incredible blowjob he had
ever experienced. That was praise indeed. When it came to fellatio he
was a connoisseur and she, by virtue of instinct and education, was an
adept. This time, it was instinct uppermost. In spite of the violence he
had just visited on her, she sensed that what he needed was absolute
tenderness. She held him vertical with just the slightest pressure of
her fingers about the base of his penis and mouthed him softly, her lips
enclosing him just behind the glans and her tongue sliding voluptuously
around the tip. Then she "walked" her lips slowly centimetre by
centimetre down the shaft, stopping at each step to press lightly with
lips and tongue, until her mouth was full of throbbing cock. Looking up
from under her brows, she saw that Neil had raised his head to watch. He
reached out a hand and placed it on top of her head, and his cock
twitched in her mouth as he pressed her down another couple of
centimetres.
He sighed audibly, dropped both his head and his hand back to the bed,
and she compressed her lips and slowly, slowly, shaking her head
slightly from side to side, her tongue flattened firmly against the
underside of his cock, she worried her way back to the tip. Then she
repeated the procedure. Slowly, softly, gently, inexorably, she brought
him to the boil, refusing to hurry even when his breathing quickened and
his hips began to heave beneath her.
When she sensed he was on the brink of orgasm, she placed the fingers of
her free hand lightly on the base of his belly and massaged him with a
quick, circular motion. It was a trick which she knew from long
experience helped him to achieve release, and she was instantly
rewarded. He came forever, his legs twitching, his chest heaving, his
juice draining out of him in quick, hot spurts. There was an awful lot
if it, but Susana trapped it all in her mouth and gulped it down,
continued rubbing and sucking even after it was all gone and he begged
her to stop. His dick softened, then shrank in on itself, and she kept
working on it until it was no more than a tiny, trembling, exhausted
mouse nestling nervously in his pubic hair. She gave him a final lick
for good measure, then raised her head, stretched herself full-length
atop his body, and kissed him wetly on the mouth.
His arms went round her and he nuzzled her throat, then rolled her off.
She lay on her back beside him, waiting for the inevitable. He groped
for her hand and twined their fingers together. Then the interrogation
began:
"Who is he?" "Where did you meet him?" "When did you meet him?" "When
did you start screwing him?" Simple questions, simply answered. He
didn't ask whether Peter had seduced her — he knew her well enough to be
sure that, if anything, it was she who had been the aggressor. He didn't
ask whether Peter was a better lover, or had a bigger prick — if he had,
she would have said no, just new and different. That was true — Neil
peppered their sex life with fantasy, blowing her mind as easily and as
frequently as she blew his cock, so that their lovemaking was a total
brain and body experience; Peter, though sweet and intelligent, in bed
was just a big, beautiful, male animal with no imagination. In a way,
that was part of his attraction for her — it was a relief, for a change,
not to have her mind fucked along with her body.
"Do you love him?" She didn't even have to think about it. "No. I love
you. I just fuck him." She lifted their clasped hands to show him their
interlocking fingers, alternating and seemingly inseparable layers of
brown and white, a long-ago-discovered symbol of their union which she
knew meant more to him even than their wedding bands.
"Give him up." Again, she didn't have to think. "No," she said. "I need
him."
"Fuck off then. Go and live with him."
"No. I love you. I want to stay with you."
"Give him up."
"No."
"I'll kick his teeth in."
Susana giggled. The threat was absurd. "No you won't," she said. "You
couldn't."
"I will. I'll kick his fucking teeth in."
She giggled again, rolled over and kissed him. "I need him," she said.
"I truly do."
He sighed and gave in. "All right," he said. "All right, you can keep
him." She squealed delightedly. "I do love you," she said, and kissed
him again. He returned the kiss, then gently pushed her away. "I haven't
finished," he said. "You can have him, but I won't put up with you
sneaking around. If he's going to be your lover, that makes him part of
the family. My brother-in-law? No. Closer than that. Co-husband, or
something. Whatever. I want you here. If you want to fuck him, fuck him
here. Just don't wear yourself out on him. I still want my share of
you." He rolled towards her and slipped his hand between her legs.
"Okay?" She kissed him again. "Yes sir," she said. "Yes yes yes yes yes.
Sir."
Neil withdrew his fingers from her cunt and got up. "Come on, then," he
said. "It's news time." He wrapped a laplap around his waist and stood
waiting for her. Susana picked her knickers off the floor and stepped
into them, thought about pulling on a dress and decided it wasn't
necessary. Neil went ahead of her to the door, opened it, and together
they walked out to tell Peter.
He was sitting dejectedly in the armchair in his underpants, apparently
watching the TV. It wasn't even turned on. He looked towards the door as
it opened, took in Susana's near-naked state, and looked quickly away.
Susana crossed the floor in front of him and stood by the side of the
chair. Neil walked to the dining table at the far end of the room and
lit a cigarette. "She tells me she has to have you," he said to the back
of Peter's head. "I've told her she can." Peter looked wonderingly at
Susana and she reached out and ruffled his hair. "There are certain
conditions," said Neil. "She can tell you about them." He sat down at
the table and picked up the paper.
Susana slid her hand down Peter's chest and under the waistband of his
underpants, and laid hold of his cock. "Come with me," she said. He got
to his feet uncertainly, looked back over his shoulder at Neil. Susana
tugged his tool. "Come on," she said. She shifted her grip, winked at
Neil, and led her stumbling lover by the balls into the spare room. Once
inside, she pushed him on to the bed, then turned back and closed the
door. She stripped off her pants, then his, and sat on his legs, playing
with his prick as she explained the new rules of the game. He was
confused, and embarrassed, and it took him some time to catch on. But
eventually he rose to the occasion, and she had her way with him.
Finally, after about an hour, she lifted herself free of his weary
willy, wiped herself with her knickers and stepped naked and steaming
back into the living room. Neil was still sitting at the table. She took
his hand and led him into their bedroom.
Two days later, Peter moved out of his flat and into the spare room, and
the game of musical beds was born . . .
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