Message-ID: <18383eli$9901211747@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: "Adhara Law" Subject: {ASS/D} A Review of "Spirit of the Season" Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <19981203055241.280.qmail@hotmail.com> X-Is-Review: yes A Review of "Spirit of the Season" by Miss Behavin' I have read a previous story of Miss Behavin's before, and I have decided that she is very, very good at integrating humor and erotica. "Spirit of the Season" is about a man and a woman left with no one to share Christmas with on Christmas Eve. Through some excellent character development and a wonderfully touching scene, we learn why these two are alone on this night. I became entranced with the characters in this story and really felt like I knew them in real life by the end of the story. The dialogue, while in some places perhaps only slightly unrealistic, is great and humorous while still being a great story. The transition into sex is masterfully done and the scene is very vivid and wondefully presented. Being a story of consensual sex with romantic overtones, this was not just erotic but touching as well, without being maudlin -- while this is romance, it's definitely not your average romantic read. I really enjoyed this, and would definitely recommend it to everyone else. Adhara Law ------------------------------------------- Adhara Law: eros_dreams@hotmail.com more of my stories can be read at: http://asuwlink.uwyo.edu/files/Authors/Asta/wwwrte/adhara -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----