Message-ID: <7993eli$9802011544@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: Celeste801@aol.com Subject: Piper's Favorite Stories Reviews 1/3 (A-C) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-transfer-encoding: 7bit Content-type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: X-Is-Review: yes Piper's favorite stories list - reviews 1/3 (A-C) January, 1998 Here's my reviews, or to be more accurate, my short summaries of the stories. I won't bother rating them, since I like all of them (nach!). Story codes included, if the copy I have has them. .... Piper A Friend in Need - Phil Phantom (35k) Down the end of a cul-de-sac, in a quiet suburb, there lives a certain group of neighbors. They have all been living there for years, and they are all friends, more or less. One day, one of the men dies, leaving his wife to fend for herself. As it turns out, while he wasn't bad at earning money and paying the bills, he wasn't so good at looking out for the future. There's no insurance, and a whole heap of gambling debts left to be paid. Like good friends and neighbors, Red and Cheryl take Diane in. After all, they're financially set, and they have room in their house. All goes well for about a week. That's when Cheryl finally can't stand having that beautiful young woman in the house any longer without also having her, if you know what I mean. Cheryl has had every woman in the neighborhood, except Diane. Same as her husband. She decides that she wants a combination domestic and sextoy. And, what Cheryl wants, Cheryl gets. As usual in a Phil Phantom story, Diane secretly wants anything and everything Cheryl can dish out, getting wetter and hotter with each spanking and every step along the road to total toyhood. All the neighbors eventually get involved, as you could easily guess if you've read any of Phil's other stories. The author himself says, "The following story is an uncensored sexual fantasy involving practices that are illegal, immoral, socially unacceptable, and messy. Only mature adults with a firm grasp on reality should venture further. This story promotes nothing, and nothing in this story should be taken seriously..." I agree totally, but would also add that "this story is a gas!" A Joyful Experience - Eros (14k) 16 year old Jason has been going at it hot and heavy with his 14 year old sister Joy for a week, ever since he saw her naked. The only thing they haven't done, yet, is complete the nasty deed. They try to be as quiet as possible so as not to disturb their parents, but Joy just can't help moaning because it feels so good. That's when Momma knocks on the door. A Slave's Gift - Steven S. Davis (6k) If you've read any of SD's stories, you know that he generally writes very intense, very squicky material. This isn't one of those kinds of stories. Instead, it's a brief view into the mind of a woman who is a willing slave. She has chosen to submit her will to a master. Personally, I don't have the mindset for being on either side of that particular fence. The reality of d/s makes my skin crawl. But, the fantasy, the thought of what it might be like, I find extremely intriguing. Here is a story that purifies the ideal of willingly submitting oneself to an ordeal, simply to please another. The fact that the task set is impossible is immaterial. Failure will be punished, but that is also immaterial. It's the attempt that matters. Nothing else exists but the effort required to comply. A very strange, very compelling story. The Addams Family - Shelby Bush (54k) CR 130 10,9.5,9.5 This episode is titled "Eddie Comes to Visit" or "A Wolf in the Fold". Eddie Munster (of The Munsters TV show) has come for a visit with Pugsley Addams (of The Addams Family TV show). Neither of their families could be considered even remotely normal, although "loving" and "secure" might be applicable terms. Wednesday Addams, Morticia Addams, Gomez Addams, Uncle Fester, Lurch, Thing, and Itt, all make appearances, although not everyone gets in on the action. For the first time, we get to "see" what happens behind Gomez' and Morticia's locked bedroom door, what Uncle Fester does while he's alone in the secret passages, and what the two kids do for fun. We also find out one of Eddie's hidden talents. If you've ever watched either of the shows, you know that they're full of sight gags, bad jokes, and ridiculous situations. This story fulfulls all of those expectations. Also, just about any perversion you can name seems normal in their house -- including attempted fratricide and patricide -- all in the name of good, wholesome fun, of course. But, what's Wednesday doing with that puppy? And what's all that green, glowing goo on the inside wall of the secret passage, right under the spy hole? Now I know why cousin Itt is called cousin Itt. The Adventures of a Supergirl - Sharon Best (740k) Once upon a time, the Supergirl mythos was strictly within the purview of the writers and artists at DC comics. With the advent of fanzines, cons, computer networks, bulletin boards, and now the internet, those days are long since history. Fans of differing backgrounds, interests, and varying ability, have claimed her for their own. In this incarnation, one that takes place in Sharon's own version of Earth, Supergirl is just that - a Super Girl. She's a lady of steel, everywhere. Normal men just don't do it for her, if you know what I mean. They can't, since the men from Krypton, when aroused, have a closer resemblance to porn stars than normal people. Also, since she has a vagina of steel, with muscles that can deform iron, she has to be very, very careful if the person she's with doesn't happen to have a Super Dong. What happens if she's not careful? Think of a vice, a very powerful vice, squeezing without mercy ... Don't feel too sorry for the lady, because in this particular universe, she is not alone. You see, Kryptonians are only one member race of a loosely related variety of similar species spread throughout the galaxy, and through similar universes separated from ours by only the thinnest of veils. And besides which, there's some fun things that can be done with a room full of body builders and their associated equipment. In order to keep things interesting, several of the similar species are not exactly benevolent. Humans, even as weak and intellectually stunted as we are, would make adequate slaves. Lucky for us, a few of those allied species also feel a sense of duty to protect immature races from exploitation. We have both friends and enemies, although the dividing line between the one and the other is rather thin, and moves around a lot. All of Sharon's stories are written in a plain, straightforward manner, using imaginative setting and even more imaginative plots. They delve deep into the psyches of her various characters. This allows us, as readers, to easily slip into the roles of any of the protagonists at will. I found this story to be particularly interesting and engrossing. The Adventures of Me and Martha Jane - Santo J Romeo (1130k) CR 78 10,10,10 Often, when people hear that a story involves children and sex, they either start slavering at the mouth, or foaming at the mouth. There doesn't appear to be much in the way of a middle ground. Well, maybe this story is it. A young Steven is befrended by his next door neighbor, Martha Jane. When the story starts, they are 6 and 15, respectively. No, Martha doesn't have a "thing" for young kids. Rather, she has a respect for a young, bright, inquisitive child. For years, their friendship grows. As Steven gets older, their relationship changes. He wants to know about everything, like where babies come from, how they are made, how the radio works, what's it like to talk on the telephone - everything. Martha, rather than plying him with the old platitudes and standbys, like his mother and relatives do, tells him the truth. Once he has that, then his interest changes to other things. That's how it starts, Steven's infatuation with the older woman. It carries on for years. Physicality is crept up upon, slowly, as a natural consequence of their prior actions. Nothing terribly sordid or horrible happens. That is, until Martha moves away to the big city. Santo's writing style is quite good. There are many details and aspects of Steven's life that are explored that aren't directly linked to Martha, even though she permeates his entire life. This allows for more than one aspect of his personality to come out. In summary, the story is soft and sweet, bitter and harsh, all in appropriate measure. Enjoyable, yet with enough meat to make you think. Recommended. Alphabet H: Hotel - Mark Bastable (11k) CR 123 10,10,10 The hotel is "The Black Dragon", somewhere in Germany. Our principals are the narrator, who is an Englishman, Greta, who is a full-sized Teutonic woman, and Beatta, who is a 17 year old slip of a girl. The narrator has been flirting with Beatta, and striking up a friendship with Greta, for several months. His only problem is that he's usually deep into his cups before Beatta starts making overtures. That time of night, he's unwilling to start anything. After all, he's got performance standards to maintain. One day, he and Greta start a real conversation, and he finds that she's really into kinky sex - s&m, spankings, bondage, other ladies, and from both sides of the fence, too. That's a lot more than he's ever been exposed to. Greta tells him that she'd love to get her hands on that delectable little dish Beatta -- she'd teach the girl all about lots of stuff, and the girl would love it. Greta would keep licking her sweet little snatch until she did. Greta wouldn't mind him, either, but as a 'Papa' figure. You know, suit and tie, with a naughty little girl that needs ... Well, sooner rather than later, opportunity knocks. He must work late, and arrives at the hotel late, just in time for a shift change. Plans come to fruition. Things happen. Not everyone gets what they want, however. That's the fun part. And Three Were Foolish - The Englishman (620k) Three young ladies in school - Lucy, Trish, and Allie - undergo a number of adventures during a particularly busy year. Each is required to stretch, to expand themselves, and allow aspects of reality they never would have imagined applying to them become part of their lives. Of course, what The Englishman wrote is long, detailed, and engrossing. The characters are real, and the events true to life. I found it difficult to stop reading once I started. The style was also nice, as it made the story flow smoothly from one section to the next, bringing me along with nary a thought about the seams. Be careful about reading this story. There are parts that many people won't like, such as when one of the girls is raped by a teacher, or when one is molested by an older boy. These things happen in the real world, of course, but many people don't like to read about events like this. Still, despite all their trials, the girls manage to grow up anyway, forming a new, tighter bond of friendship between them. ANDY GRIFFITH: Opie and the Pie - Uncle Mike (17k) CR 199 10,10,10 Does anybody out there remember the Andy Griffith show? Oops, sorry. I guess what with all the reruns and whatever, a better question would be "Does anybody not know about the Andy Griffith show?" It was around a long time ago, in several incarnations. There was "The Andy Griffith Show", "Andy of Mayberry", and "Mayberry, RFD", if memory serves. The differences between the shows were in who was around the sherrif. In this pastiche, Opie (an 11 year old kid, son of the sherrif) is taking a pie his Aunt Bea baked (everyone called her Aunt Bea, including sherrif Andy - I never did figure out exactly who she was related to) over to Helen Crump (his dad's sort-of girlfriend). When he gets there, he hears some strange noises. Being the not-quite-completely-nice boy he is, he investigates. The sight of a naked Miz Crump pretty much takes his breath away. I guess that happens 'cause all the blood is rushin' from his upper 'natomy to his lower 'natomy. She's in her bedroom, and Opie is looking in through her window. At first, all he looks at is her breasts ("only he don't know to call 'em that"). When he gets around to it, he also notices that Thelma Lou ("his Paw's deputy Barney's gal") is lying face down in between Miz Crump's legs. That's enough setup. What do you think Opie will do with this newfound knowledge? After all, he is his father's son, and Paw is a pretty smart cookie. Both of them realize instinctively that knowledge is power, and power can be exercised. Written in the style of a southerner talking, the language isn't all that difficult to follow, and it does add to the atmosphere of the piece. Light and playful, if you like the show, you'll probably like this rather sexy little story. Angela - Friar Dave (66k) CR 151 10,10,10 If you want to hear about an old man's wet dream come true, Friar Dave has written the benchmark against which all other tales will be measured against for years to come. According to Dave, Angie is "an over-sexed, barely pubescent preteen." She's 4'6" tall and weighs in at an exhorbitant 71 pounds. She is also intelligent, a schemer, a conniver, and a girl who knows where her first time will be, how it will happen, and who it will be with. The narrator is the weak-willed person who can't help himself in the face of her aggressive seduction. This doesn't quite qualify as a pedo story, but it's close. Angie's body has just crossed that narrow line between childhood and pubescence. Only as a fantasy could I enjoy this, since in any sort of real situation, I would be backpeddling so fast, I'd end up outside before I realized I had hit the rear door. Still, this is a fantasy for many horny old men (like I will be some day), and Friar Dave is an expert on bringing this kind of fantasy to life in his writing. Angeles City - Jim Fix (72k) CR 154 9,10,10 Angeles City - a misnomer if I ever heard one - is a small Phillipine town just a short jeepney ride away from Clark Airforce Base. Like you'd expect from watching those bad Korean war movies, a small, yet thriving industry dedicated to relieving a whole lot of U.S. servicemen of their twice-monthly paychecks has grown and prospered in that town. If you keep your wits about you, you can find just about any jaded pleasure your heart desires. If you can't be pleasant, or lose your temper, well, the local methods of dealing with stupidity is swift and sometimes rather terminal. Our hero, a career sergeant and man in the process of getting divorced, is introduced to the better side of this place. He's an old hand in these matters, having spent the better part of his 16 year career stationed in the far corners of the earth. After a period of adjustment, he settles down in a local hotel with one of the local ladies as a live-in bedwarmer. Only, he hadn't figured on becoming rather attached to the young lady. He also hadn't figured on her having a past, one that intrudes rudely into his pleasant little setup. This isn't a story for the masses, or for someone who wants a sweet, innocent little tale of lust and love. It is actually somewhat disturbing. Some could consider it a love story, but with a hard-assed edge to it. Still, the quality of writing is quite good. I definitely enjoyed reading this one. Appleseed - Wollstonecraft (90k) CR 60 10 According to American legend, Johnny Appleseed was a man who wandered all over the west, planting apple seeds everywhere he went. In this modern version of the legend, it isn't apple seeds that the guy is planting. It's his own seed, and he's planting plenty of it in the bellies of many young women. He prefers them in their upper teens, still in high school, and going to church, although he's done his thing with pretty much every style and look of teenager in LA. The ones he liked the most, in this reminiscing tale, is a pair of twins - Judy and Julie. They were identical in everything except personality. How he comes to inseminate both of them within a few weeks of first meeting them makes up the bulk of this rather disturbing yet intriguing story. Yet, like in all the best morality tales, all good things must come to an end. Or do they? Barbara Toys With Boys - Unknown Author (230k) There comes a time in a woman's life when she needs to let go, to unpin her hair, and to cut loose. Barbara's time has come. She is without a husband, and has all these needs, these deep-seated, desperately demanding needs. She has also had exactly one truly satisfying sexual encounter in her life. What follows is a long, detailed account of Barbara's descent into depravity. There are twosomes, threesomes, delivery boys, and grocery store box boys. There is a brief brush with drugs. There's a shower scene in a tiny, almost decrepit little beach hut, with a toke-head and his friend both waiting for her to come out and play. There is her son to consider. Sperm flies everywhere, and she simply can't get enough of it. Not even when her son catches her with his best friend from school. Slick, hot, wet, and downright depraved describes this story to a tee. Reminds me a bit of some of TheEditor's best offerings. Batgirl and Catwoman - Mr. X (157k) When The Joker, The Riddler, and The Penguin form an unholy alliance, that means there's trouble brewing. Trouble for Batman and Robin. Trouble for Commissioner Gordon. And, in this case, big trouble for both Catwoman and Batgirl. You see, Batman is a useless, scene- stealing, credit-grabbing schmuck, and pretty much everyone in the commissioner's office are chauvenistic ditzes who actually think that Batman is responsible for all those busted crimes and captured criminals. Batgirl, who knows better, thinks that what they do is criminal, actually. Catwoman is the person framed by those three costumed criminals for a string of crimes they committed. They figured that with everyone chasing after the busty babe of badness, they could pretty much do whatever they want without any interference, and when all the dire deeds are done, they can eliminate the lithe lass and keep all that luscious loot themselves. A good plan. If it works. The fly in the ointment in this broadly slapsticked tale of bondage and buffoonery, is Batgirl. There isn't any kind of fiendish sexual device that can keep her down for long. There isn't a rape robot built that can outperform the lusty lass. Yet, they keep trying. If you haven't noticed yet, I enjoy this kind of farcical humor. Yes, there is a plot, and it is as good as most of those used in the old Batman TV show. I'd even bet on the characters being more, uh, fleshed-out than in the original shows. Whatever you do, don't get your hopes up for seeing a serious dramatic piece. This isn't. It's pure bubble gum and icing. No meat and potatoes to be seen anywhere. Escapism at its least serious. Fun and fluff. Got the idea yet? Batgirl vs The Crime School for Girls - S. Sneakly (110k) CR 223 6,9,9, Annex 10/31/97 A+ Everyone knows who Batgirl is, right? She's the daughter of Commissioner Gordon, who is the head police officer of Gotham City. That's the place where Batman and Robin hang out at. Only, things aren't quite peachy-keen like they were back in the TV serial, in the comic books, or even in the movies. Batman is a wuss. Robin is now called "the ball-less wonder", for literal reasons. All the guys in charge are male chauvenist pigs. And, Wayne Enterprises has gone bankrupt. Whoah! This ain't a standard little tale, is it? Batman trying to charge licensing fees for her use of the bat-logo? Batgirl rich? Wowza! Anyway, The Crime School for Girls is run by Lady Penelope Peasoup. That ne'er-do-well had recently escaped from Slutmore Prison in Londinium, evaded the best of Ireland Yard, and crossed the Atlantic aboard the Queer Elizabeth. She has a thing for badgirl bondage. That's what happens to Batgirl at just about every turn. She gets tied, chained, hog-tied, and secured in almost every fashion imaginable. She also gets clit-clamped, nipple-nipped, twat-teased, and royally rodded by her nemesis. Naturally, that other bat flop, Batman, is of no use whatsoever. Poor Batgirl has to escape all those fiendishly inventive and devilishly terminal situations all on her little lonesome -- mostly while in the throes of a string of powerful climaxes. Delightfully sinful. Lots of leather, rubber, and rope. Plenty of devilish dildos. An entire factory devoted to creating the ultimate in sexual aids. Many, many by-the-skin-of-her-clit escapes. This is an excellent parody of all of the Bat-whatever shows, and is just as good as the previous story. Becky - Unknown Author (30k) When a young person gets out of high school, they're supposed to have some idea of what they will be doing with their lives. This isn't the case for Becky. Her former plans, of getting married to Rich, are dead, and she doesn't know what she is going to do. High school had been less than wonderful, and the rest of her life looks to be even worse. The last person she wants to see is Christy. Christy is miss rich bitch, the former monarch of the school, the homecoming queen. Only, what Becky doesn't realize is that Christy is in just as much a funk as to what will be happening with her life as Becky. You see, Christy, unknown to everyone, has a secret. She doesn't want to get married either. She is a closet lesbian, and Becky is the first person she shares that secret with, mostly because she's had a crush on the girl for years. This is a nice, romantic type story, with more than a hint of happily- ever-after in it, but with a wonderfus scene of lovemaking between two young women who know what they are, and are coming to a realization of what they want for the rest of their lives. That future doesn't include husbands, or whatever else either of their families have in the works, but it does involve lots of bodily contact. Really. Bewitchery - Sean MacDonald (47k) Sean and Jessica. Two nice, ordinary people. They are. Really. One day, not too long before Halloween, Sean finds himself looking for a costume. He doesn't have any plans for halloween, but he's looking for something anyway. You know, just in case. Really? Jessica is the pretty young saleswoman who helps him find a costume. Supergirl. Yep, superGIRL. She says that Sean is blond enough and slim enough to pull it off. When she finds that he doesn't have any firm plans for the big fun night, she invites him to go out with her. Really. And, when he's still a little hesitant, she offers to buy the costume for him. Yes, really. The big day dawns. Sean has to get ready, but he's not entirely sure what's involved, so Jessica helps out. He shaves, everywhere, then gets stuffed into his costume and gets made up -- breast forms, panties, booties, plucked eyebrows, lipstick, earrings and all. He looks good. Really. Now for the rather strange part. They to go a club holding a best costume/talent contest. Jessica, dressed up as a witch, wins second place. Some other bozo in a Predator costume wins first prize. Then a real witch shows up, and she's peeved. Really. She casts a spell over the whole audience, changing them into whatever they're dressed as. Now, Sean, instead of being a guy dressed as supergirl, IS supergirl, super powers and all. Really! All the rest of the story deals with him, or rather, her, and Jessica trying to get the damage undone. Jessica, now a real, spell-casting witch herself, has an innate (due to the spell) knowledge of how magic works. Sean, as Supergirl, has the speed, power, x-ray vision, and everything else necessary to overpower any obstacle. Only, Supergirl is still vulnerable to magic, especially the mind-control variety. Really. As a TG story, this is quite different. As a sci-fantasy story, it's also quite different. As a guy looking out from inside the body of a young, blonde beauty, Supergirl's slant on things is also quite different. Lots of fun stuff. Really. Bikini Brigade - Andrew Roller (320k) CR 243 9.5,10,10 Oh, dear. Katie and Bambi are in trouble. Big trouble. You see, one of them stole a bag of gummi bears, did something bad, and failed to do something good, all on the same day. Katie was running away from home because she didn't want to go with the woman from Child Protective Services. Bambi went along for the ride. Actually, it's the other way around. 13 year old Bambi was doing the driving in her brand new candy-apple-red 4x4, while 12 year old Katie was navigating. So there they were. Lost. In the dark. On a purple road paved with Wild Berry Pop Rocks. Around them, candy apples grow from candy apple trees, while gold-foil-covered chocolate leaves fall from the maple trees. They find a sign made of peanut brittle. On it, written in licorice, is a message - "Welcome to Candyland". Under that, in smaller letters, is written "Citadel - 307ks". Out from the woods steps Boswell the Berry Bear, who explains where they are, how they got there (see above things that Katie did), why they arrived there, and how they might get back home. Then he tells them the bad news - Licorice Lad is looking for some young human girls to...to..., uh, well, to do indecent things with, involving parts of their bodies they normally keep clothed, and Katie and Bambi are the only young human girls currently in Candyland. Bambi calls it as she sees it - Licorice Lad wants to fuck them. With characters like Licorice Lad (the bad guy who usurped the Sultan's throne), Fruitcake Freddie (who _really_ likes Licorice Lad), Tommy the Terrible Troll, and Gumdrop Guy, and places like Licorice Loch, the Soda Sea, the Marshmellow (sic) Marsh, and the Peppermint Forest (where Candy Canes grow), I wasn't sure what movie I was reading. "The Wizard of Oz?" "Alice in Wonderland?" Something starring Shirley Temple? As usual, Andrew has written a tight, highly detailed, and imaginative story. Unlike usual, this story has a real plot, development, fantastically overblown cariactures for characters, and many twists and turns. Like, is Fruitcake Freddie a good guy or a bad guy? Will the Gingerman Autonomy movement figure in the big finale? Will Ms. Matilda Brunswald, Affidavit Al, Ms. Wilma Writ, and Glenda Guilty, the folks from Child Protective Services, actually catch the girls before they can put the real Sultan back on the throne? And what about Tommy's candification machine? Will the girls escape before it turns them into candy, trapping them in Candyland forever? Also as usual, the young girls are bared in public more than proper decorum would allow. Unlike a regular Andrew Roller story, I didn't notice a single instance of a bottom getting reddened by a paddling, deserved or not. Nor did I see any _S.E.X._ (At least, not by the 3/4 point. I won't say whether there is or is not any of either in the last quarter of the story. That would spoil the tension.) This is definitely not a normal Andrew Roller offering. Then again, this is definitely not a normal a.s.s. story. I liked it. I liked it a whole lot, despite the lacks mentioned above. This is fun stuff, what with Bambi wearing one of Katie's bikinis, one that's two sizes too small, one she keeps falling out of. Titillation and wild and wacky goings-on make this a good story. After all, where else could you go paddling about with six year old Pauline Praline on the Sea of Cream on a giant orange popsicle and pick up ice cream cones with rainbow sprinkles on them as they go floating by? Blackmailing the Queen / Blackmailing Ann - Unknown Author (135k) Ann is a pretty much untouchable ice-queen beauty in high school. Our hero (if that's the right term) is a rather average, non-descript camera buff with a penchant for nature shots. One day, out on the edge of the wilds, he hears something, and goes to investigate. To his surprise, it's Ann, along with the local hood. Yes, Ann. Even more of a surprise to him is that she's hooked on coke. After watching her trade a blowjob for a fix, snapping photos all the while, he fades back into the bushes. It takes him a whole weekend to think about what he wants. Blackmail, of course, but for what? Are you joking? He's a horny 16 year old guy, with the kind of goods on this beautiful young ice queen that could ruin her life. He wants sex. And, naturally, he gets it. At first, Ann is rather shocked and surprised, to say the least. She says no. Our hero is adamant and forceful, so she agrees. They go at it in the apartment they have over top of her family's garage. A coach house, she calls it. Not surprisingly in a story like this, she ends up loving sex, and his cock in particular. The ice queen thaws out to find that our hero is actually a really nice guy. What else would you expect. In fact, at the end of the story, there's a marriage, but it's not between Ann and Our Hero. You see, somewhere along the way, they bring a third party in on their fun. Delightful sex, with the characters being just close enough to realistic to allow me to suspend my disbelief. The Blue Box - Unknown Author (270k) This is one of those scifi stories that requires a modicum of suspension of disbelief. If you do, you'll be treated to a wild run of imagination that is hardly surpassed anywhere. What is the blue box? It's a complex electronic device that amplifies and distributes the thoughts of its host. It creates a world based on what the host is thinking of, filling in the details, adding texture, and making everything seem very much real. Also, the box can be hooked up to more than one person at a time, although only one person controls what happens. Nothing is beyond this device. If the host can imagine it, the box can create it. Flying. Diving. Walking in the clouds. Cities. A deserted tropical beach. Physical interaction. Oh, yes, physical interaction. Yes, that means just what you think it means. The two people can touch each other and do pretty much anything two people can do in the real world, as well as much, much more. There's more to this than just playing in a fantasy world, of course. Real life does take its toll. So do friends and coworkers. Then again, if you can find love and happiness, what else do you need? Maybe that other device he invented, the one that changes ... well, read the story to find out what I mean. Bob and Jeanette Brennan series - Uther Pendragon (many stories) Many CR's 10,10,10 Celeste has said far more about this series, and probably in better words, than I ever could. Bob and Jeanette are a pair of young people in love with each other. They don't join up in threesomes, have other lovers on the side, join in with family members, or even have a special relationship with the family dog. Nope. What's special about this series of stories is that it explores the growing and deepening relationship of these two. They have lives to lead outside of the bedroom. Their families are vastly different from one another, as are their backgrounds. Yet still, they are working hard at creating a life with one another. You know, just like real people do. Soft, fuzzy, romantic, fun, humorous, touching, thought-provoking, and enjoyable are all terms that can be applied to this series. Recommended heartily. The Broken Drum - HAGAR Pappa Dux, FAO Friend (75k) The Broken Drum is a bar. You know, a place where people go to imbibe, meet other people, sometimes eat, and, very rarely, have a good time. It also happens to be the favorite hangout of a detective by the name of Eric Thornquist. No, this isn't a murder mystery or anything like that, although Eric is in the middle of a rather grisly and disturbing investigation. Rather, it's a short peek into his life, the life of Candice, Guido's moll, who knocks him down as he's about to leave, Jenine, the waitress who's been turning down his passes almost forever, and Leon and Bodo, who work as muscle and brain collectors for said Guido. Candice is looking for a good time, and since fate seems to have dumped a hard-boiled detective with a hard gun into her proverbial lap, she decides that he's as good as anyone else, and probably better than most. Guido has been rather inattentive lately. Fate is rather conspiratorial. Guido has a camera, and he photographs Eric and Candice in a compromising way before Eric loses the thug while driving to his place. Jenine becomes more than a little jealous, seeing the man who's been chasing her almost forever locked in an intimate encounter with a walking wet dream. "Her skirt ended above mid-thigh, and her trim ankles, sculptured calves, and trim tapered thighs flashed, as the split displayed nearly their full length, in the subdued lighting, as that tight knit bun-hugging, ass-emphasizing skirt showcased her tight, rounded, undulating butt; that moved like two well-oiled footballs." The rest of her is just as good. Is there a lot of plot to this story? Nope, not reall much of one at all. Instead, it's a taste of a different life. It's a short peek into another set of lives. It's a hot date. It's a mood piece with a happy ending. That's about it. Burning Down the House - Sandman (70k) Now what, do you suppose, this title could possibly have to do with the story it's labelling? That's easy. The story takes place in a firehall. You know, a place where a bunch of youngish, good-looking, in-shape gentlemen hang around a lot, just waiting to go out to perform their adrenalin-inducing duties. Only, in this firehouse, they have a mixed crew. That's right. Eight men and one woman. That woman is Trish. She has only one fixed and immutable rule - she doesn't do married guys. Lucky for her, the only married guy is the Lieutenant, and he likes to watch. The only thing hotter than the fires they put out is the fire between Trish's legs. The only thing Trish likes better than getting fucked is giving a blow job. And with the crew she has around her, she gets enough of both to fill even her enormous appetite. Even Terrell, with his monster 11 inch black cock, gets his fill. Morale in their firehouse is better than it has ever been, and in the three years since Trish started, there has never been a voluntary transfer out. None of the guys have gotten married, either, for some reason. Naturally, Trish controls the who, where, and how, but she is generous, and doesn't play too much at favorites. So what happens when another woman finally joins the ranks of their fire brigade? Will all the hanky-panky have to come to a stop? Will Trish have to find some other outlet for her super-charged libido? Hell no! The more the merrier in her view, since she's just as happy with other kinds of oral manoeuvers. Hot, plentiful, gang-bang and singleton sex in all the usual places, in a setting that gives these folks plenty of spare time to indulge in their favorite hobby. The Cafeteria - Delta (68k) Everybody has a dream. Jean meets hers in a cafeteria one day, when she is finally ready to let down the blinds and allow herself the pleasure of emerging into the world again. Dream (that's his real name, by the way) is passing through. He's a disreputable-looking gentleman, and Jean hardly knows why she sat with him. After all, there are other tables opening up, with safer places to be. It's with a great deal of trepidation and self-doubt that she allows him to enter her world. Along with her misgivings comes the knowledge that she needs help to open up again, to be able to enjoy herself, without continuing to live the life of a conservative, age-conscious, closed woman. That life is slowly suffocating her, killing her by small degrees every day. Dream can see that she is finally ready to draw apart the blinds, and that he is the key to helping her do so. The fact that he will be having fun at the same time is immaterial. It isn't until the end of their time together that Jean finally learns why he is travelling his own journey, and why he cannot stay. Camp: Ron's Journey - WhiteStar (unfinished,715k) In this tale, there are a certain subset of people with extra-ordinary mental abilities. These people can be anything from mind readers to telekinetics. Some few can be many things. Ron is such a person. Also in this tale, there is a faction of Americans who know about these special people -- mostly because they are them themselves. They've set up a training and teaching facility, somewhere, for people like him. Once he graduates, he'll be given an "allowance" to live on, the likes of which ordinary working folks can only dream of and buy lottery tickets towards. But, not all things are rosy. Just like in the real world, even mind control sex slaves can sometimes develop feelings and desires that clash with their master and each other. There are latent users of the power - wild cards - that can cause problems. There are evil users of the power. And, somewhere in the world, there is an evil organization bent on wiping out people like Ron, as well as anyone related to him. Why? I don't know yet. The story is, as yet, unfinished. However, there is enough different chapters, with their own problems, disturbances, and last-minute cliffhangers, that I can count them as separate books within the same story line. If you like "MC Incest Young Scifi Adventure" stories, you'll get a kick out of this one. The Captive Family - Eros (370k) Bobby's Mom, Cathy, has just escaped from prison, and he's waiting nearby, in the bushes, with a car. From there they go to a motel. These two are on very intimate terms. Very, very intimate terms. The next thing you know, they've roped in the manager's abused daughter. Then the cops start nosing around a little too closely. What do they do? Hijack a family's van, with Mom, Dad, brother and sister, who are all heading for a remote cabin in the hills. Needless to say, Bobby's gun 'persuades' the family to loosen up their normally rather tight moral standards. Everybody gets it on with everybody, in a free-for-all spermfest that's sure to drown even the most jaded incest-lover's libido. What happens after Dad finally wrests the gun away from Bobby? Do they all go back to the way they were before being introduced to the wondrous world of inter-relational sex? What do you think? Career Opportunities - Parker (150k) CR 205 10,10,10 If you've read one Parker story, you've read 'em all. They're all about the same thing - controlling and degrading women. Right? To put it bluntly, yes they are, but no they're not. While the first line is basically true in general, in detail it's like saying all Arthur C. Clarke ever wrote was science and science fiction, or all Stephen King ever wrote were thrillers. If you actually start looking at the stories, you'll find that details make all the difference in the world. In this story, the central character is a woman named Barbara Dahlton. She's a corporate bigwig, one of the senior staff, and likes to throw her weight around and step on those little people beneath her feet. They're expendable. If they start making too much noise about being treated badly, make them quit. If a young, smart, beautiful woman starts with the company, do everything you can to get rid of the competition. So what if you destroy any future she might have had working anyplace else at the same time. She shouldn't have dared to be so beautiful, smart, and vulnerable at the same time. Barbara is what people commonly call an executive bitch from hell. Think about her name. Think about one of the less flattering diminutives of her first name. Then remove one syllable from her last name. Wonder who's going to receive an unwanted makeover? As I said, the differences are in the details, and Parker excels in making all the details work in a tight, interesting story. The sex is sometimes hot, and sometimes disgusting. At times, I wouldn't wish what happens to her on my worst enemy. If this was real life, everyone involved should either end up in jail for a long period of time, or spend a long vacation in a padded room. Luckily, it's fantasy, and the reader can pick and choose which of the protagonists to envision themselves being. Or, possibly, the reader could choose to be all of them at different times. The main characters are very real, even if they do step beyond the bounds of what's normal. The situations are real enough that they only require a modicum of suspension of disbelief. The 'big bosses' are sufficiently blind, stupid, arrogant, short-sighted, and misogynistic at the proper times that they don't poke their noses into their subordinates' fun. That's exactly what the 'little people' have, too. Fun. At the expense, fortunately (unfortunately for her), of a woman they think deserves everything they can throw at her. And in this story, like many of Parker's others, 'everything' means a long, long fall down the business and evolutionary ladders. Problems and errors are hard to find. A few poorly chosen words. Some sloppy punctuation. One or two misspellings. In a story this long, those are forgivable. The only problem I had with the story itself was with Barbara. It was slightly harder to suspend enough disbelief to imagine that a woman of her obvious intelligence and mental toughness could be steamrollered without putting up a bit more of a struggle. But, that's a minor quibble, and I only include it because a reviewer is supposed to find something that a writer can use to improve a story. Parker wrote some of the classics of this genre, and this is one of his best stories. Enjoy, if you've got a twisted enough mind. The Case of the Tingling Clitoris - Ramapo (25k) Oh, lordy lord - a Sherlock Holmes spoof, with style, wit, and panache, all rolled into one. When Dr. Watson walks in on Mr. Holmes manually manipulating a neghborhood wife to orgasmic bliss, he is a little shocked and surprised, to say the least. This is notwithstanding the fact that said Mr. Holmes is actually timing the event with a stopwatch. It's all purely a matter of research, naturally, as Mr. Holmes explains, and has nothing to do with any possible prurient interest on his part at all. No, the great man is in the middle of a very curious case involving a murder. Naturally, not everything is as it seems. There are hidden parts to the mystery that only the gread Mr. Holmes can see through to. And, of course, his brilliant mind comes up with a plan to expose the true events of that horrible night, when death came stalking. I'm sure Mr. Doyle is spinning in his grave right now. Either that, or laughing himself to pieces. Caught Between Two Angry Women - Mary Anne Mohanraj (53k) CR 134 10,9,9 "Oh, nasty fate. Oh, cruel, vicious fate. Why did you deliver me into the hands and clutches of such a sublime enchantress? Why have you led me down this path which will eventually use my weaknesses to destroy me?" Such could have been the words of Tommy, the central figure in this tale of faerie. He's human, but that's no real excuse for his philanderning ways. Women don't give their hearts lightly, and to spurn not one, but several, after winning their deepest affections, is a vile thing to do. So enters the Queen of Faerie. She likes trifling men. She likes turning them into her fawning pets. Then, when she's bored of their petty ways, she disposes of them. For Tom, payment will come due after seven years in the land of faerie. He will be the victim of the hunt. And when, not if, he is caught, he will be given over to the minions of hell for their amusement, for eternity. There is only one hope for Tom, and that is another woman, one who joyfully carries his babe in her belly. But, for Tom, it's a very slender hope, since he loved and left that lass as well. Will he be rescued, or not. Only when he reaches the standing circle of stones will he know his fate. As always, Mary Anne writes elegantly, with style, with imagination, with a depth of knowledge of the human condition few people posess, and with the kind of skill even fewer can boast of. Celeste - Dirty Dawg (38k) CR 124 10,10,10 Brad is working on the computer when he gets a telephone call. It's Celeste, a girl he's hopelessly head over heels about with an unrequited love. He moved - changed cities in fact - to get away from the cool, manipulative bitch (both of their words). Despite that, he made the occasional call and wrote the occasional letter, mostly in moments of extreme weakness. What's the call about? She's coming to visit. When she gets there, he's psyched. She's not going to twist him around her finger again. She's not getting anything out of him. Not again. Not any more. That lasts until he learns about what brought her to him. This is one of the few tear-jerker stories I've read and actually enjoyed. Cesura's Story - Averti (31k) The author subtitled this story "How I bound me in a closet and slurped a vampire." Very, very appropriate. The players are Toby, the tall, slender, part-time dominatrix with hands the size of a pro basketball player's, and with a thing for men, women, bondage, and strange games. Eloise, the little woman with a fixation on the fundament - anyone's fundament - and a yen to play with the hole there. Cesura, the tall, slender vampire with a pronounced Texas drawl. Vampire? Well, it looks like one. It's tall, it's got white skin, it's very pale blonde, it's got pinkish eyes, and it's got a mouthful of *teeth*. The narrator (a guy) can be excused from making that mistake in identity when his first sight of her is when he's bound up tighter than a kettle drum, and her face is the first thing he sees when his blindfold is removed. Can you imagine what a sexually adventurous Texas albino would be like, being led on by two very experienced and adventurous women, who have a willing and able sex toy at their disposal? Our hero finds out the hard way, while the women relieve him of that same hardness in various ways. He and they also relieve them of their various tensions in various ways. An inventive lot, I would venture to say. Charly the Yard Guy - Michael K. Smith (86k) CR 183 10,10,10 This is a "real" story, about real, three dimensional people. There's not a lot of sex, but what there is, is hot. You see, Charly is actually a young girl who falls in love with this older guy (the narrator of the story), and they eventually manage to move in together and live happily ever after. Mostly. There's a lot more to the story than that, of course, especially since Charlie as some very protective, very large, older brothers, and the narrator moves to another city, but that's pretty much the core of the matter. Why do I include this story in my top 10 list? It's fun, it's touching, and it tickles several different places inside my head. Read the story to find out what I mean. Chosen - Tom Bombadil (39k) CR 148 10,10,10 In this story, the author claimed to be trying to imitate the style and subject matter that Deirdre almost managed to corner the market on. He succeeded with this one. There's a certain letter that Virginia receives one day, a letter she doesn't really understand, and that she thinks is a joke. It tells her that she has been "chosen", and that she is to report to a certain address on a certain date at a certain time. No names, no return address, no nothing. A joke, right? Of course. Her boss is in on the joke. Only, he's not laughing. Her personal assistant is in on the joke. She doesn't crack a smile. So is her best friend, who doesn't smirk at all. So is her mother, who almost breaks down and tells all. No laughs anywhere. It is a joke, isn't it? Apparently not, since a girl she picks up in a bar somewhere, when she sees the note, just up and leaves. No laughs to be seen anywhere. What's this "chosen" thing all about, anyway? Belinda, Virginia's personal assistant, shows her. That takes an entire weekend. Virginia, still filled with doubt, shows up at the place, date, and time listed on that strange letter. The reality of what being chosen means, is much stranger than even Virginia had been able to guess at. Christine Makes A Deal (SHW08) - The Warthog (32k) Let's get this straight from the start. This is a gangbang story, with Christine being a gangbang virgin (she's never been involved in one before). That said, there's a whole lot of scene and setup in going from the start, where Christine is called up by a Realtor friend who needs someone to show some prospective clients a big, expensive building, to the point where her husband walks in the door and sees what's going on. Naturally, she is ignorant of the semi-promise her friend made to the two clients - that he would provide them with a playtoy for the evening. They simply assume, correctly, that Christine is really interested in making her little slice of the profit pie - about 12 grand for a completed sale. Christine *really* enjoys providing the kind of perk that seals the deal. There's lots of squirting fluids and squirming bodies in this one. Commencement - Vickie Tern (84k) CR 86 10,10,10 Oh, do the guys make a mistake in this story. It's Superbowl Sunday, they're on their third or fourth six-pack, and having a wonderful time of it. Then, one of them starts making fun of his wife's little female idiosyncrasies. This infects the other men, and they start doing the same, harping on what they see as their wives' lacks in the "proper little homemaker" department. The wives hatch a plan to teach these men a lesson. Naturally, this being a Vickie Tern story, it involves turning the men into feminized versions of their former selves, so they can experience, first hand, what it's like to be a woman. The women, of course, take over the roles their husbands once occupied. With proper care, and improper medications, the men become happy with their new lots in life. One of the best stories in this genre, by anyone. Personally, it scares the hell out of me, thinking that this might, just possibly, be true somewhere in the world. Cuntabeast - Phil Phantom (198k) According to the author, "This story is set in the American heartland in the early 1980's, centered on a mid-size manufacturing facility situated outside a major city." The plant is a breeding ground - literally - for horny old codgers and young, fecund, horny, newlywed wives. There's a storyline in this story, and a plot, and some twists and turns. Faye Thomas is a young, fecund, horny ... you know. Greg Stoner and Max McGee are two horny old farts on the knife edge of getting the boot, but they decide to take a chance on turning Faye into a willing, young, fecund ... you know. Bonnie Ange was originally hired straight out of high school as a young ... you know ... but since then, has made herself invaluable by being able to tell from one interview whether a young ... you know ... could be turned into a willing, young ... you know. She's almost 100% accurate. Some women are easier to manipulate than others, but Greg and Max are experts. The only thing is, they don't realize that Faye has a history. She's not a dumb, young ... you know. That provides the plot and background for this swan dive into the murky end of the sexual swimming hole. There's family histories involving family members. There's a nasty husband or two. There's a daughter who's doing it regularly with the company mascot, and a mother who takes on the entire maintenance staff. Video cameras are everywhere. The big boss man has his fingers (and something else) dipped into almost every pie. In addition, there's a whole lot of young wives who get preggers regularly, and their hubbies aren't likely to be the daddies. Not for the faint of heart, nor for the weak of heart. When Phil writes a nasty story, he goes all out and writes a *really* nasty story. Custom Maid - RC (26k) Linda, Melanie Oh, this is a delightful little story. It's a MC story, so you have to suspend your disbelief about how easily a person can by hypnotized, but if you do, you'll enjoy this twisted tale of trancing. What do you do when you're well-off, busy, hate doing domestic chores, and have a messy house? You hire a housekeeper, of course. That's exactly what Linda does. Sooner rather than later, Melanie shows up on the doorstep. Well! It just so happens that little Melanie is a lesbian's wet dream come true, and Linda gets wet in just the right place while staring at the working Melanie. Being an old hand at seduction, and a master of hypnotism, Linda soon starts mixing pleasure with, well, pleasure. What helps, of course, is the fact that Melanie has all these repressed desires, just waiting for the right person to draw them to the surface. What happens? Lets just say that Linda now really looks forward to cleaning day. -- +--------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `------------+ | story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us | story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us | | Archive site +--------------------+------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ |