Message-ID: <16933eli$9811061411@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: sundance69@hotmail.com (Sundance Tales) Subject: {Sundance Tales} REVISED! "The Fan Man" ** README ** Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.stories.erotic,alt.sex.voyerism Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <363ad531.30335326@enews.newsguy.com> This is a revised repost of a story I submitted sometime back. When I originally wrote this story I had 3 goals in mind. The first was to make it 'short'. My first post, "Amy Visits for the Summer" was a longer tale and I was forcing myself to write a shorter story. My second goal was to make it an "easy read". Nothing too heavy. The third was to leave the reader 'wanting more'. Well, based on feedback, I think I realized those objectives, except that it seems the last goal blew up on me. That is, I received consistent feedback that the story was 'too short' and just left the reader 'unsatisfied'. So I made a stab at continuing the story where I originally ended it. If you've already read this story, you'll know what I mean..:) Whether you've read it or not, my two cents would be to start at the top and read the tale in its entirety. I'm thinking just skipping to the 'new stuff' will lose some of the story momentum. Either way -- whether you've read it or not before, I would LOVE to hear from you regarding if the ending I've added was better, worse, or the same. As always, reader feedback is what keeps me motivated and helps me to improve. Enjoy! Sundance -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----