Message-ID: <15422eli$9809182241@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: Lee Vine Subject: Rogue Reviews Digest No. 16 - September 14, 1998 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Reply-To: santiago@switchboardmail.com Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <35FDE131.CFB4F7BC@switchboardmail.com> X-Is-Review: yes Rogue Reviews Digest No. 16 - September 14, 1998 NOTICE If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please do not read what follows. CONTENTS Mailing List Information Ratings Reviews No. 183 ["Ornery" by Lost Girl] No. 184 ["Lunch Date" by JB] No. 185 ["Ripe" by BronwenSM] No. 186 ["Champagne & Trains" by Bernadette] No. 187 ["The Cruelest Month" by Hawkeye] No. 188 ["We'll See What Happens" by Sven the Elder] No. 189 ["The Better To..." by Mat Twassel] No. 190 ["Man or Beast" by Diana] ***** MAILING LIST INFORMATION I send my reviews individually, when I finish them, to the Sex Stories Discussion List. If you are interested in joining there is a form for doing so on my home page. If want to join my mailing list and do not have access to the WWW then please send me an e-mail indicating that you wish to join. * Home Page - http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Cafe/3112/ * E-Mail - santiago@switchboardmail.com ***** RATINGS In order from best to worst I rate stories as follows: Outstanding Excellent Very Good Good Grudgingly Good Not Good The "Outstanding", "Excellent", "Very Good", and "Good" ratings indicate, to varying degrees, that I like the story. The "Grudgingly Good" rating indicates that I think the story is well written, but that I find some of the elements in the story so disturbing that if I were to review the story based solely on my personal tastes I would give it a "Not Good" rating. The "Not Good" rating indicates that I do not like the story. ***** REVIEWS ----- Rogue Review No. 183 - September 7, 1998 Ornery by Lost Girl F/M/M, Light B&D Length: 4,000 words SUMMARY Meg entertains Tommy, her lover, and Brian, a friend of his, after returning from a visit with her parents. COMMENTARY There is much more to this story than just sex. There is a beautifully written paragraph about a quarter of the way into the story in which Meg reflects on how she feels about her family. The thoughts are not happy ones, but I love the imagery. The characters all seem very real. JUDGMENT This is an excellent story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383768547&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14603.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 184 - September 7, 1998 Lunch Date by JB F-solo, F/M Length: 1,400 words SUMMARY On the spur of the moment a woman decides to fulfill her husband's fantasy. COMMENTARY This a short, sexy, arousing story. The focus of the story is sex, but the author takes time to set the scene, before letting the characters get down to business. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383797562&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14670.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 185 - September 9, 1998 Ripe by BronwenSM F/M Length: 3,100 words SUMMARY Bronwen, eight months pregnant, enjoys sex with James, her husband. COMMENTARY This story is hot. This is a wonderfully written story. It is about sex, but it is also about loving her husband and her condition. JUDGMENT This is an outstanding story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=380904989&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14214.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 186 - September 9, 1998 Champagne & Trains by Bernadette F/M Length: 1,900 words SUMMARY A lonely woman on New Year's Eve finds a date at the last minute. COMMENTARY This is a well written story. The sex is not the focus of the story, but it is what the story ends with. There are a lot of nice, little details in this story. I might have enjoyed this story more if the main character was less mysterious than she was. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381517315&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14427.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 187 - September 10, 1998 The Cruelest Month by Hawkeye M/F Length: 2,500 words NOTE This is part five of a seven part series called "Seasons". Part 1 - Hazy Shade of Winter [Rogue Review No. 73] Part 2 - Summertime Blues [Rogue Review No. 125] Part 3 - Season of the Witch [Rogue Review No. 144] Part 4 - April Showers [Rogue Review No. 162] Part 5 - The Cruelest Month [Rogue Review No. 187] Part 6 - The Real World Part 7 - A Time to Cast Away Stones SUMMARY Sam cheats on Lisa, his girlfriend, with Julie, for the second time. This time he feels some remorse. COMMENTARY The subject of this story is infidelity. Sam reflects on his feelings, but ultimately his cock just gets him into more trouble. I had a hard time believing that Sam truly felt bad about cheating on Lisa. The story is more arousing than thought provoking. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=373027113&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13185.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 188 - September 10, 1998 We'll See What Happens by Sven the Elder M/F Length: 2,400 words SUMMARY Sven meets an obliging woman with strong toes in a small town in Nevada. COMMENTARY This is a nice little story. I like the build up to the sex. It was better than the sex, but I did find the sex arousing. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385878525&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14833.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 189 - September 11, 1998 The Better To... by Mat Twassel F/F Length: 4,800 words SUMMARY Annie meets Sara on the way to a rendezvous with a friend. COMMENTARY This story is both amusing and bizarre. I like the humor. There are some really bizarre twists near the end. I find this story arousing; the suspense kept me going, but I did not find the ending as satisfying as I hoped it would be. After reading this story I feel like I missed something somewhere. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=380873838&fmt=raw http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13791.txt ----- Rogue Review No. 190 - September 13, 1998 Man or Beast by Diana F/M Length: 9,500 words SUMMARY Emily is enjoys her vacation in the woods until someone or something begins stalking her. COMMENTARY This story does not involve non-consensual sex, although there is some violence in it. This is a good first effort. I prefer an author to show rather than tell me how their characters act and feel. I did find the sex arousing. The story probably could have been a little shorter. RATING This is a good story. LINKS http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385735502&fmt=raw [1/2] http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385735510&fmt=raw [2/2] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14757.txt [1/2] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14758.txt [2/2] ----- 9/14/98 -- Lee Vine * E-Mail - santiago@switchboardmail.com * Home Page - http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Cafe/3112/ -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----