Message-ID: <13480eli$9807300150@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: mr_j@my-dejanews.com Subject: "Hot Tub Reversed" (M solo, lite femdom, voy/exhib) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-ID: <6plo2s$ei9$1@nnrp1.dejanews.com> ****Warning....This is NOT unsolicited if you dont want it just delete it NOW. Also if you are under the age of 18 close this and go to a safe play place....hence your room or somewhere like that. If you are under 18 and you are still going to read this (I know your out there) Remember it is not my responsibility if this corrupts your mind and perverts all your thoughts. (credit goes to someone else for writing this. You know who you are, I don't! thanks.) As you may remember I posted this last week. It was meant to push my Sevin's buttons, as I am the DOM, and she is my SUB. Today, AndyB was nice enough to reverse the roles (very good job too!) and pose it from the other angle... As this would never occure in Sevin and my FSUB/MDOM relationship, it never occured to me that it could have happened any other way, but I think Andy did a good job, and if you are a MSUB, you may enjoy it. Oh, Sevin, don't you get any ideas!!! this is NOT for you! Try it and I'll take your new nipple clips (and chain) away!!! ;-) -------------------------------- HotTub Reversed "Hot Tub Reversed" (M solo, lite femdom, voy/exhib) by: Mr. J (with help from AndyB) written for: Sevin mr_j@my_dejanews.com We are at a party with a bunch of company people at someone's house. Most everyone is either eating, talking, or playing volleyball. They have a hot tub off to the side, but in clear view of everyone at the party, above the surface that is. I'm in the hot tub alone, and you say to the hostess, that looks nice. She doesn't realize the double meaning in what you've just said, and finds you a place to change so you can go in. After a bit of coxing your false protests, you give in, and join me. The hostess actually asks me if it is ok, and I act like I'm out of it, relaxing, and say "I don't care." You get in, but it must be on the other side of the tub. You wish you could sit next to me, but that wouldn't be right, not in front of all of these people! Your back is to everyone, and me being on the other side can see everyone. You whisper to me that you are getting very horny, and that you were hot before you even touched the warm water. I tell you I wish I could come over there and fuck you! Have you stuff your hard cock in me, and let it slip in and out, but I have to keep my distance. The Tub is large enough so I couldn't even reach out my foot to touch you!! You decide to tease me, and since all anyone can see is the back of your head, you lick your lips and stick your tongue out and wiggle it as if you, were eating my pussy. My nipples harden and I feel that familiar tingle between my legs. Then you tease me a little more by pushing the front of your suit down so I can see the tip of your dick. You are inspired by the look on my face and the points you can see pushing through the thin material of me top. In an effort to get me more worked up, you push your suit down farther, revealing your entire cock. I can't believe you are doing this, and wish I could do something about it. But there are 30+ people not more then 25 feet away. You think you are running things, in charge of this little tease-fest you are putting on! You push your suit down farther, and reveal your short pubic hair and balls but in the process, you brush your finger over your balls & can't believe how good it feels. You try to hide the fact that you've just stimulated your own cock right before my eyes, but I can see it wash over your face. I tell you to do that again. You play dumb and say "what?" I say, "You know perfectly well! Run your finger over your balls again." You protest that someone might see, but I assure you, they can't see you, and I can see all of them, so you will have plenty of warning. You give in, and run your fingers up your thighs to your balls, and let them drag across both sides. You try to make me think you just did it for me, but I can see the pleasure your balls are getting. You wish I would ask you to do it again, make you do it over and over, but you would never say so, you could never do that in front of me. Not since you are in charge here anyway. Not since I am the one getting teased here, being excited in front of all of these people! I stare you right in the eyes, and say "stroke your cock" in a very firm, yet quiet voice. You cannot resist my command. You can not believe I just ordered you to stroke yourself. But you also can't disobey that order and you wrap your fingers around your dick and slowly slip it up and back down again. You are getting very turned on, and your cock is very swollen and sensitive. I tell you to keep going, but you plead with your eyes, not to make you reveal something so private. After a moment, you can see the determination in my eyes, and with a sigh, you give in. You start slowly sliding your hand over your cock, applying just the right amount of pressure. Trying not to show how much you are actually enjoying this. Looking at me to see if you should stop, but secretly, hoping you get the signal to continue. You can't believe you are being made to masturbate in front of all of all of these people. To fuck your hand in front of all of these people. The fact that they can't see you doesn't even enter into your mind. You are starting to breath hard, and I see your body flinch a little bit with every stroke. I tell you not to stop, and that I want you to use your other hand to play with your balls. You look sternly at me, stop stroking yourself, and mouth to me a firm "NO." I ignore it completely, and tell you "don't stop!" Again you sigh, and continue the treatment on your cock. Deep inside you are happy to continue. You never could have started again, once you stopped, without my commanding it. Again, I tell you to play with your balls. This time all I get is a week "I can't." I get more explicit, "run your fingers over your balls. Run them around the base of your cock, and then over and down." You don't even give it a second thought, and trace your fingers slowly over your balls, that by this time are pulled up close to your body. Once you’ve done this, I tell you to stroke harder and tickle your sack. You slowly slide your hand up over the engorged head and then pull the skin tight as you jerk your hand down. You hope I can't see how much effort you are using to get as much stimulation as possible. I see it, and tell you to keep stroking yourself, and squeeze you balls. You can't believe I would have the nerve to order you to do all of these things in such a public place, but you comply. Gently rolling your balls between your fingers of the other hand, with the pace of your stroking. You have already been completely broken, and at this point can't seem to think about anything but the slowly approaching climax. You can feel it, but know you must hold it off. You couldn't possibly make yourself cum as a show to anyone. Not on command! But, with coxing from me, you continue to stroke your cock with one hand, while teasing your balls with the other. I think I am coxing, but you know, you would never willingly stop at this point. I know I've won, actually, I knew the moment you came over I would! And I sit and enjoy the prefect view I have of you jerking-off slightly writhing under the warm water. At this point, I tell you, "Whatever happens, you are NOT to stop. You may slow down if you need to, but you MUST NOT stop!!!" I reach over, and turn the bubbles on, losing the view of both hands, as they have their way with your body. Just as the view of what is happening to your cock is obscured, you here someone behind you, a few someones actually, and they are only a foot from your back. Your eyes widen, and you stop, one hand wrapped around your cock, and two fingers tickling your balls. I sensed you would do this, and give you a very short, but stern, glare. You very slowly start to move your hand again, very very slowly. But you can't believe this, there must be half a dozen people not more then two feet from you, looking at you, talking to you, and here you are jerking-off. Part of you is mortified, but also part knows if you went ANY faster you would explode right in front of them. You are very careful, as you continue to stimulate yourself. You glance down at the water and see that you cannot see below the surface because of the bubbles, then turn your head slightly and say "hi" to the group. As soon as they are done with their hellos, while you are fucking your hand mere feet from them, you here me say, "Hey, why don't you join us." You can't believe I am saying this, your eyes widen and lock onto my eyes for a moment. Then you turn to look to see if they are actually dressed for it. To your relief, they aren't exactly dressed, but you worry that may not stop them. All this while, you are still masturbating, fucking yourself, so close to all of these people. In front of these people. On display for these people. And a part of you is enjoying this... maybe too much! At this point, as if to act like they might, two of the women closest to you dip their hands into the water. First only a finger, then the whole hand. Right next to you, on both sides of you! You can't believe this, and you look me straight in the eyes. You can see me staring into your eyes, more deeply into you then you thought possible. Seeing you with two people no more then 18 inches away from your exposed cock, the one you are stroking, the one that is throbbing from all of this stimulation. You can't even make yourself stop, and continue to slowly stroke yourself. You think briefly, "what if they went any deeper, they might actually touch my exposed erection. Their fingers might actually feel my hand run over my cock!" It scares you, but you know that if one of them did, you would surely explode! You would explode with these people touching you. You shudder! You wish they would leave, but they keep talking to you and I. You don't even here a word they are saying. Your body starts to convulse very slightly. It is taking every ounce of control you have not to cry out in orgasm! One of them says "Look at you, you look hot! Your face is sweating, this tub is too hot for a day like this. You look like you are almost done." You hardly pay them any mind, but think, "yes, I am almost done! I am about to cum in front of you, and I can't stop myself! She won't let me stop! She is making me jerk-off for you to watch! I can't stop! I don't want to stop! I wish I could cum right now! I don't care if you watch me writhe in orgasm right before your eyes! I don't care about anything but the feeling between my legs! And that I am doing it because you told me to!" and turn your head back to me. Staring me straight in the eyes again. Your body continually throbbing slightly. You are sure you are going to cum right this moment. Someone in the group says, "back to the party." and they turn to leave. As you look me in the eyes, I see your body is riding the approach of your orgasm. Moving without control, just a little, but I can see it. I tell you "not yet", and you look at me pleading, sure you will cum anyway. Knowing that you shouldn't, not right in front of me! Not of your own doing, of your own desire! When the people are 10 feet away, I turn off the bubbles, and can once again see your hands, still working themselves on you. You look down at yourself, see you are still stroking yourself! Pleasing yourself for my pleasure! Right in front of me! Not more then a few feet away! And that I can see you stroke yourself! You look back up at me, now more obviously convulsing. Your eyes begging me to let the orgasm scream through your body. I look you straight in the eyes, hold it for a moment, just watching your light convulsions, and finally say "cum for me!" I barely get the words out when your body starts to thrash, and you let out a small scream. You right hand stroking yuor throbing cock and your other hand squeezing your tight balls. The entire group of six turns around at the sound of your orgasm, and sees you thrashing in the hot tub, not at all in control of yourself, as the climax runs through your entire body and you squirt into the warm water. It takes but a second to realize that you are cumming in front of these people, and you actually moan with the orgasm running through you! You have no idea what you are going to do. You quiet yourself, but continue to stroke your sensitive cock, still drawing out the convulsions of your orgasm. You look at me pleadingly, thinking "What have you done to me. What have you made me do!" At this point, you notice a faint smile, and I wave both my hands on the water, splashing, and say loudly "DAMN BEE!" and shoo my hands away from the tub. The group gives a joined laugh at your being afraid of a silly bee, and turns and leaves, you still thrashing around, uncontrollably, cuming and cuming and cuming! Still spurting under the water, still slowly stroking yourself, getting every throb out of the orgasm. An orgasm you will not soon forget! -----== Posted via Deja News, The Leader in Internet Discussion ==----- http://www.dejanews.com/rg_mkgrp.xp Create Your Own Free Member Forum -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | | | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | ----