Message-ID: <12998eli$9807131400@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: From: J R D Subject: BIOCHEMISTRY: THE SEQUEL [4/5] Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: X-Original-Message-Id: Here's part 4. Part 5 will be written in a couple of days and posted as soon as it's finished. Now, onto the boring stuff ------------------------- DISCLAIMERS ------------------------- This story contains scenes of an erotic and/or controversial nature, and is not intended for the perusal of minors. Further if perusal of such material is considered illegal in your area or immoral by your religion or personal beliefs, you should likewise bypass this story. This story remains the property of the author. Permission is granted to download, photocopy, copy and repost so long as any such action contains these disclaimers, and no attempt is made to profit from this story. All characters in this story are the creation of the author, and any resemblance to real persons, alive or dead, are purely coincidental. This story may contain aspects of fantastic science or magic. The parameters of what this science/magic can accomplish are completely at the discretion of me, the author, and, as such, I make no apologies for any rules of "real" physics, chemistry, biology, or magic that may be broken within the story. ------------------------- Now onto the fun stuff ------------------------- BIOCHEMISTRY: THE SEQUEL The Return of Jacqueline ONE YEAR LATER, AT ELAINE'S CLINIC... Elaine was scrambling to complete the latest tests she had made on James/Tracie. Tomorrow was the anniversary of the day Melissa had moved in, and she wanted to get home early to start the celebration. Elaine stopped for a second. Before Melissa had moved in, Elaine rarely got out of the lab before 7. Or if she did, she went straight to the lab at home. Now, she was almost never in the lab later than 5:30. The thing was, she actually got more done now. Ironic what love could inspire. There was a knock on the door. "Come in." Susan walked in. "Hey, Susan, just finishing up here, then we can get out of here." "Uhm, Elaine, there's a... man here to see you." "Can't you tell him to come back in a couple days?" "He insists, and... I think you need to see him." Elaine gave Susan a strange look. "Okay." Elaine finished up the tests and packed away the equipment. She then walked out into the waiting room and stopped cold when she saw who it was. "Hello, Jack," she said, the contempt evident in her voice. "What are you doing here?" "I'd like to see my wife." "She's not your wife any more." "A legal document I was forced to sign. I don't consider it binding." "What you consider isn't relevant." "Regardless, you will take me to see my wife." "And why would I do that?" "Because if you don't, if you make the decision for her as to whether or not she can see me, then you become as bad as you say I am." Elaine cringed. Damn it! He was right. She had no right to tell Melissa who she could or couldn't see, no matter who it was or how bad it could be for her. "Alright, Jack, I'll take you to see her. But I'm gong to warn you, my staff has fallen in love with Melissa. If you hurt her, even unintentionally, you'll be lucky to make it out of the house alive." Jack said nothing. "Well, come on." Elaine walked to her limo, and Jack followed. Elaine got in, waited for Jack, then signaled her driver to pull out. "So, why do you want to talk to Melissa, Jack?" "That's between her and me." Elaine tensed up. Part of her, a very strong part, wanted to leap across the limo and beat an answer out of him, but she, somehow, managed to restrain herself. They drove the rest of the way in silence. When they got there, Elaine proceeded him up the front steps. When they got inside, Elaine said, "Linda will show you to the parlor. I'll go get Melissa." Elaine went up to Melissa's room. She was on the phone making arrangements for a charity event. Since all the household duties were controlled by Linda, Melissa started feeling bored and restless early on, so Elaine suggested she take the role of the classic rich wife, and make many charity events. Elaine gave her an unlimited expense account, and Melissa took to it like a fish to water. She became a true society matron, sponsoring and arranging fund raisers for any and every charity she could. When Elaine entered, Melissa winked at her. She quickly finished her call, hung up the receiver, and put her arms around Elaine's neck. "Happy anniversary, love. Ready to start the festivities?" Melissa kissed Elaine and quickly noticed Elaine wasn't quite getting into it like she normally would. "Okay, hun, what's wrong?" "You've got a visitor." "So? What's the big deal?" "It's Jack." "Jack? As in..." "As in your ex." "Oh." "If you want, I'll send him packing. I just didn't feel right making the decision for you." "No. If he made the effort after all this time, it might be important. I'll see him. Will you be there with me?" "I... don't think I should." "Why not?" "Melissa, if you really want me there, I will be. But, if I'm in the room, and Jack does anything to hurt you, even unintentionally... I'll kill him. I will grab him around the neck, and snap it like a twig." "Oh." "But I do want you to have someone in there. Just in case. I was thinking Elizabeth. She can maintain control, and also has the strength to toss Jack around like a rag doll, if necessary." "Good suggestion." Melissa kissed Elaine. "You'll be watching on the security cameras?" "Of course." Melissa walked down to the kitchen, got Elizabeth, and headed to the parlor. She went inside and said, "Hello, Jack." "Hello, Melissa. You're looking well." "You're looking... well." It was a total lie. He looked like crap. "What did you want to talk about?" "Can we talk alone?" He nodded towards Elizabeth. "No." Melissa sat down. "But-" "Jack, although you've never laid a finger on me, you've also always had a nasty streak. Elizabeth is here to make sure you don't try something stupid. Whatever you have to say can be said in front of her. Now, what do you have to say to me?" Jack sat down. "Alright. I was just figuring you had gotten over this lesbian infatuation, and had come to your senses and were ready to come back home." Melissa stared at Jack, stunned. Finally, she said, "Go home, Jack," and got up. Jack lurched to his feet and put his hand on her arm. "Melissa, please." He quickly removed his hand as Elizabeth crossed the room towards them. Melissa glared at Jack. "What's your problem, Jack?" "I... I need you, Melissa." Melissa just stared at Jack. There was no way he would've said something like that in jest. It would've been hard enough for him to admit if it was true. But Melissa needed details. Details that Jack never would admit to willingly, and Melissa didn't want to finagle every little detail from him. "Wait here." Jack started to protest, but Melissa silenced him with a gesture. She left the room and went to the security booth where Elaine was waiting. "Well?" Elaine said when Melissa entered. "I need some help from you to get to the truth." "Surely, you can't believe him?!" "Jack would never lie about something like that. And even if he would, I could always tell when Jack was lying. But I need your help to get to the full details." "NO!" Elaine turned away. "I will not help that... man!" "Elaine." Melissa put her hand on Elaine's arm. Elaine turned and looked her lover in the eye. "For me?" Elaine sighed. That did it. There was no way she could deny Melissa anything. "What do you need?" "The truth serum you created. You said it was more powerful than regular truth serums." "It cuts through all defense mechanisms of the brain, making it impossible for the subject to lie, even to himself." "That's what I need." "I'll have Linda bring you a dose." "Okay." Melissa stood on her tiptoes and kissed Elaine on the cheek. She returned to the parlor to be met by Linda outside the door. Linda handed her the truth serum. "Thanks." Before Linda let her get away, she said, "Be careful, hun. We don't want to lose you." "You won't." Melissa took the truth serum and went inside. Jack was sitting meekly on the couch, clearly intimidated by Elizabeth. Melissa walked up to him and handed him the serum. "What's this?" he asked. "A truth serum. It'll help us get to the truth." "But-" "Drink it or leave, Jack." Jack only took a few seconds before downing the entire bottle. After a few seconds, his eyes glazed over, and he stared straight ahead. "Jack?" "Yes?" "Why are you here?" "Because I need you." "But why? Why do you need me?" "Because..." Melissa saw Jack trying to fight it, but the serum was too strong. "I am weak. I have always been weak. I survived by leaching off your strength. By making myself feel strong by making you weaker. Without you, my life is and has always been nothing. Without you... I'll kill myself. And I don't want to die." Melissa was shocked. Here he was confessing to something she never would've suspected. Now what? She couldn't leave, but she couldn't just let Jack die. Then she thought of a plan. Jack probably wouldn't like it, but that was tough. She quickly left the room and ran to the security room. Elaine was nowhere to be seen. Melissa asked Janine, the security chief, "Where's Elaine?" "She left right after Jack's confession. She didn't say where she was going." "That's strange." Melissa left and went to the room that she and Elaine shared. She found Elaine sitting on the edge of the bed, crying. She ran to Elaine's side and took her in her arms. "Hun, what's wrong?" "I know you. You can't let Jack die. Even he doesn't deserve that. That means you're going to leave me." "Oh. Oh, no, hun." Melissa held Elaine to her bosom. "Sometimes, in your role as Mistress of the house, I forget that other times, you're just a scared little girl. Elaine, my love, I do not want to see Jack die, but I would sooner see him rot in hell then ever leave you." Elaine sniffled back some tears. "You mean it?" "Yes, my love, I could never lie to you. But I will need some help from you to save Jack's life. Some help from Susan would also be great, but that will, of course, be her choice." Melissa quickly outlined her plan to Elaine. "Jack's not going to like that. Hell, I don't like it." "But why?" "With the exception of sexual criminals, rapists, pedophiles, and the like, I have never done a permanent, unwilling transformation. I have taken on more than a few who might've deserved it, but I always left it up to them. You're talking about a permanent transformation of both Jack's body and his psyche. This is the kind of thing that can result in a serious emotional/mental breakdown. Are you even sure Jack can handle it?" Melissa thought about it. "No, I'm not." "And the transformation is only the beginning. If your plan works, you're talking about bringing Jack here. Into this household. Forget about what that'll do to him. Think about what it'll do to me!" "I know. And, if you ever decide that you can't handle him after his transformation we can always ship him off to private school." Elaine sighed. "Alright, I'll do it, for you. On one condition." "Anything." "Hold on, hun. It's not something you can do. It's something Jack has to do." "What?" Elaine told Melissa what she wanted. "You don't make it easy, do you?" "It's the only way I'll do this." "But-" "No, Melissa, not even for you will I go easy on this. It's the only way I can accept going easy on my policy of no unwilling, permanent transformations." "Okay. But if I can do that, you'll transform him?" "Yes, but don't ever expect me to like him. Even after the transformation." Melissa kissed Elaine. "Just try to tolerate him." "Okay." After Melissa left, she said, "But I'm not promising anything." Melissa returned to the parlor. Jack was still on the couch, the truth serum he had been given wearing off. Melissa walked up to him. "Jack, I've thought about what you said." "And?" "I don't want you to die." "So you'll come back home with me?" "No. I've found love here, and I won't give it up. Not even to save your life." "Oh. Then I guess I should leave." "Maybe not. There's a way you could stay here." "Elaine would allow that? Allow me to come live here?" "Yes, and no. She'd never allow Jack, the man, to move in." "Then what?" "Jack, I've always wanted a daughter." "But you've gone through menopause. You can't birth another child." "I don't think you're getting it, Jack. I may not be able to birth another child, but with your help, I could have a teenage one." "My help?" "Jack, I want Jacqueline back. With Elaine's help, you can be restored to your form as a 13 year old girl. And then you can enter the household as my daughter." "I... I don't think I can do that." Melissa walked over, kissed Jack on the forehead, and said, "Then goodbye, Jack." As she walked away, Jack said, "Okay." "What?" "I said okay. I'll do it." "Alright, then you have to choose your new dimensions." "Choose?" "Cup size, waist and hips. We can't very well give you your last proportions. No matter what we do to your face, we can't very well pass off a girl with measurements of 38-28-38 and a double E cup as a 13 year old. We're going to have enough troubles passing off someone 5'10" as a teen." "Oh, well, whatever you want." "No, Jack." "What?" "You have to take an active role in your own transformation. Elaine insists and I agree. If you don't, you'll always be able to say you had to do this, and that you just went along with it. But, if you take part in your transformation, it'll show that at least part of you is willing to accept your new status as a girl." "But I don't want to be a girl." Melissa put her arm around Jack's shoulder. "Jack, it's time to be blunt. You may not want to be a girl, but, as a guy, you suck." "Thanks." "Jack, I'm not trying to be harsh. But don't you see? This isn't just a second chance with me. It's a second chance at your life. I know one of the biggest regrets you've ever had was not doing as well in school as you wanted. Well, now, you'll be headed back to school, and can get better grades." "Back to high school?" "In a couple years, but first back to junior high. You are only barely into your teens." "But... as a girl?" "So? Y'know, Jack, some of us have managed to make it as women. Some of us have even done pretty well for ourselves. And, maybe, just maybe, you'll be a great woman." "Will you... expect me to date guys?" "Only if you want to, hun. Who you date is your business. But does this mean you're willing?" "Yes." "So what do you want your measurements to be?" Jack thought about it for a few seconds and said, "38-30-38." "That's going to be sexy. What cup size?" "D." "I don't know. That's pretty big." "I was thinking it was going to be small. I saw on one of those talk shows once, a girl who was D cup at 13 and she was only 5'5. I also want to grow out a little as I grow older." "You want to be big breasted?" "Well, yeah. If I expected it from you, it wouldn't be fair to not expect it from myself." Melissa kissed Jack's forehead. "Already, the prospect of being a woman is good for you. Now, are you sure you want those proportions? They will make you a little sexpot." "Uh-huh." "Okay. I'll be back in a few." Melissa returned to the security booth, where Elaine had returned to. "Well, I did it. I got him to choose his own form." Somewhat depressed, Elaine said, "Yes, you did." Melissa wrapped her arms around her lover. "I know you don't like this, but it will work out for the best." Elaine gave Melissa a quick peck. "I'll be in my lab. It'll take me about an hour to brew up Jack's potion." One hour later, Elaine brought a beaker filled with a bubbling, green concoction to the parlor. Melissa came up to her, and said, "Thanks, Elaine." "Hold it a second, love. There's a few things I want to mention first. I want Jack making an informed decision before he downs this. Now, as a scientist, I'd like to see Jack down this, but it would be irresponsible of me to fail to warn him that I have done no long term testing of the effects of the age reducing drug. It could cause you to go absolutely bonkers in terms of sex drive. You might find yourself attracted to anything with a pulse." Jack asked, "Men?" "Perhaps. You'll definitely find a stronger attraction to women. You'll possibly be attracted to men. Possibly even to animals. I just don't have enough data to predict. Are you still sure you want to do this?" Elaine was hoping he wouldn't, but was disappointed when he said, "Give it to me." She handed him the beaker, and he drank it down. He immediately grew sleepy and lay back. Melissa and Elizabeth stretched him out on the couch. Elaine said, "I think you should probably get rid of all Jack's old stuff before he wakes up. Subject him to total immersion. The less that reminds him of his old life, the better. Strip him of his male clothes, take him upstairs, give him one of the guest rooms, the effeminately decorated ones. I'd even suggest sending someone out to get some teenage clothes and paraphernalia." "How long will it take?" "Two hours." "Okay, can you help?" Elaine sighed. "Please don't ask that." Melissa put her hand on Elaine's arm. "Elaine, my love, I do know how hard this was for you. And I do appreciate it. Thank you." Elaine gave her a weak smile. "Look, I've already talked to Susan and she's agreed to take Jacqueline for the night, so I see no reason why you and I can't proceed with our original plans for tonight." "I'm not sure what kind of mood I'm going to be in tonight." "Close your eyes." "Huh?" "Just close your eyes." Elaine did as she was asked. "Now envision me naked, kneeling before you, sucking on your dick." Elaine gasped as the blood pumped into her loins. "In the mood now?" "I got to hand it to you, girl. No one else could ever excite me as fast as you could." Elaine kissed Melissa on the mouth. "Now go take care of our little Jacqueline. I'll wait upstairs in our room." "Thanks, love." After Elaine left, Elizabeth helped Melissa to undress Jack. "Don't worry, hun. As long as Jack tries to make the best of being Jacqueline, she'll come around." "Thanks." Two hours later, Jacqueline awoke. He stretched as he usually did upon awakening, his chest shifting like it had upon first awakening after fucking that hooker over a year ago. He looked down and saw his new tits hanging from his chest and actually smiled. It had been scary to begin with, but now that it was over and he was Jacqueline for good, it was almost a relief. He got up and walked over to the mirror. Now that he knew what to expect, he took a good look at himself, and he had to admit, he was a looker. "Like what you see?" he heard Melissa say from the doorway. "Well, I look pretty. I'm not sure yet whether or not I like it." "Fair enough." Melissa walked over and kissed him (no, her, Jacqueline had to get used to thinking of him... her self in the feminine) on the mouth. "But I do want this to be as pleasant as possible." "Yes, Melissa." "Mother." "Huh?" "I wasn't just making conversation when I said I wanted a daughter. You must refer to me as mother or mom or mommy. Mommy, probably wouldn't work. Not for a teenager. But you must refer to me as your mom." "Yes, mom." "Good. Now get dressed. You'll find a collection of garments that'll fit you in your dresser. Get dressed." "Mom?" "Yes, Jackie?" "Will we ever have sex again?" "Yes, dear. I plan on maintaining an incestuous relationship with my daughter." Jacqueline smiled. "Mom?" Exasperated, Melissa said, "Yes, dear?" "Was I this pretty before? The last time I was Jackie, I mean." "Well, the huge tits were something of a distraction, but yes, you were." "Thank you, mom." *********** LATER THAT EVENING... Jacqueline finished up the dishes, and went upstairs to her room. She had tried her best to be a good daughter and Melissa had clearly appreciated it, but Elaine had been cold and distant throughout the evening. When he got to his room, Melissa was waiting for him. He curtsied (well, he tried). "Evening, mother." "Good evening, Jackie. I wanted to let you know that I appreciated your pleasant behavior this evening." "But Elaine didn't. I don't think she likes me much." "Do you blame her?" "I suppose not." "Enough of that though. In an effort to get you started off on a pleasant foot, I've arranged an evening's entertainment for you." "Sex? With you?" "Sex, yes. But not with me. Elaine and I have plans to celebrate the anniversary of our... marriage." "Oh." "Tonight you will stay with Susan and Elizabeth. You remember them? From the cruise?" "Are they... like you, or like Elaine... and me?" "Susan was born female. Elizabeth is a she-male." "And... what am I to do with them?""Whatever they ask. Jackie, I want you to make every effort to do whatever it takes to please whoever I ask." "Yes, mom." "Jackie, I hear the words, but not the agreement." "I'm trying, mom." "I know. But if it turns out that bringing you into this household was a mistake, then Elaine could and would definitely ship you off to a European boarding school." "You would do that to me?" "Only if I had to. Jackie, I'm not just sending you to Susan and Elizabeth to keep you out of my hair. Susan and Elizabeth were husband and wife before Liz's transformation. Since that transformation, Susan has become a master of pleasing she-males while treating them as women. Give in to her and she will help you accept your newfound girlishness, while pleasing you. Fight her... and you will be one step closer to being shipped out of here. Am I clear?" "Yes, mother." "Good, now go. Down the hall, third room on the left." "Yes, mom." Jackie left the room and went down the hall to the room Melissa had specified. When she got there, she knocked on the door. From inside, she heard, "Enter." Jacqueline walked in. Susan was standing, completely naked. Elizabeth was kneeling in front of her, dressed only in corset and stockings. Elizabeth was clearly in the middle of licking Susan's cunt. "Am I disturbing something?" Jackie asked. "Not disturbing, just late. We decided to get started without you. Get undressed, we'll be just one... second." As Jackie got out of her clothes, Susan moaned and shuddered in orgasm. After she recovered, she said, "Your tongue is as marvelous as ever, Elizabeth." "Thank you, my love." "Come here, Jacqueline." When the new girl hesitated, Susan said, "It's okay. I don't bite. Unless you want me to." Jackie hesitantly went to Susan. "Now, Jackie, how do you feel about this?" "I... guess I'm ready." "No, hun. Not are you willing or are you ready. How do you feel? A man is trained to hide his emotion, but a woman must be prepared to express herself no matter how she feels. Now. How do you feel about this?" "I... I don't know what to feel." "You're not supposed to feel any specific emotion. You just feel what you feel. Now how do you feel?" "I... I'm scared." Susan smiled. "It's okay to be scared." She stepped behind Jackie, reached around, and started massaging her breasts. "I'm here to help you deal with that fear." Jackie felt wave after wave of pleasure pulse through her body. She closed her eyes and moaned. Susan's hands wandered her breasts in marvelous ways, bringing her great pleasure. She then felt a third hand on her dick. She opened her eyes and saw Elizabeth. Elizabeth had her hand on Jackie's dick. Part of Jackie wanted to protest, to say no, but all along she knew she would give in. If she had the strength to say no, she wouldn't be a she in the first place. Elizabeth leaned forward and placed her lips against Jackie's. They kissed softly. Susan slowly bent her at the hips as Elizabeth fondled her to hardness. Susan told her, "Close your eyes, hun." Jackie did so and the sensations on her cock disappeared. Susan continued to fondle her breasts, and soon, she felt a somewhat familiar pressure on her ass. It only took her a few seconds to identify it as the same feeling as the dildo in her ass that she had been forced to use upon herself at the end of the cruise a year ago. She looked back and saw Susan pressing a strap-on into her ass. "Please, don't." Susan continued to stroke her breasts, and said, "Just relax into it, hun." Elizabeth (who had strapped the dildo on her wife) said, "Jackie, a dildo, in the hands of someone who knows how to use it, can provide you with so much pleasure. And there's no one better at it than Susan." Jackie trembled, terrified. Elizabeth took her by the hand. "It's okay, hun. Although you may not believe it, we're here for you. There will be some pain, but only what we have to do." "I... I'm afraid." Elizabeth stepped up close. "Go ahead and hold on to me." It only took a few seconds before Jackie wrapped her hands around Elizabeth, shutting her eyes tight against the reality of being fucked by the plastic cock. Susan continued to slowly press the dildo into Jackie's ass. When their hips were pressed together, Susan stopped, using only her hands to excite Jackie, and letting the new she-male get used to the feeling of penetration inside her. It took a while for Jackie to get used to the new sensations, but eventually something marvelous happened. The sensations in her ass changed. The dildo stopped being a harsh invader and became instead a strange friend. Jacqueline tried to find out why, but soon gave up and gave in to the pleasure. As soon as she started humping her ass backwards, Susan smiled and started fucking her with the dildo. Jackie was amazed. Here she was being fucked by a dildo. And she was liking it! She opened her eyes to see Elizabeth smiling down at her. Jackie smiled back and pulled Elizabeth down and kissed her. The pleasure continued to build and build. Then suddenly, just stopped. But it didn't go away, it just stopped building. Elizabeth whispered in her ear, "We call this the delicious torture. Susan will keep you on the edge of orgasm until she's cum a time or two. Then she'll let you cum in a mind blowing simultaneous orgasm, the likes of which you've never had before." Jacqueline nodded, thinking she could handle it. But it was only a few seconds before she was whimpering and begging to be allowed to cum. Susan only continued to do what she was doing. Jacqueline, in response, closed her eyes and pulled Elizabeth tightly to her. Elizabeth just held Jackie as the new "girl" rubbed her. Jackie felt Susan tremble and cum, and figured that she would be allowed to cum now, but, once more, Susan only held her just below the point where she would be able to explode. Jackie whimpered again. She felt a nipple brush her mouth, and, almost automatically, opened her mouth and sucked it in. She suckled it like a baby, as Susan fucked her till the now elder woman came once again. Jackie let the nipple pop from her mouth, turned to Susan and said, "Please, Mistress, let me cum." Susan held her at the pre-orgasm point, and said, "Apparently, you haven't been instructed in how to address the women of the house. The only woman here you address as Mistress is Elaine. Everyone else, until you're told otherwise, is either Lady their name or milady. I, for instance, am Lady Susan. Elizabeth is Lady Elizabeth. Do you understand?" "Yes, ma'am." "No, not ma'am. That appellation is also reserved for Elaine." "Yes, milady." "Very good." Susan then increased her attentions on Jackie, allowing her to finally pass that point of ecstasy. Jackie exploded in orgasm, her dick spraying all over the floor. She then collapsed on the floor, sliding off the dildo. Elizabeth and Susan turned her over, and by slapping her face were able to revive her. When she woke up, Jackie said, "For a few seconds, I was floating," she pointed at the ceiling, "up there. I could see myself." Susan smiled. "So you had fun?" "Yes, ma... milady." "Unfortunately we have a problem." "What's that?" "There's a rule here. Share and share alike. If you give pleasure, you have a right to expect pleasure. And if you get pleasure, you have a duty to give it. Now you and I have both received quite a bit of pleasure, but Elizabeth has yet to cum even once. And since you have received more pleasure than I from her, it falls to you to bring her off." "But... you got an orgasm from her as I walked in." "And she got an orgasm from me before you even got here." Jackie turned to Elizabeth. "Would you like me to fuck you in your ass?" "No, hun. My ass is reserved for a very select group. Susan, of course, Sam, Tracie, Mistress Elaine, and Melissa. No others admitted. Perhaps one day you will be, but not tonight." "Would you like to... fuck me in the ass?" "No, hun. I was thinking of another orifice." "But what...? Oh, you want a blowjob." "Mm-hmm." Jackie sighed. "I told... mother I'd do what you asked." Elizabeth kissed Jackie. "Try to get into it, hun. I remember my first blowjob. I thought I'd hate it, too. But, it turned out to be a rather tasty treat." "I... I don't know about this." "It's okay, hun. A few years ago, I was right where you are. I know what you're feeling." "You... You do?" "Mm-hmm. Tell you what, why don't we do a 69. You suck me, and I'll suck you." Then Elizabeth said to Susan, "Don't frown at me like that." "Jacqueline has already received pleasure and comfort from you. It sets a bad precedent." "The only thing I did was hold and stroke her, and she did return the favor. Besides, hun, you're not where she is. Where I was years ago." "But-" "Susan, please. I promised to be your good and dutiful wife so many years ago, so, if you order it, I won't suck Jackie off, but please don't fight me on this." Susan sighed. "Alright, love. As you said, I'm not where she is or where you were. I'll defer to your judgment in this." Elizabeth took Jackie by the hand and led her to the bed. She helped the new transformee get comfortable on her back. "Okay, hun," she said as she got above Jackie, "just do what I do, and follow my lead." Jackie responded with a meek, "Okay." Elizabeth leaned down (her tits pressing on Jackie's stomach) and licked the tip of Jackie's dick. She waited for Jackie to return the action and was pleased not to have to wait for very long. She licked Jackie's dick a few more times before taking the dickhead into her mouth. When she felt Jackie suck her own dickhead into her mouth, she proceeded to use her tongue to encircle and stroke the tip of Jackie's dick. As Jackie mirrored her, Elizabeth started to move her head up and down on Jackie's rod. Despite the fact that Jackie's cock was the larger of the two, Elizabeth was able to take all of it, whereas Jackie was only able to take about half of Elizabeth into her throat before her gag reflex kicked in. But it didn't take long before each was spraying into the other in orgasm. Elizabeth swallowed quickly then spun around. As she suspected, Jackie had yet to swallow. Jackie, having more recently cum before their mutual suck-off, had deposited the lighter load, and Jackie wasn't sure what to do with all that cum. Elizabeth said, "Share half with me, then swallow the rest." Jackie did as she was told, passing half of the semen in her mouth to Elizabeth in a sensual kiss. Jackie swallowed. Elizabeth smiled then leaned forward and kissed Jackie. Jackie was surprised when she received about half of what she had given to Elizabeth back in that kiss. Jackie quickly caught on to the game and passed half back again. This continued on through three more passes until Jackie surprised them both by finishing off what was left. "Sorry," Jackie said, "but there didn't seem all that much left." "There really wasn't. So how did you like giving your first blowjob?" Jackie blushed. "It was..." "Yes?" "Fun." "I felt the same." Elizabeth playfully swatted Jackie on the behind. "Now you head off to bed." Jackie got up, collected her clothes and headed out of the room. Just before she left, Elizabeth said, "Jacqueline." "Yes?" "If you ever want to talk to anyone, except when I'm running the kitchen, I'll be there for you." "Thanks." After Jackie had left, Susan said, "Well, I think we did our job. Jackie had a night of pleasure, learned to accept her responsibility for giving as well as getting pleasure, and knows she's got a friend. You know, it always amazes me how you can always play "big sister" to all the new transformees. Even ones who were as bad as Jack was." "I guess I feel that even as bad as he was, nothing Jack did compares with what I did to you." "Oh, hun, that wasn't you. It was the man you used to be who raped me." Elizabeth said, "Let's just say that we disagree about who I am now. A different person, or just a better one. Now, your wife is sitting here on the bed in nothing more than corset and stockings, and you're philosophizing. Are you gonna come over here and service me like a wife deserves to be serviced? Or should I just get out of this corset and curl up in bed and go to sleep?" "Well, with an invitation like that..." Susan moved towards her wife. Jackie ran back into her room and jumped on the bed. What a strange day she had. She had originally come here as Jack prepared to do whatever it would take to get Melissa back. Who knew that by the end of the day she would be a she, have spent the last part of the day doing chores in a dress, getting fucked up the ass (and liking it), and giving her first blowjob (and liking that, too). Melissa was right. This was a second chance at life. And much as she wasn't sure about being a girl, Jacqueline wasn't going to fuck this up. ***************** ONE YEAR LATER... Jackie got out of bed, got dressed, and went down for breakfast. It was the anniversary of her transformation, Jackie's birthday, so to speak, and mom was planning a party. As she walked down the steps, Jackie reflected on her last year as a girl. School had been great. She had made a bunch of friends, gotten great grades, and even joined the cheerleading squad. It turns out that Elaine had been both right and wrong about some of the effects of the age reducer. her sex drive had indeed increased. Increased far beyond anything she had ever had as Jack. But it was only towards women. Jack felt no attraction to any man (much less animals), but every time a cute girl walked by, she had to fight to keep her cock from being visible. She had finally taken to wearing a cock restraint in order to keep her secret, secret. It was painful at times, but necessary. Her home life had been pretty good. She seemed to have found a great friend in Elizabeth, and most of the "girls" were willing to share their beds with her. (Hell, Jacqueline was getting more sex then Jack ever had.) And now that Jackie had realized the role she was expected to play in sex, added to her willing subservience, had made her relationship with her "mother" stronger than it had ever been. The one bad thing about her new life had been Elaine. She had yet to accept Jackie into her life. She rarely let Jackie into her bed, and then only when Melissa was present. It was never one on one. Further, whenever Melissa wasn't around, Elaine was constantly giving her the cold shoulder. Oh, she was never mean or rude, but she rarely volunteered speech, and tended to keep her answers to Jackie's questions and comments as short as possible. Jackie was dreading this day. Melissa had planned a party for her, but Melissa was working a big charity brunch, and would be out of the house for the morning and most of the afternoon, leaving Jackie alone with Elaine. Before she entered the dining room where she knew Elaine would be, she took a deep breath, and steeled herself. She walked into the dining room. Elaine was hiding behind a paper like she usually did when Melissa wasn't there. Jackie walked up and curtsied (even though Elaine couldn't see it). "Mistress." Coldly, Elaine said, "Jacqueline." That more than anything else hurt Jackie. In the entire year Jackie had been here, Elaine had never referred to her by anything other than her full, formal name. Jackie played with her skirt a bit before she tried to bridge the gap by trying conversation. "Mistress?" "Yes, Jacqueline?" "Could I ask you a question?" "Go ahead, Jacqueline." "I was wondering. In the few times you have allowed me to share your bed, I've noticed that you rarely allow anyone, including Melissa, to fuck you in your ass. I know you enjoy it, so I was just wondering why you don't do it more often?" Elaine dropped the paper and said, "That is PRIVATE!" Jacqueline cringed visibly, and, as images of European boarding schools danced through her head, fearfully said, "I'm sorry." Elaine sighed. "No, I'm sorry. I shouldn't be so hard on you. You have tried to be a good girl during your stay here." That was Elaine. Even when being apologetic, she made Jackie feel as though her stay was just temporary. "The fact of the matter is, I'm a transsexual. I'm not just a guy who discovered his feminine side and decided he liked being a girl. In my heart, in my soul, I'm a woman. Now at the time I underwent my original, more mainstream, transformation the surgical techniques for giving a man a vagina were, in my opinion, inadequate in quality. So I decided to wait for a while, hoping surgical techniques would improve. "Also, it turned out that standard treatments were inadequate to get the results I wanted. At the end of my transformation I still looked far too much like a guy. That was when I developed my Aggressive Protein String system which is the centerpiece of all my biochemical concoctions. I used it to give myself a more feminine appearance. Unfortunately, a problem in the compounds I developed has caused my entire crotch to become supersaturated, and now, if I ever remove my cock and balls and then get sexually stimulated, my body will rebuild them. "So, to answer your question, the reason I don't allow myself to get fucked up the ass more is because it's too much of a reminder that I don't have the cunt that I truly want." "Well, you do seem to be good at using your dick." "Yes, but it's a poor substitute for the cunt I want." "Well, couldn't you just build yourself a cunt?" "Weren't you listening? If I get rid of my cock, my body will rebuild it!" Elaine snapped the paper and brought it back in front of her face. "Stupid girl." "No, I mean, couldn't you give yourself a cunt while keeping your cock? Become a, what's the term, a hermaphrodite?" There was silence from behind the paper. The edge slowly lowered, and Elaine had a thoughtful, far-off look on her face. She slowly folded the paper, and called out, "Elizabeth." Elizabeth walked from the kitchen. "You called, Mistress?" Elaine set the paper down and said, "I've decided to skip breakfast. I'll be in my lab. Don't disturb me." After she walked away, Elizabeth asked, "What did you say to her? Mistress hasn't locked herself in her lab since before Melissa moved in." Jackie quickly outlined the conversation they had. "I swear. If I knew how she'd react, I'd never had said a thing. I was just trying to get to know her. To get her to accept me." "Well, she didn't seem angry. I wonder what she's thinking." ************** LATER THAT DAY... When Melissa came in that afternoon, Linda told her what had happened and that Elaine had locked herself in the lab and hadn't come out all day. The one thing that had shown the household staff that Elaine loved Melissa was that she had given Melissa a key to the lab. Something she had done for no one else, not even the lab assistants who worked with her. And since the household was now concerned that they had heard nothing from the lab all day, they asked Melissa to go in and see if something had happened. Melissa went straight to the lab. Jackie was sitting outside. Melissa looked at her and said, "If something has happened to Elaine, you'll be out of here before dinnertime." Jackie cringed. Melissa used her key on the lab door and went in. Elaine was sitting in front of her lab table, staring at a beaker. Melissa said, "Elaine?" Without looking back, Elaine responded, "Shhhh. Don't distract me." "Are... Are you okay?" "I'll tell you in a minute." Melissa didn't know what to say. Elaine didn't seem to be having any problems. But Melissa couldn't help but wonder what was in the beaker. She walked over and looked over Elaine's shoulder. In the beaker were two separate mixtures, one green, one yellow. The two swirled about violently. Elaine whispered, "Come on; come on. Do it for me." Melissa watched the two swirl about for a bit before settling into a slow pulsing pattern. Kind of like two lava lamps in the same glass. Elaine smiled. "Yes. It worked. It worked!" Elaine leapt up and kissed Melissa. Then she asked, "Where is she? Where is that wonderful girl?" She saw Jackie lurking in the doorway. "There she is!" Elaine ran to her and swept her up into her arms and hugged Jacqueline. "Jackie, sweet girl, you were right! I can have both!" Tears came to Jackie's eyes. "You... You don't hate me?" "Hate you? No. Oh, but I have been so hard on you, haven't I? I was so afraid you would take Melissa from me. Instead you give to me, and all I do is repay you with suspicion. Can you ever forgive me?" "Forgive you? Oh, yes. Yes!" Jackie threw her arms around Elaine's neck. Melissa walked up and put her hand on Elaine's shoulder. "But, hun. It doesn't look like anything happened." "Exactly. The two compounds remained active without combining. The green is the old compound, which gives me my female body. The yellow will give me the cunt I always wanted!" "But I thought you said that wasn't possible?" "It was your daughter who gave me the clue. I couldn't do it as long as I was thinking either/or. But she pointed out that I could have both. It's not as good as being all femme, but it's better than what I have now, which is just my male organs." "So Jacqueline did a good thing?" "A good thing? She did a great thing! Now I just need to find a test subject." "But the beaker?" "Pure lab conditions, love. The next step is testing it on a live subject. This could be a whole other kettle of fish once we get it into a human body." ************** LATER, AFTER DINNER... Elaine brought together most of her household heads, and explained what was going on. Elizabeth was the first to speak up. "I'll do it. You can test it on me." Susan said, "Now wait a second. I'm not sure I like this idea." "Don't worry, Susan. I'm sorry, Elizabeth, but I can't use you." "But-" Elaine held up her hand. "It's not because of any purely altruistic reasons. If you'll recall, the formula I gave you had an added element. Every time you went higher than a certain blood alcohol level your breasts would grow. And in order to control your alcoholism, you had me add more elements to make that growth painful. Those elements are still active in your blood. The formula in your body is too different from the one in my own. You wouldn't be a good test subject." Linda said, "Then I'll do it." "Sorry, hun. Same reasons apply. The compound I used on you was too different from my own. In fact, anybody who got a compound which had a special qualifier that I added wouldn't be eligible." Bridgette, Elaine's accountant, a she-male with a photographic memory, said, "That only applies to two people, you and Samantha." Jackie said, "What about me? I didn't have any special qualifiers added. At least not this time." Melissa said, "Yes, but your first solution would interfere with the new one." "Oh."Elaine said, "Wait a second, hun. That may not be the case." "But she did have that first compound. And it caused some of the most radical body changes of all." "Yes, but after I gave her the neutralizer that compound became inert. It would've only taken 5 to 7 months for her body to have purged it. She spent a year as Jack before returning to us. I'd have to test her to make sure, but that should be more than enough time." "But... what about the age reversing elements in her formula?" "They were designed to have an effect then become inert. Otherwise she'd keep getting younger and younger, rather than aging normally. It's been over a year since we gave those to her. They should be gone, too." Melissa looked from Elaine to a hopeful Jackie, then back to Elaine, and said, "I'm sorry. I can't risk my daughter." "But, mom-" "No, hun, I'm sorry. Elaine, you're just gonna have to get Sam to do it." "I understand. I'll call her in the morning." Suddenly, Jackie grabbed Melissa's arm, said, "Mother, I need to talk to you," and dragged her into the hall. After a few minutes, Jackie and Melissa returned to the room. Melissa said, "We've discussed it, and I've decided to let Jackie try your new formula." Elaine looked at Jackie suspiciously. "Did she force you to make that decision?" "No, hun, she's no longer capable of that and she knows it." "But-" Melissa held up her hand. "I'll tell you why I decided as I did, after you've given her the formula, or after it's been determined that it is not possible to give her the formula. For now, let's just say that I couldn't be prouder of my little girl." "Well, okay. Come on, Jackie. Let's get you tested." Elaine took Jackie to her lab, took some blood samples, and ran her tests on them. Melissa seemed a little disappointed when it turned out that Jackie could be used as a test subject, but refused to comment on it. Elaine then told Jackie, "I know you want to do this, but I think I should warn you. If you do this, we're going to need to test this in action." "In action?" "You're going to have to use your new vagina in a sexual way. You're going to have to let someone fuck you." "Oh, is that all?" "You don't have a problem with that?" "Why should I? I mean I accept dicks up my ass all the time now. Hell, I've even learned to like that. I can't see having a cunt as being all that different." Elaine rubbed Jackie's head in an affectionate way. "It'll take about an hour to brew up the proper formulae. Then I'll be back." An hour later, Elaine returned with the yellow mixture. "Are you sure you want to do this? That you're ready for it?" "Well, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a little afraid. But, yes, I'm ready." "Okay." Elaine handed Jackie the mixture, which she quickly drank down. Jackie grew sleepy, and Elaine stretched her out on the bed. Then Elaine went out and asked Melissa, "Okay, how did she convince you to change your mind?" "She just pointed something out to me." "What's that?" "You're my wife, right?" "Of course." "Well, if Jacqueline is my daughter, what does that make her to you?" Elaine just stopped cold. "That... would make her..." "Your daughter as well. Even though we both know you haven't accepted her as such yet. She simply pointed out to me that you need to know that she'd do anything for you." Melissa put her hand on Elaine's arm. "She wants you to be her mother, too." Elaine looked back to the room where Jackie was undergoing her latest transformation. She turned back to Melissa. "Jack's really gone, isn't he?" "Has been for quite some time, love. I'm not sure he even had the strength to survive the transformation he knew would be permanent. You were just too caught up in your hate to notice it." "And I've been so hard on her. Now I feel so ashamed." Melissa kissed her lover on the cheek. "It's okay, hun. Jackie understood. She told me she's been looking for a chance to do something like this for you for quite some time. After that, I just couldn't say no to her." Elaine felt chagrined, but realized she now had a daughter who she needed to take care of. *************** THE NEXT MORNING... Jackie woke up and stretched. At some point after she had passed out last night, someone had put her into a night gown. Which was somewhat lucky, since her entire body seemed alive and tender. She quickly remembered the night before, and her hand shot down to her crotch. The first thing she noticed was that her balls were gone. Then she felt it, the moist slit that was the reason why she had taken the formula in the first place. She slid her finger in and wiggled it around a bit, almost instantly being hit by a wave of pleasure. She inserted a second, then a third finger into her new cunt, but even that proved to be not enough. She reached over to the end table by her bed and pulled out the vibrator she kept there. She turned it on and slid it into her cunt. She moved it in and out of her cunt in slow, circular motions. It didn't take long before she was cumming wildly, her hips bucking against the dildo in a way they never had while getting a good ass reaming. Then, from the doorway, she heard, "Well, at least I know it's pleasant using your new cunt." Jackie saw who it was and blushed crimson. "Good morning, Mistress." "Mother." "Pardon?" Elaine walked over to the bed and sat beside Jackie. "Melissa told me why you felt you had to do this for me. I want you to know it's okay for you to call me mother." Tears of joy came to Jackie's eyes. She threw her arms around Elaine and said, "Thank you, mother." Elaine hugged Jackie. Then she picked up the vibrator and said, "I didn't know you kept one of these by your bed." Jackie blushed crimson again. "Only Elizabeth does. I mentioned that there were times when I was getting overly excited and there was nobody available, so she got me a small batch of these to play with." "But why didn't you tell anyone?" "I guess I was ashamed." "No need for that. I don't think there's anyone in the house who doesn't have at least a couple of these. Now, on to other things. Who do you want to fuck you first?" "Could you do it?" "No, hun. I need to keep separate, until we've tested it out. I can be number two, but you've got to choose someone else for number one." "Well, there is someone, but I'm not sure how he'll feel about it." "He? Who?" Jackie told her who she wanted and why. Elaine smiled. "Good choice. He's already here. I'll go talk to him. But if I can't talk him into it, who would you like as second choice?" "Uhm, Linda. I want to feel her big cock inside me." "Okay." "Mom?" "Yes?" "How... functional is my cunt? I mean, can I have a baby?" "Well, you've got a womb now, of sorts, but you don't produce eggs. You would also need some serious chemical help to produce an endometrium capable of supporting a baby, but it could theoretically be possible for you to allow a zygote to be implanted in you and for it to develop normally. Why? Planning on having a baby any time soon?" Jackie giggled. "No, I was just wondering about birth control." "Well, a condom should always be used if you have sex with anyone outside the household. I can cure any STDs, but not without a bit of suffering on your part. Any other questions?" "Yeah. I was wondering, am I really 14 again? Can you really reverse my age?" Elaine got a sad look on her face. "Not quite. Externally, you're 14. Internally, you're still a senior citizen. Now with my biochemical know how, I can extend your lifespan to your early hundreds, maybe more, but you should still only expect another 30-40 years of life." "Oh. I was kinda hoping..." "That I could reverse your age, so you'd live another 60-80 years? Sorry, can't do that yet. But I am working on it." Jackie gave her a weak smile. "Well, you better get going if we're going to get this done soon." "One other thing." "Yes?" "I'd like to video tape this. I can turn on the security cameras, so you wont have to worry about having a camera in the room that you can see, but I'd like a hard copy of this to review later." "Okay." "No problems with that?" "Nope." Elaine kissed Jackie's head, then went to the parlor where Melissa, Susan, Elizabeth, Linda, Sam, and James were waiting. A very hopeful Sam asked, "Well, did it work?" "She's got a cunt. She's already masturbated herself to orgasm once. Now she just needs the right person to fuck her." "Who's she chosen?" "She wants her big brother to fuck her." James said, "Am I missing something? Dad's an only child, isn't he?" "Jack may have been an only child, but Jacqueline is your mother's daughter, James. Which makes her your sister." "He wants me to fuck him?" "She wants you to fuck her, James. Jack's long gone. It took me a while to realize that. You need to, too." "But... why me?" "Well, Jackie's noticed that every time you visit us, your sexual "dance card" is always filled. Even those of us who prefer only females such as myself or Elizabeth are willing to share a bed with you." "Did you tell her about my "relationship" with Tracie?" "No. That's your business. The question is, are you willing to service your sister?" "I don't know." "James, all I'm asking is that you go in there and let your empathy loose. If, after that, you still don't feel you can do it, we'll all understand." "Okay." James got up and went upstairs. He entered the room and saw Jackie in her nightgown. James "opened up" allowing his empathy to tell him what Jackie was feeling by letting him feel it in his own body. He felt excitement, desire, some fear, and just a touch of sadness. "Hello, Jacqueline." "James. Would you... join me?" It only took a few seconds for him to realize he would. He walked over to the bed and sat facing Jackie. He leaned forward while pulling her to him, and kissed her. As they kissed, James slid his hand under Jackie's nightgown, and pulled it from her body. Jackie reached up and started to unbutton James' shirt. As she pulled it from his body, they kissed again, and, as soon as his hands were free, they found her tits and started to gently knead and fondle them. They continued to kiss as Jackie moved her hands down his body until they found and undid the snap on his pants. James lifted his ass and allowed his sister (finally able to think of her like that) to slide his pants and underwear down. James sat back down, and kicked his pants and underwear off. He slid onto the bed, and pulled Jackie close. They held each other as they kissed. Then Jack proceeded to kiss his way down her body, kissing her neck, tits, abs, briefly sucking her dick, before moving on and kissing her cunt. He slowly licked and sucked her until she was bucking wildly against his face. "Oh, James," she begged, "stick it in me. Fuck me, now." James lifted up, his face wet with her cunt juices. "Your wish is my command." He kissed his way back up her body, until they were face to face. Jackie reached down and slowly guided James into her. James continued to push into her until their pelvises touched. James waited until she grew accustomed to the intruder now in her body. After a few seconds, she looked up at him with an idyllic look in her eyes. "That's so... nice." "You ready for some more?" "Oh, yeah." James couldn't help but smile at her exuberance. He slowly started to pump into her, using his empathy to stroke and touch her in just the right ways. It wasn't long before Jackie was floating above her body in a storm of ecstasy, as she had on her first day of her return as Jackie. But this time, she was floating without having reached orgasm yet! And when she finally did, the effect was explosive. She suddenly felt detached from the universe itself, apart and above it all. Finally she felt drawn back to her body. She opened her eyes to see a very concerned James looking down on her. "Jackie, you okay?" Almost breathless, Jackie whispered, "Wow." "Don't scare me like that. You were out cold for a few minutes." James helped Jackie to a sitting position. She said, "With a performance like that, it's no wonder all the girls like being with you." "So I take it, you like your new cunt?" "Yeah, I do." Suddenly James felt a spike of depression wash over him. "What's wrong?" "Wrong? What makes you think anything's wrong?" James thought about how to explain it. He finally decided on a course of action, and said, "Watch." He closed his eyes and brought forth Tracie. When he opened his eyes, Jackie was staring at him dumbfounded. "Well?" he asked. "How?" "A few years ago, before we were married, Sam and I had a fight. She then went to Elaine and had me transformed into Tracie. The intent was to give Sam the ability to transform me at will, so that I would become beholden to her as we tried to do to you a couple years ago. But something happened, and Tracie and I... merged. Now, I control the transformation, and can be Tracie," he shifted back, "or James, at will." "But why are you showing me this now?" "Because a female form wasn't the only thing I got out of the transformation. I also got a psychic empathy, and I can feel the depression roll off of you. Are you having problems accepting your new cunt?" "No, that's not it." "Then what?" Jackie looked into his eyes, the tears welling up. She finally broke down into tears and told him what Elaine had told her about her internal age. "I see your problem. What does mom think?" "She doesn't know about our... problem." "She doesn't know?! You haven't told her even after a half century together?" "And what have you told Sam? You two have a better relationship than your mother and I ever did. Even as a mother/daughter relationship." "Touché." James hugged his sister to him. "I think we should tell them together." Jackie nodded. "I'll get them." James went over to the intercom and called for Sam, Melissa, and Elaine. They quickly came in, escorted by Elizabeth and Susan. "Well," Sam asked, "does everything work like it's supposed to?" "The good news is that Jacqueline's cunt seems to be perfectly normal in all respects." Elaine said, "From that phrasing, I assume there's bad news?" "Yeah, but it's... family stuff. Elizabeth, Susan, could you please leave. I'm sorry to exclude you, but this is really private stuff." "Sure, hun," Susan said, as she escorted her wife from the room. After they had left, Melissa said, "Okay, son, you're scaring me. What's going on?" "It's something dad told me on my eighteenth birthday. He never told you because he didn't know how. And after spending the last three years not knowing how to tell Sam, I can sympathize." Sam said, "Okay, now you're scaring me." "Elaine, you told Jackie how, even though she looked 14, internally she's still a 65 year old man?" "Yes, but she should live out a normal existence. Even longer with some biochemical assistance from me." Jackie said, "The problem is, the male members of our family die early. No man in our family has ever lived past the age of 74. And most don't even make it out of their sixties." Melissa said, "Oh, god," and ran to her daughter. She held Jackie close and said, "Elaine, isn't there anything you can do?" "I... I don't know." She walked over to sit beside Jackie. "But I swear to do everything I can for you, Jackie." James staggered. "No offense, but the depression in here is getting overwhelming. I gotta go. Elaine, I'll keep in touch." As the young couple walked out, Elaine said, "Sam, if you still want a vagina, let me know. I'll have a batch brewed up for later tonight. You'll have a 14 hour sleep after taking it." Sam nodded, and took her husband's arm and walked from the room. After James and Sam had left, Jackie broke down in tears. "It's not fair," she sobbed. "I finally find a life worth living, and now it's going to be taken from me." Melissa just held her daughter. Elaine hugged the two of them. "Not if I can help it." In their car, on the way home, while driving, James said, "Sam, I wouldn't have to be an empath to notice that you're upset. Care to talk about it?" "Not really." "Come on, hun. You know that when you're upset, it affects me. If you don't talk about it, all you're doing is causing us both unnecessary grief." Sam sighed. "Alright. It's just that I feel cheated. I don't want to lose you, James." "And I don't want to be lost. But my death is still years away. Think about how Jackie must feel." "Don't get me wrong, James. I'm sorry for her, too. But right now, all I can think of is the fact that I thought we'd have another 60 to 80 years together. Instead, I find out we'll be lucky to have a half-century together." James didn't know what to say, and just pulled his wife close to him. TO BE CONTINUED...? ************* Alright, readers, you may be wondering why I decided to almost conclude the story this way. The fact of the matter is I made Jack out to be a real scum ball and wasn't sure whether or not he had quite earned the life of Jackie. Right now, I'm leaning towards survival, but I'm a big fan of happy endings. So I wanted your opinion. Has Jack earned his new life? Why, or why not? Also, if not, what could he (she) do to earn his (her) survival? I'll wait a few days before writing the epilogue to this story to get your responses. Thanks. 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