Message-ID: <592eli$9704191821@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: Path: qz!news.accessus.net!not-for-mail X-Path-Preload: news.accessus.net preloaded to thwart rogue canceller there Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: From: Nostrumo Subject: ASSTG/ASS [NEW] A Change of Direction Part 18/22 (Magic, TG) Hi. I post this for the authors benefit and because I think it should be here. As usual I DIDN'T write this story and haven't any claim on it. If you have some usefull hints or some good coments, your mail is then welcome. Flames, you know, they will be piped to /dev/null. If you are an author and wish to remain anonymouns or just try to avoid the replies to your work. I offer you the chance of posting your stories and collecting the response for you. This offer only stands for story postings and for nothing else. Enjoy the story. Ciao Nostrumo >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> cut here with a sharp knife <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< A Change of Direction: An Alternative Ending to Mike Allegretto's Change of Pace 1997 by Tigger Based upon and derived from the situations and characters developed by Mike Allegretto and Caitlin B. in their collaborative story, "A Change of Pace", posted 2/16/97 on ASSTG. Written and published with the express permission of the original authors. No archiving or redistribution of this work is permitted without this copyright attribution included, intact and complete, in the posting/archiving. Archiving/publication of this author's work on any system that requires payment in any form is prohibited by the author and is in violation of my copyright to Chapters 7 and beyond. The following is a work of erotic fiction. It is intended for the entertainment of mature, legally adult individuals living in areas where the possession and enjoyment of such material is legal. If you are not legally an adult, or if such material is not legal in your locale, then you are violating a trust as well as the law. Please leave now. The first three characters of my reply to address are random as a result of the vicious email spam I have been subjected to since I began posting. Please reply to tigger@alices.com. A Change of Direction Chapter 24 Christmas Break at last, thought Jacqui, as she happily moved toward the bus stop. Marcus was home and she was ready for him. Now, if he'd just pass her teensie little test, she was going to make him a very lucky and very happy young man. Excerpt from the Journal of Miss Jacqui Donovan 1 Year 4 Months 21 days A. T. I am really ashamed of myself. My little test of Marcus went just as I had dreamed it would and now I feel bad that I ever doubted him in the slightest. Jealousy is not a productive emotion. I do not like the way it feels. So, what did I do? I tempted him and I teased him - quite outrageously. In disguise. I used my shape shifting ability to become a red haired sex bomb. Think of a cross between Geena Davis and Pamela Anderson Lee. I thought about doing Scully for sentimental reasons, but in the end, I discarded that idea for all the obvious reasons. Marcus was waiting for me at the student union at my college here in town. At the last moment, I called and told him I had gotten tied up with my advisor and would be late. Then I showed up in my little disguise and tried to entice him into a little indiscretion. He was wonderful. Polite, but not encouraging. Friendly, but just a bit distant. I know I was hot - I had almost every guy in the room trying to figure out how to hit on me, but my Marcus just smiled and excused himself to leave. I felt like a rat. I was *very* nice to him when I did see him as myself to make it up to him. Even if he did not know who the redhead was. At first, he was hesitant to make love to my ass. He worried that I was only offering to give him my ass because I felt "guilty" about wanting to keep my virginity. I never appreciated before this how very hard it is for a woman to rape a man, and it is particularly to rape a man using your butt. But I tried. It was pretty funny, actually, and that is what finally did him in. He figured if I could laugh, I was really enjoying it. It took a little doing (and a LOT of grease), but we finally did it. I showed him the book Bronwyn gave me (no, I did not tell him where I got it. I did not tell him that I'd been practicing, either.) and we spent the afternoon trying out a few positions. I particularly like the one where we are face to face with me on the bottom and my hips are riding up on his thighs a bit. In that position, his pubic bone glides up and down the length of my clit whenever he strokes in and out. Yeeeee haaaaaa! I also like the book's recommended cleansing ritual after each time we make love that way. The one where I see to it that his penis is properly and *thoroughly* cleaned? As I think I have said in this journal before, I *love* teasing him. Amazing what you can do to even a very tired cock with nice soapy hands and a gentle touch. For all that, I think we will be working on his oral skills for next couple of days. We seem to have overdone, today. Sitting is a constant reminder of today's adventures. And I don't even want to *think* about having to go to the bathroom. End Journal Entry ***************** In late January, the two young people bid each other a sad farewell and returned to their respective colleges for the start of their Spring Term studies. Jacqui, however, also had another course of study that was also going to demand her attention, as well. Bronwyn had left San Bernardino on some type of business trip right after the New Year, but not before she had made the girl a promise. Sensitive to Jacqui's new sexual experience and her heightened self awareness, Bronwyn and Laurie had decided that it was finally time to begin teaching Jacqui the fundamentals of the Transformation Spell. Unfortunately, before they could begin the training, the trip to Texas had come up. Jacqui was in class that afternoon in early February when Bronwyn had returned to California. Laurie met her at the airport and then drove them both straight back to her house. "How did it go with Bobbie?" Laurie asked the obviously exhausted Bronwyn once they were on the Freeway. Her head resting against the seat and her eyes closed, Bronwyn responded. "Fine. Roberta and her unborn son are doing well, and are on track for a mid-March birth. I visited her doctor while I was in Austin, and he is pleased with the progress of the pregnancy. As to our other concern, I completed the training her Mother left undone when she died last fall. She is now fully ready to be the parent of a future member of the Sisterhood." "So she knows the Birth Rites now, and understands their importance?" "Yes. And she is knows all she needs to know about the Transformation Spell, too. I think she may have figured out the importance of nursing the child, but I did not tell her that. I just made sure she understood how important it is for children of the Sisterhood to be nursed immediately." "Jacqui will be disappointed you are so tired. I think she has a surprise planned for you." Bronwyn snorted. "I think it will have to wait until I have slept about five days." The car pulled into the drive and Bronwyn opened her eyes, surprised to be home so soon. "Hey, this is your house." "Yep. You are bushed, and in need of some serious pampering. Jacqui will see that you get it. If I took you home, you would be up too soon working on your latest suspense novel." "Its overdue." was Bronwyn's weak protest. "And a few more days won't make a difference. Now it is your choice. Go to bed on your own, or with a healer's push." Grumbling, Bronwyn got out of the car. "Since I do want to wake up in a few days, I will do it on my own. You would probably keep me asleep for week." "I wouldn't, but Jacqui would. She is much more sensitive to you than I am. She's the one who told me you would need rest. I think she is attuned to you, High Priestess." "Great. Just what I need. An overly-powerful, under- controlled novice with her psychic nose in my business." "She is pretty great, isn't she?" Laurie gushed maternally. Bronwyn nodded as she let herself be led up to bed. "Yeah, she is that. Now, if we can just keep her." Excerpt from the Journal of Miss Jacqui Donovan 1 Year 6 months 2 days A. T. I let Bronwyn wake up yesterday. Afterwards, she spent the rest of the morning sulking. (You did, too, Bronwyn. Just ask Mom). Still, the rest did wonders for her and she is back in fine form. Today, she and Mom started teaching me the Transformation Spell. Actually, if I understand what they said, they also *finished* teaching me the Transformation Spell. Which is really strange, considering it took me almost four months to get any knack at all with the shape shifting magic. I am going to write this all down, and then talk to Bronwyn and Mom from this entry afterwards. That should help me decide if I have gotten this all down. Essentially, the Transformation Spell is very simple. I can actually cast it right now - on someone else. What I cannot do with it is use it on myself. The reason for that is not a matter of lack of power, but rather, lack of self understanding and lack of control. Rather lowering to realize I don't have either yet, but Bronwyn says that I still need some very specific experiences first. Only then will I be able to turn the magic on myself and not destroy myself in the process. To start the day's learning, Mom gave me the family records to read. These are the real ones, the ones that document our family's place in the Sisterhood, the birthing of boy children and their subsequent Transformation into women. I found the entries of the two men who died trying to undo what their Mother's had done to them. The one who forced his Mother to attempt the counter spell cost her more than her child. She lost the Gift of the Goddess when he died under her spell. She had been High Priestess of the Sisterhood at the time. So, what are these "experiences" I need to go through? I don't know that, either - at least, I don't know the specifics of them. There are some things I do know. First of all, there are three of them. And I know a bit about what they are supposed to be. Bronwyn listed them for me. They are, and I think this is the order I will face them in, too, A special awakening. A special ordeal. A special re-birth. Mom and Bronwyn promised me that I will know, instinctively, when I have met all three requirements. It is just that they cannot tell me what any of the tests are before hand or the magic will not work for me. I have given my word not to turn the Transformation Spell upon myself without that mental "go- ahead". I guess the time for these experiences must be close at hand, though. They would not be teaching me this now, otherwise. One thing about Bronwyn, she does nothing without a reason. As much as I love that sexy lady, she can be one cold, calculating woman when she thinks something is important. End Journal Entry. ***************** "She wrote out just about the entire lesson word for word in her journal, Laurel. I cannot get over the powers of recall and intuition she has developed." "I know what you mean. Has she given any indication that she knows what the three experiences really entail?" "No, but I am not sure if that is because she has not speculated on what they are, or if she has an idea and does not want to face the thought of what they entail. Conception of a child is the awakening, the trauma of giving birth is the ordeal, and giving suckle to a child of her own body is the re-birth." She smiled at her friend. "We never figured it out until afterwards, did we?" her tone was meant to encourage. "*We* never did a lot of the things she has done since Transformation. Goddess, Bronwyn, if she had gotten pregnant last summer, she'd be coming into her full power now. In only eighteen months! That is incredibly fast. I can't find any record of anyone being faster." "You think she might figure the riddle out?" Bronwyn was concerned. "I don't know, Bronwyn. She may be trying not to think about it because we told her it might interfere with the magic, but you have seen how strong her intuition has gotten. I think it is very possible she may unwittingly solve it without even realizing it." "Yes, she is that bright, isn't she? Damn! Well, there is only one thing we can do now if we are going to keep our word to her. I will remove all of my inhibition spells from Marcus. In fact, I am going to give him a bit of nudge so that he thoroughly ravishes her next month when he is home on break." Thoughtfully, Laurie nodded. She no longer believed her daughter would harm a child of her own body as she had threatened to do all those many months ago. Hadn't she said as much in her journal a few months back? "Make sure he is wonderful for her, Bronwyn. It should be wonderful for a girl her first time. Please?" A feline smile lit Bronwyn's face. "Oh, he will be superb, darling. I guarantee it. He will drive her make her crazy and make her love every second of it. My word on it, darling. You have my word on it. So be it." she said in the oath of her order. "So be it." repeated Laurie, her voice choking with emotion at what they had just ordained for Jacqui. *********************** Lancaster read the copy of the doctor's report on the status of the Lawler-bitch's pregnancy. It pleased him. All was normal and she would deliver in the next week to two weeks. His Investigations Chief had been particularly thorough with this one. Members of the Brotherhood now worked at the hospital she would be taken to for the birth. They would alert the action team and help them stage themselves for the abduction. Soon, he thought. Very soon and I will understand something that is key to the survival of the Sisterhood. When I understand that, I can take action against it, hopefully crippling that weak gaggle of weakling men-made-women. All he had to do was wait patiently a while longer and he would learn what he needed to know to destroy the Sisterhood once and for all time. Anticipation had a lovely taste. he thought, especially the anticipation of blood. ~----------~ Continued in Part 19 I cannot email from this account, but I do verify Deja News has my posts on a regular basis. 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