Message-ID: <483eli$9704111102@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded X-Story-Submission: From: Shelby Bush Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 9/9 Brenda - A Love Story [ M/f f/f ] by Tom Bombadil (c) Aug 1996 Chapter 9 of 9 Disclaimer: All the standard rules apply. If you are offended by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this text from your computer. This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions described by me coming straight out of my imagination. As a work of fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or relatives. You've been warned. In this chapter - pop goes the cherry ********************************************************************** Brenda was already there when Richard arrived, stripped and under the covers, the wine and glasses placed on the nightstand. "My, aren't we the eager beaver. A body would think you were anxious or something." She just smiled her cute, innocent, little-girl smile at him. "Who, me?" Seeing him put a tube of something on the nightstand, she asked what it was. "It's K-Y jelly. It's a lubricant. I think we should use some this first time because you are a virgin and you will be very tight. It might mean less discomfort for you." "Have you ever, uh, done a virgin before?" "Once, when I was much younger. It was messy, painful, and very unsatisfying for both of us. I think I've learned a lot since then." "Will it hurt much?" "If we do it right, not much, and not for long. You'll feel it, but might not care about the pain." "How do you know, if you've only ever done one before?" "Virgins are a rather scarce commodity, usually disappearing between fourteen and eighteen. I normally prefer ladies a little older than that, present company excepted. I learn by reading stories and journals and by listening to guys and girls talking about their first time. Very few of the girls are really happy about how they had their cherries popped. But don't worry. I think this will be memorable, for both of us." During their talk, he had stripped nude, poured two glasses of wine, and climbed into bed. Fluffing up a pillow, he put it behind him and sat up against the headboard. Pulling her up to sit on his lap with her back to his chest, he handed her one of the glasses of wine and took the other for himself. "Sip it slowly. Take your time. We've got all night." He began to gently caress her body, her thighs, the tops of her legs, her belly, and finally her chest and breasts. They were small, probably an 'A' cup, but very firm, with puffy quarter-sized aureoles topped with little-girl nipples, which were getting very hard. Very gently he massaged her breasts, touching and toying with her nipples, playing with them with the tips of his fingers. He was also nuzzling her hair and occasionally kissing her neck and shoulders. She smelled wonderful, and the feel of her soft skin was like that of fine silk, sensuous and supple. Her naked bottom and back, pressing against his balls and cock, were having the desired effect as well. He was now quite stiff. The two glasses of wine earlier and the one she was drinking now were doing their job, reducing her apprehension and nervousness. She was still a touch scared, but knew she wanted it and was relaxing now that she knew it would happen. It helped knowing Richard was willing to take his time and make it good for her. His touching and kissing also felt really nice. Getting her to slide down a little and spread her legs out on either side of his, he began to tease her pussy. This had more of an effect on her. Gulping the rest of her wine, she went to grab at his cock. Letting her do this, he put both glasses back on the nightstand. There wasn't much she could do, holding his cock behind her back, but the touch of her hands was nice and cool on his overheated member. Soon he was more serious about playing with her pussy, running his fingers up and down the outside of her cleft, along the edges of her lips, and down the furrow between pussy and thigh. He alternated between toying with her nipples and massaging her breasts with his other hand. Now she let go of his cock and melted back into him, breathing faster, rubbing her own legs and inner thighs to counterpoint his fingers. Delving into her slot, he lubricated one, then two, then three fingers with her fluids. They began to slide up and down inside her cleft, sometimes touching her anus, or sliding over her hole, or brushing against her clit. Each of these brought a fresh gasp from her, making her breathe faster, almost to the point of panting. He could feel little shivers and ripples running over her stomach, down her back, and along her legs. Letting out a long groan of pleasure, she arched her back and twisted around to kiss him hard on the lips, pushing her tongue into her lover's mouth and letting him taste her. Whimpering, she released his mouth and slid a little farther down his lap, arching up her hips and pulling back her knees so her legs pointed out almost sideways to his. Now her hands were rubbing her inner thighs, just outside her pussy lips, occasionally sliding down to fondle her own ass, grabbing and releasing her cheeks. Sweat was beginning to bead up on her lip, her forehead, her chest. He let the tip of one finger slide into her hole, causing her to gasp and whine, speeding up her hands. When he pulled his fingers away from her slot, she whined and whimpered. He made her suck and lick every finger clean before he started again. This time he wasn't going to stop until she climaxed, her first for the night. Her juices were flowing freely. He was startled by how much she produced, considering that she was a thirteen year old virgin. Lubing up the fingers of both hands, he began a slow fuck with the tip of one finger. Placing the middle finger of his other hand into her slot and the adjacent fingers outside on either side, he used them to rub and fondle her lips, clit, and other sensitive spots. It wasn't long before she was gasping for air, rubbing furiously on her inner thighs with both hands, almost touching his hands inside her pussy. She came then, with a long indrawn breath and a shuddering exhalation. There was very little movement, but he could feel her muscles spasming from her neck to her ass, and could see her thighs and calves tensing and releasing as waves of pleasure washed through her body. It looked to be a long, gentle climax, extended by his continued attention to her hole and her clit. Her hands had stopped and grabbed her ass, pulling her hips up higher and giving him better access to (and a really good look at) her whole cunt. After several deep breaths followed by long, whiney exhales, she grabbed his hands to stop his movements. She was done, for now. "Did you enjoy that?" "You always do me good. Lots better than I do me." "I'm glad. Just relax and feel good for a while." Leaving his finger inside her hole, he removed his other hand and cupped her pussy with the first one. She sighed and relaxed her legs together a little, letting her arms drop to the bed. He kissed the top of her head and hugged her. Eventually she rolled over and kissed him. "Is it time yet?" "Nope. You're gonna do me now." "But I want you to come inside me!" "Don't worry. Once I get inside that wonderful pussy of yours, I'll fill you so full it'll come out your ears. Besides, if I tried to do it right now, I'd probably squirt before you were half-way done. My balls need to be drained a bit so I don't cum too soon." "Okay, if you say so. But if you don't do it right tonight, I'll be mad!" " Yes, dear." Brenda laughed at this, hearing him talk like an old married man, like her dad did sometimes when her mom was being bossy. She did a wonderful job on him, using hands, mouth, tongue and lips, teasing him, tickling and playing with his balls, running up and down his member with her tongue, nibbling with her lips, sometimes sucking him right down her throat, bringing him to the edge several times before finally letting him cum. She pulled off at the last second and watched him erupt all over her tits and belly, sucking him back into her mouth to catch the last dribbles, draining him until he groaned in protest. Lying down beside him, she used his finger to play in the little puddles and rivulets of semen on her body, sometimes cleaning it with her mouth, sometimes making him clean it with his tongue. When it got cool enough to be noticed, she wiped herself clean with one of the towels. "Nice?" "Better than when I do it, that's for certain. You sure you haven't had any practice before me?" "Nope. None. I'm just a fast learner." "Well, you're already the best at that I've ever had, and you're still learning? God help me when you get to be really good." "Won't be nobody savin' ya from me, 'cause this thing's all mine!" She gave it a squeeze and a few strokes for good measure, and got a moan of protest from Richard. "Is it time yet?" "Aren't you impatient. We'll get there. First, let's get things arranged." Standing her up, he put some towels on the bed where she would be lying. Using the K-Y, he greased up his member and put a generous amount on the far corner of one of the towels for later use. After explaining what he was doing to Brenda, she jumped onto the bed, positioning herself carefully on the towels. When Richard when to turn her a little, she resisted, saying it felt right, just where she was. He wasn't about to argue. Lying down beside her, they kissed, and he began playing with her breasts and nipples again. Excited as she was, it wasn't long before she was hot and breathing hard. Moving down a little he sucked and tongued her breasts, pulling them almost entirely into his mouth and playing with the tips of her nipples, swishing them back and forth. Knowing what would be coming made her so hot, she almost came again right there. That mouth moved down her stomach, slowly licking and nibbling its way, through her belly-button and down to her vulva. Repositioning himself between her legs, he pressed her knees up and out, giving himself full access to her innermost parts. She tasted good right now, her juices flowing nicely. He used his tongue to push her fluids all over the inside of her slot, from her anus to the top of her mound. Then he used his tongue to tease and tantalize, running the tip up and down inside her, just missing her clit and her hole. Suddenly he plunged it deep inside her, until the tip of his tongue could just touch her hymen, then wiggled it to tickle her there. This made her jump and gasp. Her hips were now thrusting upwards, trying to get him deeper inside Pulling out just as quickly, he returned attention to her clit, licking his way there, and then all around it without giving her the satisfaction of touching it. When he figured she was nearing her peak, he scooped up a fingerful of K-Y and touched it to her hole. The sudden chill brought another gasp and a deep, full-body shiver. Her hip-thrusting resumed when he started sliding his finger into her hole, lubricating it with the jelly. When he pulled up to kneel in front of her, she looked up at him. "Now? You're gonna do it now?" "Yep." "Oh god, yes! Do me! Shove it inside, please! I want it NOW! Come on, bust me open! Come ON! FUCK MEEEEE!" Pulling her knees up beside her chest, she was now completely open to him. Lowering himself to his elbows, he kissed her once, quickly, on the lips. Holding himself on knees and one elbow, he positioned the head of his cock at the entrance to her vagina. Just that faint touch sent shivers all through him, and through her. There was no need for any further lubrication, with her juices flowing freely and all the K-Y he used. He was in heaven. Taking deep, almost gasping breaths, he tried to relax a little so he could take his time and do it right. Pushing slowly but steadily, he began to open her up. Her eyes were open wide, staring sightlessly at the ceiling. Her entire world was centered upon her hole, where that huge cock was trying to get in. She could feel it pushing, stretching her, moving things around inside. His thing felt monstrous. For a few seconds she thought it would tear her wide open. But she had to have it inside her now, no matter what! Grunting and panting, she wiggled her hips to try and help that thing get inside her. Every tiny move and push filled her up more, stretched her farther, until finally the head popped inside. Both gasped at the same time, her from the sudden filling and stretching sensations, him from the unbelievable tightness and the silky smoothness of her vaginal walls. It was fantastic! He wanted to just pound into her, it felt that good. Breathing deeply, he relaxed again. He waited there for a while, watching her face, waiting for her to get used to the incredible feeling of fullness she had. It was several minutes before she was comfortable again, before the tightness and stretching stopped. It felt huge in there, but didn't hurt. There was an ache, but it was deep inside, the ache of wanting to be completely filled - and she wanted it now! Wiggling her hips and pumping them up and down gave Richard the signal to continue. He pushed in another quarter inch, causing them both to gasp again. "Oh, oh, that feels so gooood! You're so huge in there! Ohhhh, yes, put some more in, please! Fill me up!" He was a bit surprised at her vocal display, but not much. He shrugged it off. He certainly wasn't going to stop. What he didn't know was that this was more for their audience's benefit. There were two sets of eyes peering through the doorway, watching intently. Her loud cries when he was just going to start were their signal that it was happening. Following orders, Caitlin had oiled the hinges and handle, tightened all the screws, and practiced opening and closing his door until she could do it with no noise whatsoever. Brenda had positioned herself so the doorway got a three-quarter rear view of their activities, giving them an excellent ring-side seat. Both sets of eyes were wide open, mesmerized by the action in front of them, and both their jaws were open and slack. It was a sight they never believed they'd ever see, the deflowering of a virgin. A little at a time, he pushed in until he touched her hymen, that small flap of tissue that was so important to a young lady. Stopping and letting her get adjusted every time he pushed, she was opening up nicely and really enjoying this. "Oh, oh, oh, it feels sooooo gooood in there! No wonder mom does it so much! Ahhhhaiiiiiii, yesssssss!" Still fighting his urge to just ram it home, he pulled out until the head was just inside, then slid in until the head was touching her hymen again, repeating this for a few minutes. He stopped and left his cock resting against her hymen when it looked like she was about to cum, giving her time to come down a bit. It felt so tight and so silky smooth inside he needed to stop and rest too, or he would blow his nut early, spoiling everything. Maybe one blowjob wasn't enough for this. When they both calmed down a little, he gave a sudden lunge, surprising her and bursting through her virginity. "Ow! That hurt!" "Let me know when you feel better, I'll start moving inside you again. By the way, congratulations. You're not a virgin anymore." "Ooooo, I bet you say that to all the girls. Come on, start moving, I wanna fuck!" Moving slowly and carefully, he pulled back a little then moved forward again, pushing a little deeper each time. He saw the little winces of pain on her face, but each time he stopped, she said "No! Don't you dare stop! It feels too good! Give me more! Fill me up!" He kept at it until he was balls-deep inside her and was bumping up against her cervix with each thrust. He began to lengthen his stroke, concentrating hard on what he was doing, because if he lost his focus, he'd just jam his prick in her a couple of times and blow his wad deep inside. He really, really wanted her to cum first, but the feel of that tight virgin cunt on his cock was so fantastic it was very hard to hold back. She was in heaven. That was what fucking was all about, that feeling of utter fullness, of being filled over and over again, feeling him open her up, feeling his cock moving back and forth in there, bringing out sensations she never knew existed. There was still a little pain, but it was lost under the overwhelming tide of passion. Closing her eyes, she just gave in to the pleasure of having him fucking her, pushing up with her hips to meet his every downstroke. "Yes! Fuck me, ohh, fuck me, ohh yes, fuck me, pump me, fill me, ohh, don't ever stop, please, keep going, never stop, ohhh, it feels soooo gooood!" She was panting now, saying something with every second breath, not caring or thinking of her audience, just about getting filled and cumming. It was so close, she could taste it. It was Richard's turn. "Oh god, I'm gonna do it! I'm gonna cum in you! I'll fill you so full! Gohd yes! I'm cumming ... cumming ..." It was exquisite, that feeling, spurting into that tiny tight little hole just opened up for him. Nothing mattered right then except the feel of his cock slamming home inside that warm wet slippery fuck tube. He could feel his sperm splashing in there, squishing out and around his cock and dribbling down his balls. That little extra, him slamming home and squirting inside, was enough to send her over as well, her orgasm reaching up from deep within and grabbing her whole body. It was like nothing she'd ever felt before, starting from her groin and washing through every part of her, ripping out to her fingers and toes then washing back to implode in her center again, re-igniting even stronger with every thrust and twitch of that thing inside her. It was so incredibly powerful, she almost forgot to breathe, just gasping every once in a while between jolts. Only after Richard had completely drained himself, and stopped with his cock buried to the hilt, did she finally come down again. Her vagina kept spasming around his member, causing him to groan and shudder. It was enough to keep her just on the edge, until her body calmed down. When they both were breathing almost normally again, Brenda spoke. "Oh. Wow." Richard just smiled, still supporting himself just over top of her body, leaving himself deep inside her. The feel of that incredibly tight pussy was keeping him hard and ready, even after it had drained him dry. Behind him, the door closed silently, Caitlin's practice paying off. Two sets of feet tiptoed down the hall, into her room, and closed the door silently behind them. Caitlin turned to Vicky, eyes still wide, her face a mask of shock and disbelief, whispering, "Oh my god! That was un-be-lievable!" They climbed into bed together, under the covers, whispering excitedly about what they had just witnessed. Richard wrapped Brenda up in one arm and rolled over onto his back, pulling her on top of him, keeping his still-hard organ buried inside her. He pulled a pillow over for himself, and let his lover get comfortable on top of him, sliding her legs down beside his and resting her head on her arms on top of his chest. "That was a little better than my first one." "Richard, this was my one and only, and don't you forget it! Thank you, it was wonderful. Now I know why my mom likes fucking so much. If it's like this all the time, that's all I want to do for the rest of my life." "'Fraid I can't help you on that. I can only do it four or five times a day, maybe. And I need the odd day off." "If that's all I get out of you, then I guess I'll just have to settle for sex for half my life, the morning half and the evening half. I'll sleep and eat in the middle, somewhere." "God, I think I've created a monster. The creature that ate Richard alive! Aaaauuuggggg!" " Yeah, right. Like you wouldn't enjoy it at all, would you. Ooooo this thing inside me feels soooo goooood." "Well, it's there waiting for you if you want to use it." "I'm too tired to fuck anymore tonight. But I do want to try something my mom and dad do every once in a while." "What?" "Let's get ready to sleep first and then I'll tell you!" "More secrets?" "You'll find out soon enough." They got cleaned up, Brenda trotting off to the bathroom, holding a towel to her groin, totally unconcerned that she was still naked. Richard, shaking his head, cleaned himself up as much as possible with a towel, slipped on his boxers, then cleaned up the dribbles and drops of blood on the bed. Most of them had been caught by the towels, with only a few splashes of semen left to wipe up elsewhere. About ten minutes later they were cleaned up and back in bed, this time with the light out. "Now, what's this big secret thing you want us to do." "It's something my parents do once in a while, and mom looks like she absolutely adores it, so I gotta try it too! Richard, I want you to fuck me to sleep. Stick that thing of yours inside me and pump it in and out until either you cum or fall asleep." After Richard's initial objections, saying she'd be too sore, or he'd crush her, or she'd fall off him, or whatever, she explained what she wanted and how to do it. They lay in bed, on their sides, with her back to his front, knees bent, with her 'sitting' in his lap. He rubbed his cock up and down against her slit for a few seconds to get hard (that's all it took!) then greased his cock with K-Y again. Pushing into her pussy from the rear, it felt even tighter than before. She whimpered a bit at the first push, but then started wiggling and thrusting her hips to get him inside. Inch by inch his cock slid in. She was still full of his semen and a little of her blood, and she was once again producing lots of her own juice, so he went in fairly easily. There was a little pain when his cock crossed the remnants of her hymen, but she ignored it. This was just too good to stop. That wonderful stuffed feeling was back, and she never wanted to be empty again. The sensations his cock was sending to his brain were incredible. Each tiny thrust and wiggle of her hips pushed him deeper into that extremely tight just-opened cunt of hers. It was so smooth and silky in there, like no other pussy he'd ever been in. She was hot and wet. He could feel her juices leaking out around his cock, covering her ass and his balls. Finally his penetration was halted, as deep as he could get, with the end of his cock pressing firmly against her cervix. "Stop. Just ... just hold it in there for now. I like it in me like this, filling me up. It feels huge, but so nice. Hold me now, hug me close. Please Richard. I want to be right here in your arms when I wake up. With your cock in me." "If I can, I will. No guarantees, but I'll try." Sliding one arm under her head and her pillow, he wrapped the other around her torso, placing his hand on her chest between her breasts. She hugged his arm to her possessively, as though she would be holding it for the rest of her life. Even impaled as she was, ass in his lap, she was that much shorter than him that her head nicely fit under his chin. "Okay, start moving. Slower ... slower ... that's it ... now deeper ... a little deeper ... ouch! Not that far back, my hymen still hurts! Okay, keep going ... yeah, that feels good ... a little slower ... yeah, perfect. Just like that. Now just keep pumping 'till you cum or fall asleep." He was stroking about half-way out then all the way back in against her cervix, taking about ten seconds per stroke. He was resisting the urge to just bang away again, this being brought on by the sudden feelings of lust overtaking him, holding her naked teen body to him, his cock telling him that this was the best ever and just go for it. After a while he developed a nice, easy, relaxed pace and rhythm, close to what Brenda wanted, but not quite as long or as deep. He simply clenched his ass to push in, then relaxed to slide out. It was so effortless that way, he thought he really could do it all night. There was an end in sight, though, because the constant stimulation of her twat on his cock was driving him higher. He knew that eventually he could cum just doing that. She was enjoying herself as well, he noticed. With her 'sitting' in his lap, almost the full length of her body was pressed into him. Every once in a while he could feel different muscles in her body twitch and spasm, usually accompanied by a tiny squeak from her, and sometimes followed by her vagina grabbing his cock. The first few times that happened, he stopped and waited for her to let go, but after her impatient bum-wiggling told him to get back to work, he simply pushed through her grip. That invariably brought a long, whining sigh from her. About an hour after they started, he noticed that her muscle spasms and vaginal contractions were getting more frequent. All of a sudden her entire body convulsed once, then seized up, completely rigid, and she grabbed his arm, and his cock, in a death grip. Pushing through her clasping cunt as he was used to doing by then, he simply kept pumping. Her breathing was infrequent and gasping. After about a minute, she relaxed for a second, took a deep breath, then seized up again, throwing her head back against his chest. The third time she did it, he was worried enough that he stopped. She immediately wiggled her bum and squeaked out the words "don't stop", so he started again. Six or seven more times she did that, cumming long and deep, going completely rigid or wriggling very stiffly. Near the end, he was having to hold her tight to him, since she was jerking around enough to possibly pop right off his shaft. With several long breaths she relaxed, and whispered "don't stop" again. Her breathing evened out, becoming slower and deeper, and her grip on his arm loosened. He thought she was falling asleep, until he felt her inner muscles grab his cock. They grabbed, then released, then grabbed, then released, over and over, in time with his thrusts. 'She's milking me, for christ sake!' After all that buildup and watching her cum over and over again, it didn't take long for that familiar sensation to show up. His insides were tightening up, getting ready to fire deep inside her. He wanted it now and, apparently, so did she. He kept up that slow pace until that first jet was on its way, then he jammed his cock as far inside as it would go in one brutal thrust, shooting his seed tight against her cervix, trying to inject it straight into her womb. With each spurt he pulled half-way out then jammed home again, deep inside. Brenda's body tensed up with his first deep thrust, then seized up with the second, locked into another orgasm. Her breathing stopped after one deep gasp, not resuming until he finished pumping every drop of semen into her. When he finally finished, she started breathing again, long, deep lungfulls, catching up with her body's needs. This time when she relaxed, she melted completely, every muscle going limp. His cock was still insider her, but soft and shrunken. Even her tight pussy couldn't keep him hard forever. When he made a move to get up, thinking he should clean up, she clamped down on his arm with one hand, and reached around and grabbed his hip with the other, holding him in place, keeping his limp member inside her. She seemed completely indifferent to the semen leaking out of her pussy, covering her crotch and ass and his thighs and balls, and dripping onto the bed. She relaxed again when Richard did. He thought he heard a muffled and quiet "thank you", but wasn't really sure. She was soon asleep. Richard, tired out by his and her exertions, quickly followed. ********************************************************************** < I'm baaaaack! Did you miss me? Ouch, no fair, I wasn't looking! > < I guess I'm going to have to wrap up now. The weekend's over, and I need to return to real work tomorrow. Besides, Brenda's back from her trip and needs some, ah, *personal* attention right now. Me too. Four days alone, writing this kind of stuff, can make a guy pretty horny. Three more months before she's finished high-school, then we can come out of the closet. She lives with me full time now, ever since she turned seventeen. Mary and Will figured that if she's old enough to get married, she's old enough to shack up. Besides, she was spending more time and more nights over here than at home anyway. We've tentatively scheduled the wedding for early August, a year and a half from now. > < Oh yeah, I own this beach house now, after getting some help from her folks. With my new job, I'll have them paid back and the house free and clear in seven or eight years. It's nice joining into a booming family business. > < Caitlin moved out a couple of years ago, shacking up with some dumb twit from college. I think he's a jerk and not nearly good enough for my sister, but she likes him so I keep my mouth shut. She's twenty two now and an adult and old enough to make her own decisions. > < Vicky started dating around that time too, and now has a string of young studs hanging around her parents' place. Five eleven, fifteen years old, built and beautiful, sure of herself, mature and very much sexually active, she attracts them like flies to honey. I think she's gone overboard. She has another semi-permanent lady friend, a seventeen year old rather dowdy looking girl who's moved into Brenda's old room. It's hard on the ego of those jocks, but she keeps them all firmly in line. She can be a real bitch when she's mad. Trust me, I know. > < Now you know why I wouldn't trade my life for anyone else's. Not for any amount of cash. I have the woman of my dreams here and now, ready and willing, and we love each other. So we started a little early. So what. I'm hers for as long as she wants me, and she says that she wants me forever. > < Brenda's calling. Goodbye and goodnight. > ********************************************************************** << End of chapter 9>> <> -- +--------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `------------+ | story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us | story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us | | Archive site +--------------------+------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | \ .../assm/faq.html> /